Immortals: Intro

Story by Amit_King on SoFurry

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#18 of Discontinued

The world is dark and in the city of Endless Sorrow the hope has faded. A deciving henchmen that plans to overthrow his boss hires a 'specilist' is the money worth it.


For those of you that haven't noticed I'll tell you now, I like keeping humans in my stories for the purpouses of keeping them in the loop.

Here's a new story that's been one of the few that's been crowding my mind, I've written more than this but it's just the intro and yes there will be yiff in this series though it will be further down the line than Demon's Within.

Now let me know what you think of this series through comments and votes, I 'NEED' feedback otherwise I don't know whether the series is good to post more or just posting for my health.


The rain pounds down upon the city though many pay it no mind, it had rained for so long that it was normal to just walk through it without a second thought anymore and no one asks questions about it anymore. They just deal with it and go on with their lives. Maybe that's why this city is called The Endless Sorrow.

Moving down the street, the figure makes their way through the crowds of people without much difficulty or even a hint of trouble.

It has been in this city for so long that it was easy to maneuver through the populace with practiced ease before turning down an alleyway, and then stopping in front of a large steel door, moving their right hand out and banging on the door twice and waiting for it to open. They then stepped through, moving past the large black bull that was behind the door. Moving through the dim building before coming to stop in front of a wooden table surrounded by an assortment of mean and nasty looking furs, all brandishing different weapons and jewelry, as well as putting on their meanest sneers to try and scare one another. It seemed there was not much trust among the scum of the city of sorrow.

They lifted their head so that the light shined down onto their face, showing smooth white skin with piercing yellow eyes and a few strands of pitch black hair hanging in front of the females face before lifting her right hand and removing the large hat that she was shielding her face from and setting it on the table. Once all the surrounding furs got a look at her face, looks of surprise and snickers of amusement began to fill the air before a large black panther that was sitting across from the human female leaned in, resting his right arm on the table and placing his left paw over his muzzle as he looked her over. It wasn't long before his left paw came down and rested on the table, the snickering having died down as well. The felines blue eyes stared daggers into the human girl, though she didn't even blink as she stood quietly and those around began to wonder what exactly the panther was trying to do before he broke the silence with a deep gruff voice

"So you're the one that Underground sends us. A little girl, and a human no less, do they think we're joking around after putting down a small fortune? That they could mess with us by sending us a human child?" his eyes slitted, showing his frustration, though his expression remained the same as he continued staring at the human who only stared back.

The air was thick with tension and it could be seen on the surrounding fur's faces that they didn't know if they should laugh or be angry, and just when the human girl lifted her head as if to speak a loud bang rang out from above on the rafters and walkways of the building. The panther and his furs immediately moved back, drawing their weapons which were mainly pistols and a few shotguns, though nothing too powerful on a large scale. Looking over those that had interrupted the girl, they seemed to be other scum that plagued the city and the panther did not look pleased as he glared up at a male bobcat standing on the walkways who was dressed in a dark red suit and a smug look on his face. The panther's glare didn't last long as his eyes fell onto the human who was staring at him and his handgun, which was a small 9mm, was aimed at her head as he growled out,

"It was you, you little bitch...what the fuck is this shit, you bringing Loka's men here!" pushing his gun forward so it was only a few inches from her face, some of his men having turned and taken aim at her as well, though she did nothing in response as her eyes stared into the panther's.

The panther looked ready to put a hole in the human girl before a voice above them claimed everyone's attention "James, did you honestly think that Mr. Loka wouldn't find out that you were trying to over throw him?" Giving a small laugh, the bob cat placed his paws on the walkways railing, giving a smile to the panther before his attention was turned to the human girl who's eyes slowly turned and glared up at the bob cat. After a moment the bob cat smiled before laughing loudly, showing his amusement.

After his laughing had slowly stopped he shook his head before smiling at the panther once again, the panther having already lowered his weapon from the girl's face, finding that if she was working for Loka, then Kain the bob cat up there would have done something like 'thanked her' or made it obvious that she had set them up since he was such a cocky bastard in that respect.

"So this is what you've been stealing money for James? You've taken out more than six figures from Loka and you spend it on what...a girl with a mean look. Were you planning on scaring Loka to death or making him laugh himself to hell?" the bob cats words only helped feed the panthers anger and it was shown as he bared his fangs and growled, his right paw clenching tightly to his weapon before his right ear flicked hearing a faint voice from his right and turning to see the human girl looking at him again with the same piercing glare.

Once she had his attention she lifted her head and spoke once again though her voice was still faint "I've received orders to assist the one named James Mclo, if you are this man please state what it is I should do about our enemy" James looking a bit unsure at hearing her, she sounded almost like a machine with her statement, though the bob cat hollering something about 'James and her having a little love spat' made his anger resurface and glare holes into the human

"You stupid? We're about to get our asses dropped to hell with about twenty pounds of lead and you're asking me what to do?" he growled out and even more when a quick 'Yes' came as her response before yelling at the girl "Are you fucking stupid, kill these assholes, that's what you should do, just like we paid for you to do" his yelling catching everyone's attention as the girl just continued staring at him before closing her eyes and saying only 'Understood' before her eyes snapped open and her hands disappeared into the inside of her trench coat.

She spun, her eyes flashing from left to right as her hands pulled out twin MP7's. Having counted how many enemies were around as they began entering the building, she knew what she was facing. Holding one MP7 in each hand and lifting them, having done this mere milliseconds before the sound of gunfire filled the room, the flashes from her weapons lighting the area around them as she moved her hands from one target to the next, her eyes shifting from left to right as she stepped to the right then forward before moving back to the left, catching each and every target with no more than a rapid second burst. At this time everyone had begun shooting, Kain and James's men all shooting at each side.

Soon the gunfire had slowly died down leaving the survivors standing with empty shells around their feet and smoking weapons in their hands, the girl slowly turning and looking over to see what was left of James on his people finding that James had been hit in the shoulder, while only a few of his men had fallen. The panther looked over at her, though he didn't seem angry as he looked her over seeing no traces of injury on her form. Her trench coat had fallen showing the combat gear she was wearing, from black polished boots to the camo pants and shirt. Even the harness around her upper body looked to be military, her black hair falling down her back it was a surprise that it didn't get in the way when she drew her weapons, which at the moment he was looking over her gear which she had reloaded and clipped back into the harness, one on her right side and the other against her lower back. Turning and looking directly at the panther, she lifted her head to speak again

"What is the next task to be done, I am in your employ till O nine hundred tomorrow." The panther blinked before sighing and sitting himself back down as his men moveed around to see if anyone had survived while James began to explain exactly what he was planning to use her for and as she paid attention movement on the one of the walkways went un-noticed as the bob cat Kain slowly lifted his head, pulling his left paw over to grab a hand gun, his vision fading in and out as the three holes in his chest just continued to flow blood.

Shakily pointing the handgun forward using the walkway to help keep his aim steady as he closed his right eye aiming at the bitch that had been the start of all this, since it was for her that James stole the money and he wasn't going to let James win this fight, James had explained that they were going to be raiding Mr. Loka's mansion. He was a crime lord which wasn't surprising around this place and it was her job to help them get in, and kill Loka and his men so that James could take over and rule Loka's operation

"So nothing too out of the ordinary in your line of work I'd guess" the panther rested his muzzle on his left paw, holding his head up as he watched the human girl who just stared at him, and they continued to stare at one another for several moments before James lifted his head from his paw and asked, "What's your name?" though a loud bang ringing out and a spray of blood that appeared from the side of the human girls head caused his eyes to widen as he watched her fall to the ground with a thud.

Turning and looking up seeing Kain smiling as he took aim at James though the odds of him hitting the panther in his condition were slim, the threat of it being possible was still there. The bob cat laughed before speaking from his blood stained maw "Let's see you take over anything now." his laughter becoming slightly on the insane side as he continued his final words "I'd like to see you even be able to take over an ant hill without your little bitc..."

The feline was cut off, the sound of an automatic weapon going off. His head splattered open and blood sprayed everywhere where his head used to be. All was silent as the furs looked around for who had taken the final shot, even James was searching for whoever did it, but a thud coming from his right caused him to turn and see the human girl pulling herself to her feet with her right hand on the table which was gripping one of the MP7's, blood was running down the side of her face and neck. As she got to her feet, a small clinking sound was heard as a glint of metal that was the bullet that Kain fired was pushed from her head, glaring at the panther once again as she clipped her weapon back onto her harness

"My name is Nassia and I'm your Immortal for the day" a smirk slowly playing out onto her lips as she glared at the shocked panther.