Comments are extremely welcome. In particular, let me know if the action stays exciting, the characters interesting, and so on.
Thanks for reading!
Chapter 21
Void Shadow grimaced, in his virtual world, as a near miss almost melted his wing...
Character Development, Military, Naval Battle, Novel, Sci-Fi, Story Series, Violence, combat, marines, plot advancement
Hi everyone! As the battle goes on, our intrepid heroes' mission gets difficult. Please comment if you like the story and let me know what you think about the pacing, action writing, characterisation, and so on :)
Also, don't worry! Porn on the way in...
Death, M/F, M/F/M, M/M, Military, Naval Battle, Novel, Science Fiction, Story Series, combat, mecha
One screen showed the fleet's positioning, hundreds of green blips of varying sizes and shapes by ship class, in constant motion, swirling in the chaos-dance of naval battle.
M/F, M/M, Military, Naval Battle, Novel, SOG, Sci-Fi, Special Operations, Story Series, Urban Warfare, combat, marines, navy
Hey everyone :) Sorry for the delay, Xmas break threw me off my game a bit, and this chapter didn't start writing itself until halfway through.
Anyway, comments and critique are very much welcome!
Chapter 23
Tenh growled, a low basso rumble...
Character Development, Death, M/F, M/F/F, M/M, Mild Romance, Military, Naval Battle, No-Yiff, Novel, Science Fiction, Story Series, Violence, Warfare, marines, navy, plot advancement
An intercepted radio broadcast from chile confirmed nemo and amphitrite's worst fears- new technology had been discovered in a gigantic naval battle somewhere in the atlantic.
Human, Near Future, Ocean, Sci-Fi, Tragedy, Wolf
A naval battle. was pretty neat to watch, really, like something out of an action vid.
Action, Adventure, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Arctic Wolf, Black Wolf, Black Wolfess, Canid, Canine, Dog, German Shepherd, Gray Wolf, Husky, Jackal, Lion, Lioness, Lupine, Machine, Mammal, Military, Mustelid, No-Yiff, Otter, Philosophy, Plot Development, Political, Robot, Sci-Fi, Science, Science Fiction, Story Progression, Third Person, Thought Provoking, Timber Wolf, Violence (Not In Yiff), War, White Wolf, White Wolfess, Wolf, Wolf Dog, Wolfess
I fought in the naval battles against the dusdolfians and i knew them. they were still humans and werewolves. this? this ain't human, nor werewolves. nay. they're demons. literal demons."
Adventure, Anthro, Depressing, Dinosaur, Dragon, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Magic, Plot Development, Raptor, Reptile, Story Progression, Werewolf, Wolf
She was rescued less than 24 hours after the biggest naval battle of the war occurred on top of her city. the wreckage, and missed shots from the battle landed atop the helpless city decimating it's population.
Dragon, Dragoness, Shark, back story, draft., scrap
The mirak had many fights in it daily, from flooding it to reenact grand naval battles of history, to beast masters fighting ferocious animals, to battles between professional fighters.
Bull, Canine, Creampie, Deep Penetration, Fantasy, Fingering, Handjob, Interspecies, M/F, Male/Female, Minotaur, Romance, Size Difference, Vaginal, Wolf
There was lots of salvage there, a massive naval battle had taken place a week before the hydra arrived. the victorious ships that were there weren't too thrilled to see us since salvaging military material wasn't exactly legal.
Human, Sci-Fi, Space, foreshadowing
He had fought in countless naval battles, seen men die, sent men to their deaths and stared unflinchingly into the face of adversity. but this was not quite the same as those times.
Action, Anthro, Character Development, Drama, Halo, Human, Sci-Fi, Starfox, Story Progression, Story Series, Suspense