GRUESOMENESS TEST
#1 of Tests
Basically just a text I was doing. I figured I'd try something new. Tell me if you guys want a story with this kinda thing in it.
ALRIGHT! SO THIS IS JUST A TEST! Basically I wanted to see how well I could write a gruesome scene without any actual dialog. So, tell me what you guys think. Any and all criticism is appreciated. It DOES contain a very detailed crime scene where basically a fur was completely disassembled. It contains blood and other grossness. YOU'VE BEEN WARNED!
The sight was gruesome. The road was covered in blood and body bits. But this wasn't a car accident. Of course, that's what the news would call it. The body, if it could still be called that, was lying in the center of the blood pool. The body had no fur left on it. The fur could be seen draped over a car, stained with blood. Shockingly, it hadn't been torn at all. Every cut was smooth and precise.
The "body" was only bones, muscle, and tissue. The large and small intestines had been removed from the body and lay in a relatively neat pile next to the corpse. The stomach and lungs had been ripped in half and place diagonally from each other. The remaining organs lay scattered randomly around the body, with the exception of the heart and brain. The brain could be seen still contained within what was left of the broken skull. It looked like part of it had been stomped, but it WAS there... Mostly. The heart, however, was nowhere to be found. The face had been smashed so much there was no way to recognize it.
The fingers had been removed from the hand, and lay scattered on the road. There were no teeth anywhere; not in the skull nor on the road. There weren't even remnants of them.
The body, however, was in on piece. Well... Relatively speaking. Limb-wise, the body was whole. The species was mostly unrecognizable; the tail had been brutally cut off, and the ears were gone.
Whoever had killed this fur had taken a lot of precautions to make sure they wouldn't be caught. It was impressive. Super terrifying, but still impressive. No one should be able to do this without puking. And there were no puddles of vomit, or even remnants of it. At least, nothing that wasn't from the police officers/paramedics that had turned up.