Year 2092

Story by somethingelse on SoFurry

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#2 of 2092

!!Abridged description of what they look like is in the world description!!

Very abridged description: regressive dna engineering made a vulture grow a tail, hands, and pelvis of a theropod. They are missing most of their internal organs and are fed a slush of nutrients, hormones, enzymes, proteins, microbes, etc. that keeps them alive.

write something about it what are your thoughts, suggestions, criticisms. please include better improved sentences and flow if you find something just doesn't sound right.

if someone wants to try drawing one of these creatures go for it. If you want to use one of these for yourself go for it. If you want reference material I have lots of it. please make a reference point back to here if you can.

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"Write and quit", number 6 quietly hissed. She sat there watching the software save to a file, slowly becoming aware that the news was on. It was droning on about some horrible thing or another that was happening outside of her small world. She turned off the noise with a sigh, swiveled around in the chair and faced the bed. She stared at, what looked like, a dessicated corpse lying on top of the covers facing her. 5's beaked head rested on a pillow staring back through lidded eyes. A long neck, wrapped in red skin, connected her head to her body. The spine continued as one fused bone to the base of the tail. A rib cage and large keel were shrink wrapped in skin, the cavity they formed was mostly empty inside. There was a necklace that passed through a hole, where a crop should have been, it was the matching half to the necklace 6 wore tucked inside her own chest cavity. The creature's lungs were molded around the ribs at the back of its ribcage. Nestled between the lungs attached firmly to the spine was the pericardial sac emitting a dull thudding rhythm as the valves of the heart within opened and closed. Muscular sacs, attached to the posterior of the lungs, pumped stale air out of the body through two short bronchial tubes on either side of the digestive tract. The left bronchial was flattened pressed into a firm pillow stopping airflow through her left lung. The outside of the rib cage was wrapped in skin with a few small arm muscles. Both arms were slender with a little muscle tone to them, each ending in three fingered hand tipped with black claws. Behind the rib cage was empty space taken up by that firm pillow. Her digestive tract ran out from between her lungs, along the bottom of the spine disappearing into the muscles at the back of the hollow pelvis. Two loose wrinkly sacks clung to the underside of her ilium. Inside these sacks were two kidneys and six ovaries divided evenly between them. They hung sideways, the left hung over the lower edge of her ilium half, dangling in the air between the pillow and her hips, the right sack overlapping it. two of the oviducts and one uterus had the distinct lumps of developing eggs. Lack of belly muscles and most organs left the long deep crevice of the pelvic bowl as hollow as her ribcage. The back and sides of the pelvis were wrapped with muscles that attached to her legs and tail. Her digitigrade legs were tucked in, knees touched the bottom of her rib cage separated by the keel. Her lower right leg extended lazily away from her body, free from the fate that befell its opposite half, sandwiched between a pillow and a mattress. The tarsus was also extended ending with a bird foot resting just off the bed in mid air, four clawed toes limply grabbing an invisible vertical pole. Her legs had some muscle but were never used for heavy lifting or running, in fact they were never really exerted much at all due to limitations of their respiratory system. Nestled between the muscular base of the tail and the swept back pubic bones was a plugged cloaca. The four inch plug seated in her vent was held in place by two soft elastic straps ending in soft padded loops that hooked over the front edge of her left and right ilium halves. 6 ran her straps under her legs on either side of her pelvis, she enjoyed the pressure they made against the vallies between the inside of her thighs and her pelvis. Black feathers covered their backs outer thighs, lower legs, arms, and all but under the base of their tails. The last few feet of her tail sported small fan of gray feathers.

6 walked around to the far side of the bed and climbed in, careful not to wake her roommate. Laying in bed with her back to 5's, 6 quietly sobbed. They were slaves under the guise of customized adoptable pets. They were purchased by "adoption agencies" who were allowed to make them work to pay off living expenses, until they were adopted. They were engineered to be as unadoptable as possible while being cheap to house and feed. Her model has a modified digestive tract that requires a special formula that keeps them fed and healthy. No fat to store excess food meant she couldn't last long without food. her sweat shop had food separators which greatly cut food costs by recycling the unused portion of the formula from urine and other bodily fluid. their cloaca didn't have any sphincters or other muscles to help keep the urine or uterine fluids from diluting the formula, or to keep it from draining while laying eggs. This may have simply been cheap and lazy engineering just like the sponge used to expand their air sacs. No voice box and only a tongue meant words were, heavily accented, soft hisses that could only be made while slowly breathing in. Besides who would adopt something that looks like a walking corpse from a horror movie. The only redeeming feature she could think of was the permanent smile caused by the natural jaw line of a turkey vulture, but even this turned to a grimace if looked at from the wrong angle. Tears dripped into her pillow as she slowly drifted off to sleep.

6 woke feeling something massaging her lady parts, she kept still with her eyes closed letting 5 massage her three ready eggs closer to her cloaca. 5 was also popping not yet shelled eggs to keep her from laying so many. 6 made a move grabbing 5's head and pulling her into a bird style French kiss, their tongues licking at each other almost as if they were fighting for dominance. 5 broke off the kiss as 6 rolled off the bed landing on her feet. 5 started towards the bathroom her egg heavy pouches swung left and right with each step she took. 6 trotted in after her, feeling a little turned on as her own egg factories bounced and slapping into each other. 5's straps were loose and lying on the floor her body was tilted forward a little with her tail raised giving 6 a good view of her small round hole spread open with a white plastic plug. 6 walked over facing 5's left side and began pushing the plug in a little then pulling it out some then back in getting a nice slow rhythm going and finally pushing it in and cupping 5's small mound in her right hand. 5 pulled 6's head close to hers and engaged in another kiss as 6 pulled the plug out of 5's tiny tail hole. 5 broke the kiss taking the plug and let 6 watch as she started leaking out of her limp muscle-less cloaca, dribbling down both sides of her swept back pubic boot. 5 took 6's head and pushed her unwashed dirty plug down her esophagus leaving a taste of formula, urine, vaginal fluids, and raw egg in her mouth. 6 kept swallowing uncontrollably as 5 wrapped the two elastic straps in opposite directions around 6's neck, just behind her head, keeping the plug from going any further. 6 closed her eyes as 5 forced her head through the hole at the front of her chest cavity. Staring out the bottom of her rib cage 6 saw three large orbs practically filling her pelvic bowl. She watched them sway to and fro while 5 roughly pulled her head and neck as far back as they could go stretching the elastic straps to bind her arms over her back. 5 undid 6's plug and started fucking her with it, pistoning that piece of plastic faster and faster until 6's hind quarters spasmed. 5 pulled the plug out and helped 6 lay down on her right side. 5 began massaging 6 slowly pushing her large eggs closer to her leaking vent. It was a slow process as the first one slowly stretched unbelievably wide then the next and finally the third. 5 then wrung out all 6's lady parts trying to drain albumen so eggs would not need to be laid later. 5 began playing with 6's shrinking pucker as she lay there bound and helpless. 6 watched 5's left hand continue to kneed, pull on, caress, and fondle her six dangling egg factories. 5's right hand slowly rubbed, tickled, traced, and carefully penetrated 6's leaking tail hole. 5 enjoyed feeling 6's hind quarters tremble as she hit her second climax hit followed by a third and then a fourth. 6 felt a small tongue penetrate her and the top of 5's wide open beak drag along the left side of her tail base. 5 loved the taste of her partner as she fucked the soft sensitive cloaca with her tongue coaxing three more tremors out of 6's body. 5 wished she could suck on 6's round hole but her mouth was not built that way. 6 watched from her strange vantage point as 5's left hand stopped fondling her egg makers and reached into her chest cavity. 5's hand squeezed 6's digestive tract like a tube of toothpaste forcing its contents out her cloaca and into 5's open beak giving her head a bath of urine, albumen, vaginal fluids, and day old formula. 5 pressed her open beak harder against 6's back side in an effort to make a better seal to drink more of her mates fluids. 5 sputtered and gaged as some of the fluids entered her windpipe burning their way down her throat. 5's head pulled out and popped up over the curve of 6's left thigh, it was a mess covered in fluids dripping to the ground. 5 was breathing heavily trying to force the liquids out the back of her respiratory system as she quickly untied 6's bonds, shoving her head back through the front of her chest and stepped in the bathtub and opened her beak and sitting down using her hind legs to balance herself upright on her tail base and pubic boot. 6 pulled a small tube off tiled bathtub wall and inserted the thin smooth tip through 5's glottis and into her trachea. 5 sucked air around the invading tube making an odd wheezing sound until it was firmly seated in her glottis. 5 compressed her air sacs one last time and felt her body begin to panic as carbon dioxide slowly built up in her lungs. 6 turned on the air instantly relieving 5's panicking. 6 started to squeeze the front of 5's right air sac while inserting two fingers in the rear. 6 grabbed at the spongy material inside pinching it between her two fingers and gently pulled it while squeezing and compressing it. slowly it made its way out the rear of the air sac and the same thing was done with the left sac. 6 stopped the air and switched it to water flushing out her juices from 5's lungs. 6 let the water flow till it flowed out the back of the air sacs splashing against 5's folded legs. 5 was drowning, she reached for the edge of the tub to steady herself as she almost blacks out and then a rush of air forces the flowing water out of her lungs. 5 turns her head, careful not to pull the choke relief tube from her mouth, watching 6 take the spongy material to the sink and wash them with disinfectant. she returns and starts feeding them back into 5's air sacs where they belong. Once 6 is convinced they are oriented correctly and the air sacs function properly she removes the tube sliding it out of 5's glottis and hanging it back up on the wall. 5 pulled 6 into the tub wrapping her arms around her friend pulling her friends large keel up the right side of her ribcage. 5 wrapped her legs around the top of 6's back pulling her in, feeling 6's pubic boot sliding over the side of her mound and tail base just behind her right buttock. 5's own pubic boot slid along the ilium sandwiched between it and the soft sensitive inner thigh of 6's right leg. 5's leaking messy cloaca was pressed into 6's right leg pit. 5 grabbed 6's still distended neck in her beak licking near the top of her throat, just under where the elastic bands were wrapped. her tongue felt the hard plastic plug inside as her neck was still massaging it, trying to pull it further into her body. 6 returned the embrace locking their bony forms together savoring all the lickings she was recieving.