Dark Heart (The Better Remake)

I didn't quite like how the older chapters were done so i'm going to redo them all and see if that works. plus i got a great idea from a friend of mine.

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Jealousy Redo

OK, I took a quick look and with a new burst of inspiration I quickly added some stuff so its not as short as it was. "Come on guys, get your heads in the game" yelled the voice over the computer speakers. Robby just sighed as his team once...

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Vengeance Rebirth: Chapter 1 Arrival

Vengeance 2 The Rebirth Chapter 1 "Arrival" "Almost done, just a little more here and a little more there" I murmur to myself as I shade in the cloves. I slowly finish it and then clean it up. After all my work, I let out a content sigh...

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Galidorous' Redo of a Day

Galidorous had just put down fourth book. Suddenly he felt dizzy. Looking outside, he could recognize the capital Warfang. One minute he saw a normal street, with dragons walking down it looking at possible stores. Then it changed to see there were...

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Trap House

Her face turned to a full blush and each time she redo a button or zipper that would become undone, the seams on her button up shirt was slowing unraveling itself from the shoulders.

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Caught in the Storm: 1 (Redo)

First story people revised, feel free to respond on any suggestions or requests. Names and places are coincidental as they are not intent on reflecting any real-world basis. Looking over this I realized that the first time was hardly worth anyone's...

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A Father and His Cub, Part 2

I was never happy with part 2, and i think i might just redo the whole thing.

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Ch1 Okami

#1 of a dream within a dream i have decided to redo my series a dream within a dream featuring my favorite character okami but i prefer it in its pdf form which i dont know how to get here so it would be cool if you go to my fa site and take a look at it.

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Desviando tora...

Lo cierto es que el siguiente capítulo, "redo" está siendo complicado y largo.

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Family Therapy: Kaina Saraivia

~** so this ritual is pretty much like a wedding ceremony and redoing it is like redoing vows except where re-confirm your emotions for your partners? **yes!** _kaina starts to blush heavily and pant..._ ms.

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The Need of a Mate

#4 of the need of a mate the need of a mate okay this is my brother's work, heartless dragon, but he allowed me to redo do this for him in an entire new way.

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Heartless Dragon 2 Weapons of War(re-edited)

I have fucked up in many ways which is why i am redoing this. please judge more this one to the other one.

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