a good scratch pt 2

Story by alraybry on SoFurry

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part two


Later the next day the man is talking with a friend of his about that happened that night.

"What a load of bull I knew you where desperate but you don't have to make up stories, I know you have been sad scene she

left you but you'll find a new girlfriend some day"

"Oh you think I'm kidding?"

"I don't think I know you are! even I know that's a stereotype raptors don't act like that, people having blood lust is a lie

told by humans no offence."

"Oh well then let me show you this."

The man takes off his shirt and turns his back showing several very long but, healing cuts and scratches.

"Oh you did that to your self, your just sick!"

"Oh yea so I guess I flayed my self, Then pressed all these fake teeth into my skin"

"I don't see any teeth marks?"

The man turns around starting at his shoulder and going down his forearm and his side are rows of small marks that look like

odd misshapen pin pricks

"Do you see them now?"

"She was probably trying to scare you off, it sounds like you pissed every one off in that place. I know your sad but maybe

your just better off being alone."

"How can you say that?"

"There's nothing wrong with being alone, It might hurt but maybe you can just make your self better."

"You think so?"

"Yeah just don't worry about it, You'll find some one new."

"How do I find some one new when every one I ask says no."

"Just don"t worry..."

As they talk there is a bang at the door.

"Must be the mail or something."

The man puts his shirt back on and opens the door a tan colored raptor dressed in a plain brown tunic stands there.

"So do you still think I'm making it up?"

"You are the man iv been tracking, you must come with me to atone for your crime!" The raptor announces reaching out for the

man.

"What crime?" he says sliding back

"You have taken a females maiden hood and she is now in the throws of blood lust, You must sacrifice your self so that she

may regain her mind!" the raptor hisses stepping trough the door.

"I didn't do any thing, If any one raped any one she raped me!"

"Witnesses say you took advantage of her!"

"Well your witnesses lie, She was the one that was on top she was the one clawing me, And further more we diden't even have

sex!"

"The only way you will prove what you say is true is if you come with me."

"This is way too crazy I'm going to call the cops!" The mans friend says confused

"No its OK I'll go."

"You make a wise choice human." the raptor screeches as he takes the mans arm.

"When I'm proven innocent I demand some one pay for this"

"If you are, then some one will pay very dearly"

A mater of hours pass as the man travels with the raptor back to the place where they make there home a kind of open

grass land not that far from the city.

Once there the man is lead into a shanty town where many more raptors can be found, They mill around and do what ever they

need to be doing, Many of them wearing the same plain outfit with the same tan colored scaly skin some, However have

tribal tattoos in what seems to be red or blue ink along there face.

As the man is guided through the town many stop to glare at him or simply screech or growl as he passes.

Soon the man is brought before the two raptors from the bar, And a third that is wearing some kind of ceremonial robe and

head dress. They are standing in front of a large make shift building of some kind there are some decorations around it

that make it look more important than other around it.

"Glad to see you have had a successful hunt tracker but, Why is he free?" One of the males asks.

"Yes you should kill him for what he did to our sister!" The second one roars.

"He game willingly." the tracker says.

"Yes I don't take very kindly to being falsely accused, The two of you know very well I did not rape your sister!" The man

says in a loud but trembling voice.

"All of you calm your selves, Human I am what you would call an elder of the tribe, These two say that you raped the

female inside."

"I did not!"

"Then why don't you tell me what happened?" The elder speaks slowly and calmly.

"Yes I came into the bar looking for women it's something we humans do from time to time, I didn't know it would be

harmful."

"lies!" one of the siblings roars out

"Elder kill him and, Give his blood to our sister so she may be well again!"

"Silence both of you!" the elder roars with a slight echo

"Human finish your story."

"Like I said I never meant any harm." The man stammers as she speaks

"She acted like she was curious so, I let her know she didn't have to be afraid, I put my hand on her claw to let her know

it was OK then..."

"Sadly human our females are not allowed to seek mates of there own for several years, She may have been curious but it is

her fault she acted." the elder says softly

"I'm sorry I didn't know."

"This will not prevent you from being punished, If you have done wrong."

"I know but, like I said I haven't done anything wrong."

"Just tell us what happened."

"Well she took me in her arms and scratched me I still have the marks, Any way she seemed to be enjoying her self she

kinda jumped on me and pined me down..."

"lies!" the siblings screech at the same time "She was an Honorable female she would never have done that!"

"If she had cut him so deeply he would be hurt if not dead!

"This is true human how could she have cut you and you not be hurt?"

The man takes off his shirt and turns his back to the elder

"It wasn't really like that she didn't really cut me, Like I said it was more like she was only scratching me like she knew

how much was too much."

"She was fighting him!" one of the sibling roars

"If she was fighting him why didn't you help?"

The sibling backs down a bit as the elder looks at the mans scars from that night

"It seems as tho you are telling the truth human, This damage is proof there was no way you could resist her, Even if

you wanted to.

"I guess I should admit I wasn't really trying to get away." the man says

"She started to rub her self against me and it seems like she was enjoying her self."

"You never penetrated her?" the elder asks simply and calmly

"No of course not we didn't even take off our cloths."

"He is lying elder he took advantage of her and when we returned the blood lust took over she wants her revenge against him

for what he has done!"

"Enough from both of you." the elder screeches at the siblings.

"Human I believe you, I do not understand why she was driven mad, But we need you to help fix it."

"How do I do that?"

"She is inside you have to face her and, if you can make her remember."

The man is lead to the door of the building behind them.

The building is very dark with barely any light. It takes a moment for the man to adjust his eyes, even then he can still

barely see he hears a low sort of growl.

"Is that you?" he asks walking away from the door.

a few feet away from the door the growling starts to get louder it even echos in side the makeshift building

"Look its OK, your elder said that we had done nothing wrong."

He stumbles a little further before he is pounced on by the female. Her eyes are glassed over as she presses her body against

the man.

"Oh there you are." the man says a little shocked

She growls at him and and presses her claws against his chest

"Good you do remember me, look I don't want you to hold back this time."

The man stretches out his neck so he can kiss the raptor, after landing a few he sticks out his tongue as if offering it to

her.

The raptor accepts pushing him down even harder and nibbling on it.

the man struggles to free his arms every time he is almost free she tights her grip and presses her teeth more on his

tongue. After a few tries it seems the raptor is up set by this and begins to roar at him.

"No darling, No I'm not trying to get away from you this is our one chance."

She jumps up and slams her self down on him. This knocks the wind out of the man leaving the raptor open to to take his

tongue and chew on it again.

The man recovers and and stats to panic giving him the strength to slip his arms out and then push back the raptors heavy

neck.

She roars the sound echoing slightly but it sounds as if she is more annoyed then angry.

"please dear, You have to let me breath I won't run, I won't hurt you please just be nice."

she roars again this time it sounds angry with a sort of metallic sound to it.

"Please I need to breath and I want to use my arms, That's all you may hold me as tight as you wish, You may bite and

scratch till your heart's content.

The raptor growls deeply as if very angry with the new conditions but she dose relent.

"Thank you." the man says cradling her head as she kisses her

The raptor then grabs the man behind his back and begins to open his old wounds.

The man griminess and pulls her arms away this makes her growl and roar furiously.

he turns his head as he tightly holds on to her claws.

"I know I'm sorry but those wounds haven't healed." he breaths a bit heavily to push the pain back

"Here please use this part of me instead."

The man brings the raptors claws to just above his hips the raptor then seizing them punctures the mans skin.

This obviously brings the man pain but he turns away and grits his teeth fearful of how she would react to to another

request.

With the mans blood spilling out on to her claws the raptor growls again but, This time her body shudders a bit and she

stretches out her neck and tail.

Seeing the mans neck exposed she takes advantage of this she spurs her claws into the mans sides and bites down on his

neck.

The man Yelps out halve in pain but arches his back toward the raptor and reaches out his arms to hold her.

she rejects his advance by pulling one of her claws from his side and pining one of his arms down

The man raises is remaining arm and starts rubbing spots on her neck and close to her head

She gets excited and slashes at his pined arm and digs her claws even further into his side

The man squirms and writhes trying to hold back the pain

This upsets the raptor causing her to forcefully pounce on him

The impact is very harsh made worse by her claws this casing the man to scream out in pain that he had tried to choke

back

This seems to shock the raptor back to her scenes with a confused look she tries to leave

"No please Don't go!" the man says

she turns around and sees the man now quite bloody

"Look this is probably the last chance where both going to get, just come here and use me this one time with no

repercussions."

The man sits up and with his good arm beckons her to lay with him again

"Human you can't be serous look at your self I could kill you!" She says with a hushed hiss.

"You didn't tho even wile literally out of your mind you want it as bad as I do just come here."

the raptor sighs and pulls the human up in one swift motion

"No." she says flatly and leaves

The man exits the tend as well with the female her siblings the tracker and the elder have gathered

around the entrance

"human we herd the screams it sounded like she killed you"

"No I'm fine, so can i go now?" There seems to be a sad twig in the mans voice.

"Yes just leave the way you came."

It is night by the time the man gets back home where his friend marvels at his new wounds

"let me guess she was just playing with you?"

"Yes and it was worth it."