a dark and stormy night
#1 of the dark night
It was a dark stormy night as Sheldon was walking home when he saw a fox hiding in the bushes. Sheldon said to the fox "what are you doping back there its cold and raining." the fox replied "I have no where to go I was dumped here." . I looked at the fox confused "who left you here? are you hurt?" . The fox looked at me "yes" and showed me the red mark on the side of his face 'When he threw me out of the car I landed on my face. I also have a couple of bruises elsewhere also." . I still watched the fox "here I live down the road I'll get you out of this rain and help you get on your feet." . the fox stared at me kind of skittish like and scared "o..ok" . I help the fox up and hand him my jacket "here you need this don't worry about me i'll live". he was kind of skittish all the way home he jumped at any noise and really looked afraid in general. we got to my dumpy house and he looked at it in awe. "Is this your place? you must be rich " we walk in "there's the couch if you want to sit do you want some tea or water?" "hot tea please" . I went to the kitchen and got him some tea and I heard him rummaging through some of the things next to the couch and I went into the living room and gave him his tea "so do you wanna talk about it or do you want to rest?" I said. he looked at me all surprised you mean your not going to kick me out?" he said. I lookoed at him confused again "no, why would I do that?" he looked at me with relief in his eyes "thank you, the last two people that had helped me gave me food and drink and sent me on my way" "no I told you until you were on your feet you want to rest?" . "yes please do you have a blanket?" "yea here you go" I hand him a blanket and he scoots closer and leans on me "thank you for helping me out" "of course this would have been a blessing when I ran away"
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