The Lord Tiranis, An Origin, Part 3 (1st third) (an excerpt)
This is excerpt is about 1000 word of a 7,500 word chapter.
The Reignhearts, an Excerpt
This excerpt is about 2000 words of 8000 and introduces samuel, the youngest of the three as he deals with a patient who has an unusual problem.
The Lord Tiranis, An Origin, Part 2 (2nd half) (an excerpt)
This is excerpt is about 1000 word of a 8,000 word chapter.
Project_Demise - Excerpt
That's it for the excerpt. what'd you think? like i said before, i need a totally honest critique here. keep in mind, this isn't the entire chapter, but rather an excerpt from an excerpt of my book.
To The Third Power - Chapter 7 excerpt
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Before the Show
This in an excerpt from the full story; hence why it's so small, here. could use a general critique if you happen to have any. i'm just getting back into writing. this is an excerpt from a scene i'm working on.
The Anthrogyne Chronicles: Relentless
excerpt from private chronicles: doctor raja, md, fixing bureau nurse bol is unfit to contribute to the fixing bureau.
Twisted Paths: Excerpt
#1 of novel excerpts an excerpt from my first novella, twisted paths. the first in a three part fantasy series it introduces a world and several races i hope to expand upon in future writings.
"Haeroyne and Phurii" (My First)
#1 of my short excerpts ...an excerpt... . . . their eyes met in a warming silence. phurii took in everything; the deepness of her luminous eyes, the sweet smell of her black fur, the rhythmic sound of his own beating heart. everything was perfect.
[Patreon] Chapter 6 Excerpt
Read an excerpt of this chapter, below!
Flexible Survival: Fang Becomes Beta
#1 of scene excerpts an excerpt from the adult text-based survival game, flexible survival. fang, a wolf, is given the chance to become the player's beta (second-in-command), a chance which he enthusiastically takes.
Lackadaisy: Missing Linkage - Excerpt
Another one-page excerpt put together for a writer's clinic, though this one is being r...