RH3 Incoming
The massive revisions required for parts 1 and 2 were frankly embarrassing, and a hard lesson in the importance of the editing process that i won't soon forget. downside is, part 3 is taking much longer than i thought it would.
Married!
Afterwards, i'll go back through and do a major revision on the series. gotta get'em all ready for publication and such, y'know? lots of changes to be made, based on everyone's feedback! now...
The White Robe Chapter 24
There were all the revisions highlighted, and they were right where he expected them to be, but when he looked back through the revisions, there was only one revision to the values he cared about, and the history showed it as blank, as if nothing had
School's in Session
Hennessey looked up from the sodden wolf across his desk, and said to the principal "so, i think after this revision, she might pass biology".
ULEMI: Urgent Weapons Update
\*ims-106 - international medical standards - edition 106 revision september 7. 2193 anno pax de
AltDoom2
Yet another sheet with revisions of the revisions to the revisions.. signing all 7 pages and initializing all the signatures, he tossed the batch into the outbox and closed his eyes.. "sire has cracked his hoof again..
The Tale of Rikama (Working Title)
Every revision will be released here, even the finished version. this particular revision is unedited, and was not proofread. it was written solely to see how much i could do in a couple hours, and the quality of rushed work.
Red Revision
The writer pushed the door shut behind him as he walked into his apartment. He flippantly discarded his tie and tag, articles necessary for his day-to-day job. Now, though, he was free of it and thus allowed to pretend that writing was his primary...
The Party(Revised)
Ok, this is the First Yiff story I wrote, and I posted it, but under the name UberElite... I F-ing lost my password when Yahoo decided to delete my old email adress.. bastards, anyhow I made a buncha changes, and am reposting it. I have another story...
The Shrine (Revised)
In a time of myths and legends, in a time when the gods where petty and cruel... has absolutely nothing to do with this story. This is the beginning so let's start already! In a quiet secluded town just like any other town that happens to have a...
Springtime (Revision)
Mooch sat on the forest floor, back legs spread wide and back against a large tree. His tail was curled upward, concealing his tailhole. His thick, but short cock stood at full mast, exposed to the cool autumn air. Humphrey slowly walked over to him,...
Deliverance Revised
Deliverance revised the handsome little stag sighs happily as he docked his long canoe. pulling his tent and gear out and sloshing to shore with it, the nimble little cervine dropped his stuff.