Eighth Steamy Day At Hortonville High (Unofficial Entry for Bad Fanfiction Writing Contest)

Story by Diogenes Shandor- Bio Major and Cynic on SoFurry

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#8 of Bad Fanfiction Writing Contest Entries

This is for Ausfer's "Bad Fanfiction Writing Contest"

(http://www.sofurry.com/forum/view/thread?id=16169&page=100000)

(http://www.sofurry.com/groups/view?id=2808)

Its not an official entry, since the contest ended over half a year ago, but its rules are a useful muse.


One day Fluttershy walked into the Hortonville highschool locker room. He/she was very hot and sweaty from the awesome workout he/she just did. "Hmm I want to take a shower," he/she thought and walked to the shower room where the showers were so he/she could take a shower. Fluttershy had been here plenty of times not expecting anything to happen. It was just a normal locker room, and just a normal shower... or was it? Actually Fluttershy could never ever have been prepared for what was really in the shower room that day....

Gold! Everything was solid gold! Fluttershy had wandered into the legendary golden shower!

"I thought this was just a legend " said Fluttershy as The acrid smell of ammonia filled her nosils.

"Oh, its real..."

"Sonic!? What are you doing here"

"The golden shower connects all locker rooms of the wotld, with no regard to who is male and who is female." explained Sonic, as he stepped behind Fluttershy to stare at her plot.

"Oh. That's very interesting" said the the meek pony as she embarassedly shifted herself to hide her private parts.

"They say it was comissioned by the mad emperor Caligula at the very dawn of plumbing" Sonic ...who has really been spending way too much time hanging around with the Mario brothers these days; I mean seriously, why would you know a thing like that? but he's been co-starring with those plumbers in so many games recently, Super Smash Bors, Mario & Sonic at the Olympic Games, etc etc etc. and so he picks up useless pieces of trivia like this and anyway where was I... explained, never taking his eyes off of Fluttershy's plot.

"I see" replied Fluttershy meekly.

"Now let's get you cleaned up"

Sonic turned the handle of the tap and the stale urine of a thousand restrooms flowed/poured from the showerhead onto the pony and hedgehog.

Tenderly, Sonic began to massage the piss into Fluttershy's coat, rubbing it into her back, then her head and mane, then her four legs and her tail. Gradually his hands drifTrd under her tail and he began fingering the pony's pussy, rubbing her labia with his hand, then plunging two fingers into her depths while usinng his thumb to play with her clitoris and rub it with the piss that drenched them both.

"Oh Sonic!" whinnied Fluttershy, "Don't stop!"

Fluttershy moaned and whinnied as Sonic finger fucked her with super speed. When she was just about to cum though, Sonic suddenly stopped.

"Is something wrong?"

"I've gotta pee" replied sonic.

Sonic stepped up behind Fluttershy and stuck his rock hard cock inside of her pussy. He then proceeded to empty his bladder into the pony's loins.

"Oh baby!" cried Sonic as the last drops of pee exited his pecker and he began to fuck Fluttershy's waterlogged cunt, "Your cutiemark should be a toilet."

Fluttershy climaxed around Sonic's dick and a few more thrusts brought him to his own climax - his hot sticky cum mixing with the warm pee he had just pumped into the pony - he then pulled out with a wet 'pop', allowing the hot sticky mess of cum and pee to pour out of the pony's cunt. Sonic got down and sucked up as much of the mess as he could from Luttershy's cunt, as Fluttershy emptied her own bladder onto his face.

Both immensely satisfied, they turned off the urine tap, left the Golden Shower, and retired back to their own seperate locker rooms to towel off and head home.