Accent experiment - Good or Bad?

Experimenting with accents in dialogue. Not sure if I should even have an accent at ALL, but I figured I should try and get it down anyways. Critique mainly on the...

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Great movie I miss the 70´s

I just watched Tarzoon Shame of the jungle a.k.a Jungle burger it was awesome I hadn´t laughed that hard since they stopped the re runs of the Fresh prince of Bel Air and Full house. It was a sexy Sharknado it was so bad it was hilarious my type of...

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How does everyone feel about my stories?

I just found myself really curious about his lately. I'm wondering how well my stories are received. I like to think I do a pretty decent job, but I could be wrong. Is there anything in particular anyone feels I need to improve on? Is there anything...

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The First Human

The First Human In the hut They had just made it out of the rain and into the abandoned habitat. The construct was once a towering complex, now transformed into ruined stone work by the orbiting fleet of the Brotherhood. Though this was in no means...

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Startopia: The Hovel of Outer Space

Startopia: The Shack of Outer space (Working Title) Ulysses, his name is Ulysses, a human from the colonies. A graduate from the Galactic University, with degrees in...

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A Trio: Chapter One Revised

"Well, well," said the doberman girl "What do we have here? Looks like a little squirrel lady's gotten lost!" The squirrel just stood there, too nervous to say anything. The girl in front of her looked tough. She was well muscled, with very thick...

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A Trio

"Well, well," said the doberman girl "What do we have here? Looks like a little squirrel lady's gotten lost!" The squirrel just stood there, too nervous to say anything. The girl in front of her looked tough. She was well muscled, with very thick...

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House Pet

**The House Pet** by: SavageShark **Summer Morning / Opening shot of a two story house atop a hill overlooking the homes below.** Narration "This is Hill Street, a housing block like any other, and at the top Hill Street is the Hill...

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Neoteny is Monotony

April the 3rd is the day when she took off her shirt and I discovered that my dog-headed wife of twenty years had testicles for boobs. I was 19. I was married about a year before actually being born and so was "she" (if you could still call her that,...

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The Case of the Killer Queen (Part 1)

Holmes leaned forward and set the metronome into action, snapping his fingers in time to it for just a moment. He then settled back into his chair and stared across at the plump and mildly pompous creature sitting opposite him. "Pray continue. I...

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Science for the Sci-fi Writer: Dark Matter

For a while now I've been wanting to write a series of articles about the 'science' in science fiction. How things presented in sci-fi might be plausible given our current understanding, and especially things presented in science fiction that we know...

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Jacks-Tail Formally Bio-Morph-One) As of 4-20-2015

I am not in the best of moods as I ride the over used and a little unmaintained elevator to the floor I live on. The metal walls are adorned with scratched on and sprayed on graffiti and any wood trim that remains on the walls are similarly...

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