Rainfall - Chapter 03
.: you may notice that i switched to the past tense, which should prove more enjoyable to read. this is all thanks to the wonderful tips from [[helixthefallen]](https://www.furaffinity.net/user/helixthefallen/), a special shoutout to him!
The New Age: Prologue
Key: italics: thoughts, quotation marks: actually said edit: changed to past tense # prologue it was the big day, and yet no one could muster up even something as small as a smile.
The New Age: Chapter 3
#4 of the new age key: italics = thoughts, quotations = words actually spoken edit: changed to past tense i hope anyone who reads this enjoys themselves, please leave any constructive criticism in the comments below.
The New Age: Chapter 2
#3 of the new age key: italics = thought, quotations = actually said edit: changed to past tense # chapter 2 my eyes widened slightly as i realized that it was the man i spoke to on the radio.
Furtasia: Thladiran Language
**past tense:** -a - the suffix 'a' attached to a root denotes the complete-tense form of a verb. **subjects:** in all cases the subject performing an action immediately precedes the verb.
Split Personality
#1 of the story of alex this is the first in a series involving my character levi and skywing i would never have been able to post this story if it weren't for draconicon he edited this story and changed the whole thing to past tense for me.
The New Age: Chapter 1
(thank you to my friend who is not a part of sofurry for helping with proofreading owo) edit: changed to past tense key: italics = thoughts, quotations = spoken # chapter 1 i sat up from the messy, broken bed
Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Destiny's Way: Chapter 8: Triumphant Returns
Before, she was trying to hold onto her hope that she could be sent home, but hearing herself talk about her mother in the past tense really hit her hard. fern was truly an orphan of time. and she went to find the only one that would understand her pain.
All Good Things
Fuck past tense anyway, this is supposed to be like you're there, or some such shit.
Presentation - Writing Style
The narrative voice is always past tense, accept in very specific situations. 1stperson writing bothers me. i also dislike jumping between too many characters. **show, don't tell** it took me forever to figure out what this means.
Gap Year: Bloodied and Battered
I guess i can drop the past tense shit, huh? i mean, who am i kidding? i've been sitting here for maybe a couple days and i doubt i'll be able to get out of this alive. jake and i are still here. you're caught up to the present.
The Desperate Hours
"don't use the past tense," the vixen shook her head, arms folded against something cold, "please... it doesn't smell right."