Indian Summer
I know a lot of people consider themselves to be natives of this country, and I for one will never argue against it. It doesn't matter in the long run. Knowing where you came from is great, but knowing where you're going is a far...
Sins + Virtues Part 1: His Slothful Daughter
The time on Rich's alarm clock showed 9:00 when he woke up, this was the second time that week that he was late. Ever since his wife, Molly, was promoted at her job she had to work late hours meant that there was very little time for any fun that they...
Clipped Winged Crow
And critique me, i don't bite. \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_ i've got a crow sitting on my window tapping, begging to be let in so many treat him like an angel and, god, hes a beautiful sin i've got a spider in my
Can't Keep My Eyes Off of Him (Part 1/8)
This is my first story/fic, so please be gentle when critiquing me (if you critique me, that is...i kind of hope you do!). this is just one chapter of 8. i try to update in 2 days or less, so be patient! thanks for reading!
Gwen's Test
I know my grammar sucks sometimes, so don't bother critiquing me on that. otherwise, have fun!)
Training Relief
Enjoy, and please please please critique me. \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_ the rain pelted down
Chapter 2: Nemesis
critique me please... praise me on what i did good and scorn me on what i did bad. thanks for reading and be prepared for the next chapter that i am going to call fear of the dark!_**
The Meeting
So going back to the interesting thing at hand, i hope you enjoy the story and please critique me as you see fit. **the meeting** despair... _no... nooo!_ destruction... _...
The Master and His Slave
Comments are loved but please don't critique me too hard. this story was for fun. thanks!** a young male walks into the room, seeing a young girl sitting on his bed. her skin was coffee-toned and her hair was black.
Umbro the Legendary Umbreon Chapter 1
Please critique me. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ a tragic loss so many pokemon live throughout the vast world.
The Sexual Adventures of A & J Hampton, Chapter one: Take it slow.
Comments critiquing me are encouraged, and please give this an honest vote. love, as always, a & j
Broken (Ch. 1)
You're welcome to read and critique me as you desire. (: • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • ## broken chapter one; that which i love swirling depths of silver and jade pooled restlessly in the canines eyes, as he circled his foe, tossing his head recklessly