Guardians Downfall Chapter 1 Revised
#1 of guardians downfall revised i am sorry everyone for the lack of uploads, so i have decided to release part one of guardians: downfall revised and edited, this will be a part of the final copy of the book and will showcase the revisions and editing that
A Fox in the Woods--revised and edited.
revised and edited by shayde a mohr. my master purposefully packed various items as i silently padded around the small cabin room.
A Night of Blissful Passion (2)
#4 of short stories this is the revised and edited version, i also added a little bit more to it to make sure it didnt seem as short. though i am very happy to say the one the story was made for loved it, so hopefully she'll love this version as well.
Unlikeliest of Partners - Chapter Two -
Unlikeliest of partners chapter two © cederwyn whitefurr 16th october, 2021 (revised and edited) all rights reserved.
(ZOO) - Winters Gambit -
Winter's gambit © cederwyn whitefurr, 28thseptember, 2021 (revised and edited) all rights reserved.
Think About the Job
I'm still trying to figure out my writing process and how i can best produce work; with everything going on these days it's weird, but i'm starting to find my niche hours and the times in which i can properly revise and edit stuff without absolutely hating
WITD Part 5: A Helping Hand
Thanks to my great friend leon, who is also starring in this, with revising and editing for me, because it was pretty bad before he changed a few things. xd also thanks to him for teaching me a few things about writing. ^^ of course, this isn't the end!
F. - Chapter Two
<3 revised and edited on 07/21/18 the walk home was everything but pleasant. because while the rain had stopped, the wind still pressed on, chilling the damp fox to his tiny bones. he was so angry that he had forgotten his sweater at home.
Banzai Becomes King
#1 of the lion king: a fanfiction a more revised and edited version of my previous post. any errors pointed out were corrected with some additional stuff added.
Savagery chapters 2 and 3
These chapters aren't super long, so i won't say much other than i'm getting better at revising and editing what i write (still along way to go).
Kris and Rio Part 1: Things Get Hot Trying To Cool Down
I've decided to revise and edit the story to take out some of the more out of hand or ridiculous elements i added and focus on the core storyline.
Chapter 3: The Garden
I'm obsessive over revision and editing, and tend to drop things from time to time, so i'm not very consistent. i'll try to fix that! anyway... so, the third chapter. what will happen? will there be romance?