Second Chance
(( Comic project I am working on, basically I'm looking for advice/constructive criticism on the pacing, is this interesting? Does it grab your attention? And any advice better writers might be able to give me. Sorry to have it broken up like this, but...
Blue skies, Red waters
(( Kind of a project I was working on, this was meant to be the intro. I don't write very often, and I'm sure it shows. \>,\> And when I write a story I can usually write an interesting beginning and end, but the middle. I always have trouble with the...