*NEW* Human No More Revamp 2: Trouble

Story by awesomeos on SoFurry

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#2 of Human No More

The Second installment of my revamp. This one contains incomplete vore.


WARNING: This story is different from the original. Maybe the original isn't even up anymore. I don't know. It was up when I wrote this. (Actually contains soft non-fatal vore)

"A dragon? I exclaimed. "How can you turn me into a dragon?"

"It's a simple potion actually, transformation is one of the more basic brews. Now if I make this for you, you have to promise to stop knocking on my door every day. The potion will be done in two years, I do not want to see you until then."

"Yes, of course. Thank you sir," I said as I rushed out of his house, my mind already filling with wonder at how it would feel to be a dragon.

I remember how easy it was for me to obsess about the time when I would finally be able to leave town. It was all that I wanted. I hadn't realized, however that two years from then, my life would be different. In that time, my mother fell ill and needed my help nearly every day. The time that used to be spent daydreaming had now been filled with planning for what needed to be done around the house. The dream of leaving slowly but surely drifted away into the back of my mind.

Two years passed quite quickly as I helped my mother out. Then two more years passed. My mother's condition got worse every day. By this time, I had completely forgotten about the potion I had asked for. I did not see the need to leave anymore with my mother so ill. My father quit his job as a guardsman and started hunting for food for our family. I don't think we were ever as close-knit as a family as we were in those years preceding my eighteenth birthday.

A few months before my eighteenth birthday, my mother fell very ill, worse than we had ever seen. While she slept, death stole her away. We woke up to find that she had passed. My father was overcome with grief at the loss of my mother. He never really was the same after that; he felt distant. I didn't realize how bad it was until I found a note on my bed a few days before I had turned eighteen. The note explained that he was leaving town and that he wished me well. I knew immediately that I would never see him again.

With the thought of my father leaving fresh in my mind, I started to think about the prospect of leaving myself. I had nothing here anymore. My family was gone and I had alienated myself from my friends in order to take care of my mother. The thought of the potion drifted into my mind and I wondered whether or not Josthaan still had it. I walked over to his house and knocked on his door. To my surprise, he opened immediately.

"It's about time you showed up. I've been waiting three years for you to pick up this potion that I had so kindly brewed for you."

"I'm sorry, I've just been going through a rough time in my life."

"I should say so," he started. "Your mother has died and your father has left you."

I looked at him incredulously. "Have you been spying on me?"

"Yes" He said plainly.

I was taken aback at how forward he was about it.

"I spy on everyone in town, you'd be surprised at what you'd find out. It's a bit of a hobby of mine."

He started off on a tangent about one of the bakers in town. I cut him off before he got to a quite specific lewd story about an affair that the baker was having. "So do you have the potion?"

"Why yes, of course I do," he said, sauntering over to a cabinet and grabbing a small vial of clear liquid. It looked rather plain and I had my doubts on whether or not it would actually do anything.

"Are you sure this will turn me into a dragon?" I asked.

"Yes, I'm no liar."

I looked at the vial and opened up the top. Stealing myself for a second, I drank the potion. It had a sweet warm feeling, not what I was expecting. "Okay, how long do I have before I turn into a dragon?"

"About an hour, i would say." He replied, slightly intrigued at my decision it seemed.

"And how long do I have before I turn back into a human?"

"I'm sorry?"

"A human, how long will I be a dragon?"

"I would say, most likely... Forever, or rather until you die, I would guess."

"WHAT?" I exclaimed. "Isn't there a human potion?"

"Well of course, but this one will take a while to make too."

I started to panic. "You told me that you weren't a liar, I trusted you."

"Well in my defense, I did what you asked and I didn't lie, it just never crossed my mind to tell you that this was a permanent potion. Now if I were you, I would go and pack before you can't fit in your house any longer."

"Is there any way you can make it faster?"

"Well, actually, you may be in luck. You see, I made a set of potions for someone in a similar predicament. He wanted to be a dragon as well but he had the brain to ask for a reversal potion. Now before the potion was ready, he had fallen victim to our little dragon out in the woods when he hunted a bit too long. I didn't give you these potions before because they are quite old and the process could start at any time this month after taking them. It wouldn't look good for me if suddenly you turned into a dragon while you were sleeping in your home."

I looked at him angrily until I realized that he was right. "Okay, so give me the antidote potion and I'll make it out of town, turn into a dragon, fly away from here, and then wait until I become human again. It should work out well enough, right?"

"Yes, that should work. You shouldn't see the effect until about a month has passed." He said, rushing to one of his cabinets. He grabbed a wooden box and opened it. Inside were two vials, one that looked similar to the one I drank, and one that looked quite different. He handed me the different colored one.

I took it from him and drank it. "Thank you for helping me leave. I don't know how to repay you."

"I doubt you'll find a way to get back here after you're gone so just take this as a gift. You'd better get going before you turn into a dragon."

I raced out of his house towards my home. As soon as I entered, I started to think of what I would need. I realized that there wasn't much that I could take that I would be able to use. I grabbed a blanket and a knife. I wouldn't need anything else as a dragon. I ran out of my house and into the forest. I had to make sure I was far enough away from town that I would not be seen turning into a dragon by anyone. I ran until I couldn't run any longer and collapsed, panting. My sense of time told me that an hour had almost passed. I rolled over to watch the clouds through the tree canopies. Maybe the potion wasn't going to work after all.

My attention was stolen away from a rustling in the bushes. I heard a twig snap, the crackle echoing through the clearing. I lifted my head up as I looked around, trying to pinpoint the source of the noise. "C-come out. Show yourself!" I yelled, standing up and darting my head around, looking for movement. In front of me, some bushes wiggled. I prepared myself for what was to come, whatever it was. The bushes continued to rustle until they stopped abruptly. A warm tingling sensation rose up my back, periodic, like a metronome. Cold, then warm, cold , then warm. I looked behind me to see what was there. The sight made me stumble onto my back. A large shimmering white dragon stood over me smiling down deviously.

"Are you lost?" It asked in a effeminate voice. She continued to smile toothily, showing off rows of razor sharp teeth.

"Well... Not really. I'm just walking to the mountains."

"Why don't you stay and chat for a while?" The dragon asked. I haven't seen a human around here for quite some time. You smell familiar." She said, curling her body around my position, blocking any escape. I looked around as her tail sealed off my only means of escape. I watched it wag slowly. It kept me on edge to see the dragoness' body language stay so calm. She was in control of the situation now and I didn't like it at all. I looked back at her, wondering what she was up to.

"...Yes, you smell like the human who managed to escape my grasp just earlier today. That one was a feisty one, hard to catch. It was quite embarrassing for me to lose such a tasty smelling morsel... But I guess that's why you are here, no? I assume that you got word of his escape and found it unjust to deny a creature such as myself something as delectable as yourself." She said, her tail sneaking up behind me to stroke at the back of my neck. I shivered slightly at the touch, fear coursing through my veins. Suddenly, her tail tightened around me. My eyes opened wide, looking up at her as I was suddenly lifted up to meet her eyes. "I'm glad that I found you, you're just the size to sate my appetite," She said, licking her lips. The long muscle traveled along her maw slowly as to tug some sort of reaction from me. I certainly showed her what she wanted as I started to struggle within the grasp of her tail. She opened her mouth, revealing the soft pink interior. The roof of her mouth dripped with saliva as strings of the viscous liquid could be seen connecting the roof and the tongue together.

"Please, can't we talk about this?" I pleaded. As I said that, her tongue crept out of her maw and started to wrap around me. It was incredibly long and dexterous. It wrapped around three times, coiling like an anaconda would coil around its prey, squeezing me. I shuddered as the saliva penetrated my clothes. Her mouth had closed and her tongue started to recede back into it. I tried to wiggle my way out but it was no use, her tongue was just too strong. I felt her lips touch my feet, almost kissing them before they were engulfed. "Please don't eat me. I don't want to die." I felt increased suction on my legs, she slurped me in up to my waist. I struggled harder, trying desperately to wiggle free. She seemed to enjoy my efforts to get away, purring at my struggles. Suddenly, her mouth opened up and her tongue drew me inside the wet cavern. Her teeth closed around me with a click and the tongue finally uncoiled from around me. I tried to regain my breath, the humidity in her maw making it hard. Her maw smelled of ash and meat, not unlike what I expected a dragons mouth to smell like. Without warning, the tongue that I was sitting on lifted up, squishing me against her hard palate. The tongue ran along my back, trying to extract as much flavor from me as possible. She certainly wasn't gentle about it. I was tossed around like one would toss around a hard piece of candy in their mouth. Although I was not in the best situation, I was glad that she didn't use her teeth. She continued tasting me until I ran out of energy. Her tongue settled down as I lay atop it, breathing heavily from exhaustion. I couldn't bring myself to move anymore, It was no use. She definitely sensed that I had enough and started to tip my head back. I could only watch as I slid towards the slick hole, gaping wide in preparation for my entrance. My legs slid in completely before the throat closed around them, a gulping sound reverberating in the cavernous maw while I was pulled ever closer to my demise. At that point, I had completely given myself up to her. She was in total control. I took one last look at the blue sky through the jail that was her mouth, thinking that I would never see it again.

I closed my eyes, fearing the worst. I heard a sound similar to what one would expect choking to sound like. Suddenly, I was thrown onto the grass, still wet from the dragon's maw.

"What? What did you do to me?" She asked, sputtering.

"What do you mean?" I asked.

"YOU BURNED ME!" She roared.

I looked down and, indeed, I looked red hot like a piece of metal fresh from a kiln. "I didn't do anything."

"Liar!" She hissed. Before she could say anything else, I collapsed to the ground, an intense exhaustion overtaking me.

"Get up!"

It was that same angry voice that I had heard before I fainted. I opened my eyes.

"You have a lot of explaining to do!" She snarled.

I stood up, or rather, tried to. Looking down, I found that my hands were now paws. I quickly looked behind me and saw two leathery wings decorating my back. I looked up at her, my excitement fading as I realized the position I was in.

"How did you turn into a dragon?" She interrogated.

"Well," I stammered. "I got a potion from this man in my village because I wanted to leave so-"

"Stop! That is enough. I want you to take me to this man so that he can make you human again."

"Why?" I asked.

"Why?" She mocked. "Because I want to finish my lunch, that's why! I've already let one human get away today and I'm not about to make a habit of it!" She took a breath "Dirty human." She muttered under her breath. "I should just kill him right now for being so insolent." She started pacing, trying to figure out what to do with me. "Humans are all the same, defiant and stupid." She continued to talk under her breath.

"Shut your mouth" I roared. "Do you think I want to be like this? Do you think I want to be some sort of... of beast? You don't understand me or anything I've gone through!" I curled up and sat, overwhelmed at my situation and on the brink of tears for the first time since I was just a child. In hindsight, I know that it was just a conglomeration of everything that had happened recently in my life. I think that the weight of losing everyone I knew was finally realized. I began to regret leaving home.

She looked quite taken aback at my outburst and, surprisingly, she didn't say a word.

After quite a while, she broke the epic silence between us. "Hi, I'm Serafine, but you can call me Sera."

TO BE CONTINUED