Hue and Cry

Story by PoeticOtter on SoFurry

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My first good foray into the world of poetry! Learning about poetic meter helped to hone my thoughts. Interestingly, this poem follows the Shakespearean sonnet rhyme scheme, but uses dactylic trimeter with masculine rhymes for the quatrains. The couplet is the traditional iambic pentameter. I like using dactylic meter because it's dramatic, especially when reading it. The stressed syllables are in bold if you want to try it!


An cient, the times , were a won derful view

Out of the dark , came a vig orous light

Dra gons were gods of the world we all knew

Roar down the fire in a fur ious sight

Re lics were left in the ash es of death

Tang ible jewels proving past deeds of war

We , of the fur , are the sons of the breath

Cap tured by heat to the land we re store

All around us , the land grows with our minds

Still to this day do we wor ship the fire

With every dawn , the light al ways un binds

Weight of the spi rit we can not ac quire

We missed the chance to see the sky

The false pre tend ers hue and cry