The League - Background Info
crit - this one's trouble. if you can get past the attitude, crit has a beautiful, deserty coat of fur on her and is cute enough in the face.
First Mate Crit Is A Bugger
A shortcut through an unmapped system doesn't go to plan and james and the lion-like alien crit find themselves fighting for their lives on an inhospitable alien planet. and crit's species are consummate carnivores. chapter 2: something has gone wrong.
Under The Cherry Blossoms Part Nine
Since it still had it's coverage of fur these attacks couldn't crit. even with my high ch. things were definitely getting interesting now for our little group.
James Madford. Mechanic, Third Class
A shortcut through an unmapped system doesn't go to plan and james and the lion-like alien crit find themselves fighting for their lives on an inhospitable alien planet. and crit's species are consummate carnivores. # james madford.
Ah, la Vache !
Sur l'ã©tiquette, il y avait ã©crit : foundation changeskin, nyc, usa, betatest service .
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You'll learn more about your own writing than you could possibly realize by critting and editing other people's works, you'll figure out plenty about how plots sit together by trying to help other people develop theirs, and if someone's lost on some small
Black Swan pt 2
Would love some constructive crit. i woke up with a start, feeling another presence against me. my dreams still fresh in my mind as i find myself blushing at the thought.
mliatbhrpg ch45-48
Where he will allow an opponent to hit him with full certainty with a crit on top but in exchange his opponent will be hit for that damage in full as well.
Raven Squad Nine {The Beginning}
; ------------------------------- took quite a while to come up with this one from thin air...but...hey...here is a story. i tried doing things differently and in truth i think this one might be a great one to continue with...ill leave the crit
When Beliefs Collide
Therefore, no crits, because i know it sucks xp_
Preparations.
Comments and crits are very welcome! just dont poke fun at any spelling or grammar errors too much guys, as i say, this is being typed out just before work and i have no time to go over and correct it too much.
Morbiyus chapter 5
Mais il se mit a rire en voyait qu'il ã©tait ã©crit que certain avait un pouvoir sexuel, qu'il y avait une histoire de bien et de mauvais. en haut du papier, il y avait le nom de l'agence, â« l'agence morbiyus â». â« on est sã©rieux, mec...