Commission: Bar Dogs

Story by dracologist on SoFurry

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#55 of Written Commissions

Mike and Elnora are looking for a special place to call their own. They try an old country bar, but what will happen when Elnora gets up from the table and another girl moves in on her man? The fur flies and passion burns. Read and find out the full story.

Commission paid for by blackknife12

Elnora (c) iconcobra175:

Michael (c) BlackKnife12


Bar Dogs

"How often do you come here again?" the busty akita asked as she leaned forward to look out of the windshield of the truck towards the painted wooden sign of the building they were about to be going into.

The sound of the powerful engine in the truck died slowly as the key was turned off and removed from the ignition. The bright headlights fading, and the truck settled into the spot that they had selected to park directly in front of the entrance. Other cars were around them, showing this place as being a pretty popular bar out here, but one that was a bit too far away to house any of their fellow military personnel. These two had to keep their relationship secret thanks to that archaic rule about officers like the very busty Major dating enlisted soldiers such as her personal Master Sergeant. Some laws within their line of service needed to be challenge, but the military had never been in the habit of questioning their older laws that many defend with very loose running logic. Instead these two had to keep their passion secret and their outings even more secret. That was where this bar came in, this place made to look like an old country saloon with improved doors made a find hide away from most other military people that might be able to recognize either of them. It gave the two some privacy while still allowing them out in public.

"This place is good, trust me." Mike tried to reassure his date, smirking at her while the two walked side by side towards the entrance.

The show of muscle was well built on both of them. These two combat trained canine shared that in common and on Elnora it looked good. The large build of her arms, her shoulders, her chest, her abs, hips, and legs, all shown out perfectly, but still displayed a feminine beauty when it came to her large, towering, thick breasts and wide sultry hips that seemed to sway side to side in every step that she made. That upturned tail left nothing to question in it's busy curl back towards her lower spine, showing off that large rump in amazing display. It was a figure that shined through her outfit, ate away at the concealment that was truly there, but also wasn't. Her low cut v-neck shirt showed off every bit of her cleavage while the high crop of it matched perfectly to the brown jacket that helped to expose those incredibly toned abs and sides. Elnora was a woman of power, but also of beauty, and she knew how to show every single thing that she had for eyes to see, or at least one pair of eyes that she cared to notice her. It was easy to get Mike's attention, though, he never really kept his eyes off of her, but she liked his lusty forwardness, his loving attention that kept her close and made her feel loved and admired. The blue cargo pants ran down over her plush pump and down those thickly muscled thighs only to be tucked into fully laced, knee high, combat boots. She liked her outings, and with her white hair lashing back and forth over her back there was no question who it was that she had her outings with. She wasn't with Mike because of his size, because he was a manly-man, or anything like that. She was with him because of his compassion and loyalty, because beyond anyone else he saw her as a female soldier, a flower with thorns that could protect itself even if he wasn't there. It was a thought that brought her closer to him, allowed her to lean on him a bit while they walked.

Mike may have been a simple Master Sergeant in the army, but he was a person, he was a husky, and even as a ranger he cared for his top secret girlfriend closely. There were things about her that he'd never know, things that he couldn't know, but that didn't change anything about their relationship. Her secrets weren't even hers, they were the military's, and those were things that could be left behind when they were together. Michael was focused on being with her, not with what she does and who she talks to, she was the one that he loved, enthralled by beauty, captivated by personality, and in love with an akita very much just as strong as he was. This strong and muscular military dog kept his black shirt tucked into his jeans while the tight leather jacket that hugged his muscles remained open in the front. A grey arm moving a white hand to wrap around the small of Elnora's back as he guided her towards the entrance of the building, helping her along and letting her know that he was right there with her. The smile that wrapped showed of a man knowing of the fire he played with, but knowing that the reward was well worth the danger. Even if he was caught with her tomorrow and held before a board, this husky wasn't going to back down from his feelings. This was the woman that he loved and he'd care for her as long as she was with him, and beyond that. When those hands pressed to the door of the bar the call of country music already pooled out through the wood, showing the theme that rested within before they could even see the interior. Elnora found herself leaning against him, her shoulder bearing down on the side of his chest to cuddle in tightly as she took a second to look on at a place that they could go to and spend time together beyond prying eyes. The very idea forced a deep smile over her lips so that finally when his hand pressed against the door and the two went to step though this location could be claimed by the two, a true "our place" to finally have.

* * *

"So, I guess you come here often?" The akita asked softly, looking around the look of the room.

The building was basic if nothing else, a distant bar for very local patrons. When the two walked in others looked up at them, noticing them instantly as people that they hadn't seen before. The bright shine of glasses hung from the mount upside down right over the polished bar top which reflected the dim lights around the building. Stools stood around the bar finding themselves mounted by a few patrons here and there as drinks were sipped and the bartender continued to clean the glass that was in his hand. The soft smile that wrapped the raccoon's masked face helped to welcome them in as eyes turned back to drinks and more familiar company. Tables rested in the back with chairs pressed up around them, leaving the few who claimed their own to be sitting alone while others accompanied some table tops in pairs. It was a very simple place, the sound of the radio behind the bar singing out as a way to help entertain those that sat to drink.

"Hey, you two are new here. What can I get you?" The raccoon called out to them, smiling brightly as he reached under his bar to pull a bottle from the fridge and open it before placing it in front of a man who had just finished the last one he gave him.

They both looked at the tender, watching him but a second before chuckling in unison. Their steps made their way over towards the man, but it was Elnora that got to the bar first and leaned forward against it. Her very low cut top showing off that endless chest while she smiled softly to the man and almost purred at him. Her order for a drink came in well and the bar keep went to answer that request, but this wasn't his first day. Normally a girl with large breasts are destined for free drinks at these places, but this man wasn't handing anything out and while he went to fetch her drink for her, even opening it, he still asked her to slide her card over the counter. It was something that Elnora respected, was happy to oblige to, and proved that this bartender didn't just see her as a walking set of tits. Even Mike had to smile and gave the raccoon a respectful nod, watching as the man swiped that card in his system and opened up a tab for the two.

"You know," The husky said to his date, "I could have paid for that drink."

Elnora smiled at the hulkish canine, leaning against him while holding her beer close against her chest. "Yeah, but this way you owe me." The wink that followed forced Mike to roll his eyes, even shaking his head a bit to her comment.

The two love struck, combat trained, warriors laughed softly together while the akita lifted two digits and the bartender pulled out a second drink that was soon claimed by the grey husky. His fingers wrapped around the cold glass even as it started to sweat between his furred fingers. With an easy pull away from the bar they'd find themselves a table to sit at near the back corner. Eyes continued to turn to them, not only because they were new, but because of the shape and size of them. Strong, powerful muscles stretched against their clothes, and that got a lot of attention from those ladies at the bar they'd just stepped back from. The call of old country music even rang through this place, switching the mood from loss and heart break to wild party on a dime depending on the quarter that was being played at that moment. Music alone wasn't enough to pull the first boot wearing country girl from the counter, but with a movement of that long brimmed hat from her head to save her place she'd step over to the two thanks to enough drinks to make her believe that she stood a chance.

"Hey, stud. You look like a guy that wants to party a bit." The very attempt forced Elnora to just stare at this girl with the look of surprise and shock, a busty cowgirl with no more muscle on her than what was needed to pull up weeds from her backyard garden and yet here she was hitting on this akita's man. That simply wasn't right.

"He's here with someone. Maybe you should go back to your seat." Elnora warned, it would be the only warning too.

With her steps taking her away this doe pulled herself from the two, not willing to get beaten up by she-hulk's angrier sister if she could help it, but being as catty as these ladies got she would leave them with a little word to spread the fire a bit, "Just let me know if you're in the market for a girl that looks a little more lady like, sweetness."

The wink that followed left Michael with a worried look and a turn of his head to his very enraged beauty that he'd come in here with. He could see how angry she was, but when he asked Elnora only stood up, scooting her chair back from her. "I'm going to visit the bathroom before I hit a bitch."

Mike's ears folded back to this, he hadn't intended for things to go this way, he wanted a good night out at a bar that they could both enjoy. As he watched Elnora storm off towards the restroom the husky released a deep sigh and only shook his head some. Both knew that they were fully loyal to one another, but that didn't stop other people from stepping in with stupid comments. By the time he turned his eyes back to the deer that had caused all this she was already walking back towards him, pressing her hands to his strong shoulders, her plump breasts against his broad chest, and crushing her lips against his own to deliver the softest of coos down his throat. When Elnora exited the room, having calmed down enough to approach the table again, her eyes narrowed, her teeth ground, and she rushed over just about the same time that Mike pushed the doe off of him.

* * *

"Get off of me!" Mike called out, or at least would have if the sight of that well trained, cream colored fist didn't sail right over his head to connect against this country girl's face and send her stumbling back.

The force of the blow was impressive, even to Michael, but Elnora wasn't finished with her yet. The sudden call of panic drove people from their seats, forced them to stand. Guys already pulling out cameras and women standing away so that they wouldn't be subject to the fight that was obviously already starting. The sudden punch had dazed the doe, but as her hand landed on the bar and her head shook a bit, this girl quickly came to with a trickle of blood running down the corner of her mouth. The doe might not be military trained, but if she could take a hit from the strong body of the akita and come back then clearly this deer was a fighter in her own right. That much should have been clear by the fact that she was so bold enough to even try and steal away Elnora's man, but now that the doe charged back in, the deep growl that filled those lips between the two indicated immediately that they weren't going to be holding back. The fast swinging fist of the doe came in quickly on a wide arch only for Elnora to lift her own hand in defense, blocking the strike at the elbow just before that jean covered brown knee lifted to crush those well toned abs back against the akita's stomach. A cheap shot like this forcing those hands to wrap around her middle and releasing a deep grunt as she stumbled backwards in order to try and recover, but this doe wasn't in the mood to let her get away, not after taking a shot to the face the way that she did. Elnora was made to see red, not once but twice, as fists swung in to hit her against the side of her face from one side and then the next, leaving the she-dog to fall back into her seat just before a hooved foot was lifted to press a grinding rotation in against that that left, swollen, breast. Even as the doe smirked to her supposed victory here Elnora's cheeks burned with a heated moan and frustration.

"You ready to call it quits, bitch? Us farm does aren't people that you muscle whores can fuck with." The vulgar words rolled across the lips of the deer while that clear smile burned into that akita's vision.

Elnora had been stunned by the knee and dazed by those quick punches, but that didn't mean she was down and out, before Mike had a chance to stop his girlfriend from getting back up the canine landed a hard kick against the inside of that doe's standing leg, forcing the self proclaimed farm girl to fall over the floor like a bag of potatoes she probably carries around. Elnora snarled out at her, feeling her sore tit through her shirt that was already starting to tear over that bust thanks to that treatment from that hoof, but torn shirt or not this fight was going to continue with the strong akita reaching down to take a handful of raven black hair and start dragging the doe across the floor. Kicking and crying out that deer squirmed to try and get some footing so that she could break free, but she wasn't going to be able to as long as the canine dragged her. Finally when that stopped those hooves clicked to regain footing, but only to find herself being helped up. At first the doe was confused, looking on at her attacker with a worried expression only to find her top being gripped so that as Elnora turned that busy tan body the brown furred, white spotted deer would be lifted from her feet and sent skipping over the top of the bar, impacting the display of glass bottles behind it and soon finding herself back on the ground once again with glass shattering around her.

The chiming of glass falling down on top of her, bottles, broken glasses, forced the doe to cover her head with her hand, grunting out deeply before slowly picking herself up. Shards sprinkled off of her now torn shirt while the damaged shoulder strap fell free, sagging her shirt down her side as only her breast was able to support it now. A hand quickly gripped at what remained of the strap, pulling it up, but when Elnora placed her cream colored hand on the top of that bar and threw her legs over to crush the soles of her boots against against the broken bottles, that strap was released. The grinding of doe teeth within her mouth narrowed her deer eyes, sending her to jump in once again. This time her hand came in low, aiming for a hard punch against those same abs she'd hurt earlier, but when the akita's hand wrapped around that wrist the other cream colored hand brought up Elnora's forearm against the doe's throat and slammed her backwards into that what remained of that bar display, cracking the wood behind her. This wouldn't have been so bad if the next movement wasn't slide her grip across those breasts and then grip the front of that deer's shirt. The fast jerk forced this doe to follow Elnora's movement, bringing her black nose straight down against that counter top and forcing her to ground all before the military strained bitch brought her booted leg up hard for a solid kick directly into that forward leaning torso. It was the doe's turn to grip her center, stumbling back across shards of broken glass that was kicked away even while the akita warrior walked towards her to lift and hand around the front of that brown and white throat.

"Now, you're going to apologize for putting your whore lips on my boyfriend and then you're going to..." That statement didn't get to be finished, not when a bar stool was swung at full force to collide against the center of Elnora's shoulders.

The loud bark that came from the canine silenced the bar, her body folding forward from the force of the hit. Someone had hit her, but as she turned her head to see a hand wrapped around her hair, gripping it and pulling her face to look on at the grinning display of the doe once again. The hold that this deer had on her hair left her tugging against it only for a second before the fast swing of a fist collided against her snout forcing the white haired canine to call out loudly. Those same hands only releasing hold of that hair so that her fingers could shift to wrap around the deep v-neck of Elnora's shirt, dragging the soldier by her breasts to roll her onto the bar top, holding her there are the shirt tore all that much more even exposing one of those large and plump breasts for the bar to see. Guys were already cheering, hooting and yelling for more skin from the two fighting and that was something that the doe smiled at when she lifted her hand up high as if signaling her triumph just before driving an elbow down into that well bruised gut once again. Elnora tried to roll away, tried to get off of the counter, but found herself held in place by someone else. The turn of her eyes found her looking on at a bleach blonde, busty vixen who smirked back down at her through her crimson coat. Clearly this was the friend that had sucker punched the akita with the stool earlier.

When this fox pulled at her top it would finish tearing open, exposing both of those large creamy breasts as they swished and churned in place before resting down over her rib cage. Those massive tits flashing those watching followed by a flashing of cellphones taking the pictures of this soldier from the group of drooling guys barking about how hot she was, how sexy she was, the things that they wanted to do to her now that they could see that body. It forced the grey husky to snarl, to turn towards them and throw his own hard punch. Strength flowed from the large muscles of his arm only to crash against the side of one patron's face, forcing that phone down towards the floor with the rest of the man's body while eyes turned to look over at Mike. Elnora growled out as well, almost matching in tone to Michael's heated snarl, as she reached up to wrap her hand around the back of that vixen's head, gripping her hair for the sake of holding her in place while her other hand rose immediately into the depths of that jaw, forcing the red vulpine to fall backwards in pain. When she turned back towards the doe, cream colored hands wrapped around what remained of the deer's shirt and with a roll towards the girl's vixen friend she'd pull those hooves from the floor behind the bar and drop her to land directly on the fox, reuniting the two with a deep oomph as one landed on top of the other.

The akita rolled to her feet, growling deeply to both of them while they got up. The doe coming in with yet another high swing that Elnora was able to duck under while the vixen crashed knuckles into her side. The sudden sting shook her large tits away from them, but as this trained fighter soaked the attack she'd send her own knuckles into the doe's body, forcing a heavy punch to sink as far into that stomach as she could to drop this girl to her knees before turning towards that fox to reach her hands out for her once again. This time when she gripped the back of her head the akita would pull her forward, drawing her face right between those massive tits. This vulpine had torn her shirt open, and if she wanted to see her massive bust so bad then Elnora would give her a front row seat coupled with a fast rising knee straight up between those legs which forced those same legs to quiver and shake before the fox also dropped down into the floor. When she looked over to her boyfriend she could see him trying to fend off the growing number of men in this place. A fast dash towards Michael would wrap her hand around his elbow to pull him along, dragging him away from them so that they could make a run for the exit. Elnora wasn't the kind of girl to run from a fight, but she certainly didn't want to be here with her shirt ripped open, when the cops ended up arriving.

"Come on, let's go." She ordered him, barking to the Master Sergeant who quickly turned to follow, not even bothering to question the order while they raced to leave.

The start of the truck was met with everyone else yelling to them, both calls of cheer, of affection, and of violence mixing in together in an odd riot that they were all sharing while the truck backed out of its place and turned to leave, taking them down the road.

"So much for having a secret place to call our own." He said with a bit of a huff.

Elnora only smiled to this, "I think I have a place that I know about. Turn left here."

* * *

The turn that Elnora had sent him on took him off of the road, well beyond the bar and down a dirt path. For a while there were only farms, but soon even those two faded away to the long fields of tall untamed grass. Street lights had vanished some time ago and the roar of the truck found itself resting on top of a hill where the path seemed to end. When the lights of the truck faded and the key once again cut off the engine these two were left with darkness as the night sky overwhelmed them. Clicks of doors opening and slams of them closing found these two wondering from the front of the truck and into the back, the rock hard bed bringing and off firm comfort that gave the two every instance that they needed to look up towards the stars that shined clearly around the silvery moon. As Mike rested back his date scooted closer to him, her head resting on his firm, well built chest as his strong, muscular arm flowed from behind his head down around her shoulders only to pull her closer in. Elnora lifted up along his body and with him turning his eyes from the beautiful display of the heavens above their lips connected, soft coos filling both of their lips and one grey strong body rolled over until it rested on a strong and busy tan body, crushing her large breasts down against her chest without ever pulling his lips away from hers.

Delicate fingers traced the length of her figure, feeling the soft curves and solid bends, snaking their way between her fur and her fabric to peal the second away from the first until inch by inch her coat and ruined shirt were removed, discarded to the side of the truck bed while the akita girl gripped onto his own jacket and shirt so that she could pull them up. As they slid off of his grey furred body he'd lift just enough to have them removed so that these two could be bare chest to bare chest, feeling those pert and needy female nipples cut through his muscle. Already his hips shook, shifted, and moved, grinding through his pants, through hers, and against the depths of her swollen and needy body. Elnora didn't always get horny after a fight, but something about seeing that doe bitch kissing her man made her feel the need to show him once again why he was with her. Already she was working to slide those jeans over his handsome rump, feeling his tight butt muscles as she exposed that already throbbing and unsheathed doggy dick that rested against her toned abs. His own fingers playing with the front button of her pants, pulling the flaps apart and drawing out her heated cunny, taking in the scent of true womanhood delivered need that she clearly had for him. When his fingers gripped onto her large breast her back arched, feeling more of that tit into his hand while her head rolled back in pleasure. It was enough of a movement that his other arm could scoop in under her body, pulling her strong stomach against his own, crushing her figure to his entirely just as he worked to line up that dick with her awaiting slit.

Legs parted to tell him that she was ready, that she wanted this, that she needed him, and with a single solid movement she felt the entire length of his hot shaft spread her walls, stretching her out wide and leaving her to moan out deeply and loudly into the night sky. Her strong hands wrapping around his shoulders, pulling his chest down onto hers, pulling the side of his neck against her kissing lips, and forcing her eyes to half close to the stretching of her walls pulled the tight well muscled flesh around that cock in a tight hug that her arms and legs could never possible match. That didn't mean she couldn't try, though. Fingers ran nails through his fur, parting it, leaving trails like corn fields along his back from one shoulder to the next. Every pull that he made with his cock left her feeling empty, left her needing it to be pushed back in and every thrust that he delivered rewarded that need by giving her exactly what she wanted. Already Elnora could feel her legs shaking as her blue cargo pants fell off of her knees and over the trucks tailgate down to the grass blow, but this only gave her the freedom she needed to lift those spread legs up, to wrap them around his hips and pull him in even tighter on every hit he delivered with his hips crashing into her swollen muff.

Thick liquid ran from her pussy, drenching her tail below while she moaned, while she called out, while she leaned her head back in a deep guttural grunt that told Michael just how much she was loving the attention that he gave her, that only he gave her. As her body shivered deeply her muscles tightened, her head grew dizzy, her mind clouded, and all she could think of was the sensation of her body building up the hot wave that immediately gushed out of her. The loud call that she announced told Mike right there on the spot that she was climaxing, that she was orgasming, and with a shaking, wordless, breath, she'd silently beg that he did the same. The feeling of her orgasm was music to him, though, the sensation of having her release so quickly was something that he was proud of for causing, and while he leaned his head down to once again kiss her, Elnora would drive her tongue into his mouth, deepening the kiss the very second that it started. Their tongues rolled together, turned, shifted, and met closely. Every bump, every curve those tongues made were met with a deep grunt and a hot gasp, allowing them to taste the very breath between them before slowly their lips once again parted and Elnora found herself staring up into the eyes of her passionate lover as strings of saliva connected their panting maws together. It was clear that the Akita needed more, wanted more of what he had for her, but Michael wasn't going to climax just yet, not so soon. Instead as he pulled out fully from her body the soft look of disappointment washed over her face, as if she'd done something wrong before he started to turn her.

That body lifted from the bed of the truck while Mike found himself on his knees and when the fur of her back crushed against the thick fur of his chest, those arms once again wrapped around her, her legs parted around his and that still dripping cunny drooled over the head of his canine cock just before he felt her lower her body onto it. Grey hands lifted to grip at her large breasts, playing with them, feeling them, rolling her nipples between his fingers while her arm lifted back over her shoulder to wrap around behind his head in order to keep him close. Every gasp that Elnora made rolled through her body like a tidal wave as his hips rose to meet hers, taking her, running himself into her, and leaving her large breasts to bound up into his hands even more while her head leaned back against his shoulder so that every deep call she made would fill the sky with her love and devotion to this husky that took her so well. Each lift crush his hips against the soft cushion of her amazing rear, smashing it back up into her as the ripple that it caused flowed up to her strong and muscular lower back. As Elnora turned her head back towards him another deep and long kiss flowed between them, the heated passion poured through their tongues, passing back and forth as her hips once again shivered at the sensation of his large dick once more stretching the walls of her tight cunny depths.

Neither could say anything, not while their tongues were so busy, but Elnora's cheeks flushed, her eyes rolled back and her shaking legs gave away what was about to come. The feeling of her body tingling all over as her nerves spiked from their exciting love drove her to spill force a thick wave of her heated fem-cum out into his lap, gushing a flow of her cream just like before, but this time she wasn't alone. As her legs quaked, as her body quivered, his own heart raced as well, and his figure shook right back against her. The throbbing of his dick inside of her was gripped tightly by her walls to keep it in place all before the thick flow of his own bubbling seed poured forth into her body, shot in hot ropes that licked and stuck to those inner walls as deeply as he was able to deliver them. Those heavy balls crushing up not just once, but twice to deliver multiple deep shots through her awaiting figure until her pussy was so filled with his potent cream that it would gush from her tightly sealed lower lips, joining her own cum down the length of his shaft, over the curve of his balls and lap and down to join the puddle that had already started to form ever since her first release. Those weren't the only fluids being delivered, though, not with his hand so tightly gripping her soft and massive breasts. The almost vice-like squeeze that he had on her towering orbs was rewarded with a thick shot that tore free from her nipples, spraying the canine cream across the back window of his truck before it trickled down over his fingers and forearm. The grey fur of his muscular grip finding itself also drenched by this beautiful akita while milk dripped from his elbows and their lips finally parted.

The daze that had fallen over Elnora left her blushing fully, knowing that they weren't yet done here, but loving the fact that as long as she was willing she had a man that could go that same distance. Her heart throbbed in her chest, beating wildly for this man even as she gripped the back of his head tighter as if trying to hug him. The passion that she shared, the time that they had together, it was a time that she never wanted to see end. When she lifted her hips slowly, the feeling of that dick sliding across her walls was only met with the same sensation that her pussy was finally able to leak while she turned around in his lap. This akita found herself in his arms once again, nude, bare, their hearts racing across one another as they united once more and her soft breath touching on the front of his neck as she nuzzled into his cheek affectionately.

"I love you, Michael." She admitted fully to him even closing her eyes to feel the truth of her statement rolling through her.

The hold that he had on her only tightened thanks to this, the burning feeling of her cheeks almost stinging before her ears twitched to his response, "I love you too... Elnora." He moaned back towards her even smiling that they could share such an obvious statement and still mean it so deeply.

Michael held her to him, kept her large breasts crushed to his chest, her strengthened abs held to his own, their hips connected, their legs resting with hers over and around his like a tight hug. These two were together, and both would strive to make sure that they would never be separated for as long as the other had power to stop it.