Brisk's and Noah's Date

Story by Smiffdogg on SoFurry

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This is my first story, it was part of a trade with another user.

Any feedback would be much appreciated!


It is a warm sunny evening, a posh restaurant being in clear sight in front of me. Looking inside there is a couple eating together; They are just eating their desserts. One of the people, being an aardwolf wearing a bright red dress. Opposite her sits a red wolf with a suit on. They are clearly dressed up for an occasion. He has an apple crumble, His mate eating a creme brulee, licking the spoon in a seductive manner.

"So, our one year anniversary, quite a celebration!" He says smiling at her.

"yes! And I love you more than ever hun" she replies finishing her desert.

"aww" he smiles back "I love you more than air itself!" The waiter comes over and takes their desserts, they each take a sip of their drinks.

"I've got a nice idea, to celebrate our anniversary! We could go back to our apartment and enjoy looking up at all the stars" she says

"that's a wonderful idea!" smiling at his lover as they slowly walk out of the restaurant, holding hands as they exit.

They stroll back to their apartment, enjoying the sight of the sunset slowly turning into dusk and revealing the stars. He opens the door to the apartment and kiss as they enter.

"should I bring up some drinks, what about this!" he gets out a bottle of champagne, she acts surprised and smiles back.

"oh my, That looks expensive! I would love to share a glass with you. Thanks for that surprise"

"its my treat sweetheart!" he says back as they walk up to the roof. The sky shows more stars every second. Both looking up they stand, their arms around each other. He strokes her back as they huddle together for warmth. They both takes sips of their drinks as they stare up at the sky.

"thanks for the champagne, it is lovely" she says

"I'm glad you like it" he replies as they nuzzle, both their tales wagging slightly.

"this is the perfect way to celebrate, the sky is so beautiful" she says

"yeah, you are still more beautiful though" he takes another sip of the drink as he finishes speaking. As the glass comes down she leans in and deeply kisses him, both blushing slightly as they are in such fiery passion. As they lean out they stare into each others eyes for a minute, just admiring each other.

"shall we get comfortable?" moves towards the sunbed nearby. They both lay down and enjoy looking at the gloomy sky, the stars now brighter, flashing down onto them.

"is it just me or do I see a heart formation there" he says pointing up at the sky

"aww, you're right. That's so romantic" she replies as they cuddle, both their hearts throbbing as they stroke each other.

"I am so lucky to have you" she says as he leans in and kisses her again. "I couldn't live without you" he replies after they end the kiss. They both embrace each other tightly and he strokes her belly softly as they lay.