Quickie Freestyle Two: Use the Senses

Story by okariblackblood on SoFurry

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#2 of poems and written work

i just came up with this like a few minutes ago, and i decided to share it. This time i drew inspiration on Velvet Remedy and Little Pip from the original Fallout: Equestria Series, by KKat.


i wish you could see

how much you mean to me

i know you can feel it

but can you hear it? can you see it?

how much it pains me

how much i insanely try to do differently for you

you'd think im a nice guy, but im not

you'd think its simple but i rot

inside

im crushed, oh my. how could i?

how could we? could you please?

you seem to be, my only remedy

soft to the touch, my velvet remedy

i guess ill try, ill shoot from the hip

what you need is a little pip

to move you along, to the end of the song,

from the sky to the moon, i guess ill be ending soon,

but before i do, ill say, i love you.