Don't Mess With Nikki

Story by Vinomath on SoFurry

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A sequel to the earlier linked "Don't Mess with the Moons. I'm particular fond of this series because I really like the writing style I chose for it. Been experimenting with those lately to try and keep things fresh. There is more with this series I want to do, a lot more actually so expect to see more in the future. This is a contest entry, a reverse corruption contest. That means a bad guy getting turned into a good guy. I opted to use the villain from the previous story (formerly unnamed) and threw in a bit of back story and now he's not a bad guy. Simple stuff no?


It had been a year since Nick Scully had forcefully become a freak of nature. Not quite human, not quite an animal. It was something in between, something that would later commonly be referred to as a vixen. Not only did his species change, his gender had been forcefully swapped. Ultimately he learned to make his, now her way; taking on the name "Nikki."

The group that made her like this? The Moons. They ran the town of Dunwhich. Let's just say they were the last group of people you wanted to meet. They were ruthless, and didn't let anything stand in their way. Somehow they had gotten material to transform people. The Moons had used it to get back at the people they had problems with, and even filmed the sequences. The Moons had a big operation going. A really big one. One that wouldn't keep running if Nikki had anything to say about it.

Ever since the incident, Nikki had dedicated the year to learning everything she could about the Moons, and how they were transform people. Her plan was to dissolve the whole thing, not just take out the leader. Since she ran a detective agency before the run in with the Moons happened, it wasn't too hard for her to gather information on them. Thinking that Nikki would retire and go into hiding considering her new disgusting appearance, to society anyways, they never kept their eyes on her.

Nikki opted to move into an abandoned hospital, a place where no one in their right mind would investigate. She would spy on those who she knew were targets of the Moons, and ended up getting identities of various members. She got a small file of them, some of them had actually ended up in the hospital which was quite useful to Nikki.

In those files, Nikki found the one thing she was looking for. A file for the very man who caused all this to happen to her. His name, as she finally found out was Jefferson Danner. That was the name of the man that ruined her life, and as it turned out, ran the whole operation. Yes, Jefferson Danner was the one in charge of the Moons, the one calling the shots.

And Nikki was going to use this to her advantage. She was going to find out how the Moons transformed people, and Nikki would go even farther, learn how to transform parts of the brain. After that, she would get a hold of the scumbag Danner, and force him to help her make the city safe again.

The main issues were figuring everything out, and do so without the Moons catching wind so that they would increase their security, especially in regards to Danner, of which who would usually walk around on his own. His search for answers couldn't involve the Moons, and thus, couldn't involve Dunwhich at all.

Nikki's search for answers would lead her to another country all together in the city of Asthar. Sure it sounded like something out of a role playing game but there was one man there who could help simply referred to himself as "T." He was an odd character. but someone who used to be a part of the Moons and ended up parting ways with them and going into hiding. He regretted revealing his findings to them, and happily gave them to Nikki after hearing her story. A month together would help Nikki get exactly what she needed. The mixture to not only transform people, but also to alter the mind. With a guarantee Nikki wouldn't come back until the Moons were dissolved and all taken care of to ensure T's safety.

Nikki's plan was finally able to begin. First, she would transform Danner, one part for revenge and another part for the mental changes to be easier to take effect. Second, she would alter Danner's mind through chemicals she and T discovered in order to make him want to help get rid of the very organization he started. Afterwards she'd have to go quiet for a while, but to utilize the time properly, she would have the new Danner give her information on all of the members of the Moons.

Today was the day the plan was finally going to begin, a year since Nick became Nikki. And today, Danny was going to pay for what he did. It was time for the Moon's reign of terror to stop. It was the beginning of the end of them. All the people they hurt, families they tore apart, this was for them.

Danner was going to be speaking to a group of people who were on track to become full time members of the Moons. It was the perfect time to strike, as the event had all the security whereas Danner wouldn't have any, he was stubborn in that way. Danner thought he could fend for himself and refused to have any security. What he didn't count for was an "old friend" paying him a visit.

Nikki waited for Danner to get inside his car and begin to drive to the meeting spot. She followed close behind him, staying out of his line of sight. About halfway there, Danner was forced to stop due to road construction and would need to make a U-turn to find an alternate route, and this would be where Nikki would strike. The road was small, so it would have to be a slow turn and this was the window for Nikki, now or never.

She rushed up to the passenger's seat, trying to open the handle. When it was locked, she bashed the window in, shattering it and forcefully unlocked and opened it. By this point Danner already looked over and tried to speed up to knock Nikki away from the car, failing to do so as he crashed into a hydrant. Nikki took down her hood and made Danner freeze. "You..." it was the last thing he said as Nikki bashed his head into the wheel, knocking him out cold.

When Danner's consciousness came back, he found he was tied down on an operating table with an orange anthropomorphic fox woman staring over him.

"I didn't think you'd ever show your face again." Danner said up to the dame smugly.

"Soon it'll be known by everyone in Dunwhich, as the woman who took the Moons down."

Danner let out a scoff. "You really think you can take down the Moons? You wouldn't be able to even comprehend how many men I have."

"That's why I have you." Nikki said walking around with her hands behind her back. "You see with no leader, they'll be more lost than ever, and with your help, you're helping me by the way, we'll be taking it all down.

"And what makes you think I'll help you?" Danner asked with a smirk.

"I don't think, I know. You see the one mistake you made was letting me keep this." Nikki pointed to her head in front of Danner's face. "Enough small talk, no time for it. Let's just get on it with it." Nikki said, injecting a serum into Danner's vein.

"What the hell was that!?" Danner yelled up to her angrily.

"You know damn well what it was."

And with that Danner's body began to alter. His body grew a light blue fur all over, white white fur going down his front. His ears became triangular and moved to the top of his head while his eyelashes elongated. Danner's nose became small and pink while his face pushed out into a small muzzle, whiskers forming on each side of it. His hair turned a silver color as it grew down to his shoulders.

Danner's shoulders slumped down permanently as they lost their broadness. His arms became slender while his hands became small and dainty. His legs not only became shapely, but digitigrade. His feet contorted into paws and would now be forced to stand on his toes. Danner's nails sharpened and grayed as they became claws.

Danner's hips and rear both pushed outward and became much more pronounced than the rest of his body. His waist caved inward while his back went into an arch. At Danner's chest, two mounds began to build up, forming into modest breasts. Lastly, Danner's manhood caved in on itself, contorting into womanhood inside and out, now an anthro woman like Nikki, except a cat.

"You think this'll make me help you? You must be daft!" Danner laughed.

"Oh, I'm not done. You see I spent a long time researching, and I know how to do the one thing that you could never do."

With that, Nikki injected another serum into a Danner's neck.

"GAH! What was that!?" Danner shouted, finally starting to struggle.

"Mind alteration." Nikki said grandly. "And it'll make that little head of your's have a heart, and you're going to be joining the side of light...dim light, but light none the less. We'll be doing the right thing."

"I don't...I...ugh..." Danner began to get new thoughts pumping in her mind. "Oh God...what have I done?"

"You've done bad Danner, but now's the time to start doing right." Nikki replied.

"Don't call me by that name, I don't ever want to be called that again. Call me...Jenny."

"Right Jenny, ready to start phase 2?"

"As ready as I'll ever be! What's phase 2?"

"We have to keep a low profile for a little while. It's too dangerous to do anymore for now."

"Seems logical."

"What I need you to do is tell me information on all the members of the Moons."

"You do know how many their are right? It'll take at least 2 weeks minimum!"

"We'll need to retire from it all longer than that." Nikki replied. "A month at least, so there's nothing but time."

"I guess it's time to get started then." Jenny said.

"Finally, the Moons are going down."