Welcome to the Dorms
A guy goes to check into his dorm for the semester, and finds someone's already there.
This is my first attempt at a real example story I did for a friend to advertise my work. Critique is welcome as are commissions if you like what what you see.
It was the usual day at the end of summer. Hot, but starting to cool down compared to the last heatwave everyone has been complained about. All the stores are advertising back to school sales, cool weather clothing, and warnings of the pumpkin spice season that ends up fouling up the air in every mall and shopping center. University classes start in a little over a week and those students who are staying at campus housing are finally allowed to enter and get comfortable at what will be their homes for at least the rest of the year. One such student was just arriving. A curious character known as a Kecha Wox, a hybrid of a creature known as a kecha wacha and a more common fox. His silver fur seemed a little fluffier than what a more common fox would have. His slightly rounded gut making him look even fluffier. His massive ears not helping the fact that he looks like a living stuffed animal. He was rather glad to be returning to this place, enjoying the fact he only has to share a place with a single roommate.
After going through the winding halls and maze like interior he finally found his room. Dorm 404. The fact that he was able to find it made him chuckle to himself as he entered. It's a nice common space with a small kitchen, living space, and three doors. One of them leading to a bathroom and the other two leading to single bedrooms. One of which was mostly closed, but not fully, and one could hear soft moans and grunting from it. His eyes light up in surprise as he hears the unmistakable lewd activity, a deep blush piercing the fur on his face, and devious smile spread across his face as he quietly put down his bags and crept to the slightly opened door. What he saw, was something he had only heard of before. His jaw went slack as he observed a snow leopard, bent over on the bed, with what looks to be a fox shoved up to his waist up her rump. She turns her head to look at the Kecha wox, her blue eyes wincing in what can be either pain or lust.
"C-can you lend me a hand?"
The kecha wox sheepishly nods and walks over, he grabs the fox's waist and gently starts to pull. Surprisingly the snow leopard seems to clench up and prevents the egress of the fox from her tail hole.
"Ah! No no no... I need you to push..."
He's stunned. There is no other way to state it. Does she seriously want this fox shoved up into her? How can she take him into her like that? Well, she's taken him this far. He moves his hands to give him a shove placing both hands on the fox's rump. She moans as her rump seems to assist him, drawing the fox up into her.
"Ah... thank you..."
As she manages to draw him up to his knees she then gets up, and turns to sit on the bed. Both sealing the fox's fate by forcing his still exposed legs up into her, and by exposing the thick sheath, heavy set balls, and throbbing cock that sports both feline barbs and a canine knot. Shi starts stroking her swarming gut with hir left hand, and stroking her member with her right.
"Thanks. I'm sorry I didn't get your name."
The kecha wox stands there, surprised by what he just saw, and what he's currently seeing between hir legs.
"K-keldric... How did... How is that possible?"
Shi smiles at the kecha wox and leans back, shifting her hand from rubbing her gut to under her sack, starting to pleasure her female parts.
"Oh that's not the only place people disappear into. You just need practice... I'll tell you what. Get me off and I'll see if I can't get you into some of the secret classes. You'll learn all of the fun things. What do you say?"
Keldric just stands there for a moment. But just a moment until he falls to his knees in front of hir and sticks his muzzle into hir shaft. Inhaling her musky scent coming from hir neithers. He then ran his tongue up the shaft, moistening her knot and running his tongue along hir barbed length. Pre starts leaking out and coating her tip and running down onto Keldric's tongue. The salty taste only encourages him as he then nearly jumps on that shaft with his muzzle. Tongue going a mile a minute and sucking like it's the straw in a very thick milkshake. Under all of that attention it's not long until shi coats his throat in thick creamy cum. Her chest rises and falls behind the full gut as shi grips the bed sheets.
"Oh wow... I've never had head like that... But now we've done the oral exam, it's time for the practical."
She says as shi slowly gets to hir feet, bends him over the bed, and in seemingly a single smooth motion lifts his shirt up and off his shirt and arms and with the other hand ripping off his plaid shorts and boxers. Then with nothing but hir cum as lube, thrusts into his rump. Keldric, surprised by the sudden length being forced knot and all, grabs fist fulls of bedding, bites down on the pillow on the bed, and forcibly grinds his own length on the bed. Shi slams into him over and over, knot stretching him and barbs scraping his insides. He wants to object, to tell hir to stop, push hir away and leave, but he can't. He likes it too much. Feeling this strange feline take control of him and try to pound him seemingly through the bed. After the third time he came into the wet mess that was the clean bedsheets freshly set out for the new arrivals not even an hour ago, shi finally let loose the thick torrent of cream that shot into him and forcibly popped out hir knot.
"Ah... So the back was as nice as the front. I'll have to give you a call next time someone decides to become a nice batch of kitty cream. As for the classes, well the decision is up to you now."
Shi picks up her clothes that were in a pile behind the door, fishes a card out of the pocket of her khakis, and gives it a spin. Landing it on the bed right next to Keldric, a corner of it landing in a wet spot and quickly deforming like you'd expect wet paper to. With that she walks out into the hall way, both her cock and vagina dripping and leaving a trail as she leaves. Not even catching his breath yet Keldric looks at the name on the card, Dr. Glacea Malfac. A couple minutes later Keldric hears a knock on the open door. Going out to see who it is he sees a small mouse girl looking over a clip board. She looks up, sees his naked body, and without even blinking an eye goes back to her sheets
"Keldric? Did you meet your roommate yet?"
"Yeah... Shi was... nice"
The mouse girl looks something over, raises an eye and looks back up at him
"Shi? No, I've got your room mate as a red fox named Todd"
At this point Keldric looks a little stunned, he starts thinking of what he could possibly say. After about two to three minutes of awkward silence he finally gives an awkward smile, shrugs, points at the room number on the open door and replies.
"Well... Uh... Room mate not found?"