Naga Shower Novelization

Story by Zerky DeVore on SoFurry

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#25 of Vore

Originally posted on FA, on May 15th, 2013.

"This is a personal project that I've wanted to do. A story version of the comic "Naga Shower" by Beachfox. This was made with his permission (and input).

Seth, one of the few Nagas who goes to the the University of California, has a bone to pick with Josh, an annoying little mouse. When a chance meeting leaves the two alone in the dorm showers, Seth takes it upon himself to put the little mouse in his place, once and for all.

Contains gay sex, soft vore, and hypnosis.

The comic and characters belong to FA:beachfox

The story belongs to me.

Link to the comic: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/142411/ "


Naga Shower

By: BerserkerB

Original concept, characters, and comic © Beachfox

Like so many others, Seth hated communal showers. As a naga, he - as he often proclaimed- should be gifted with the finest of services, and not have to soil the underside of his belly slithering on the same tiles as a bunch of dirty, wet, dripping with who-knows-what mammals. Yet despite his protests to his professors, the RA, and the Dean, he was forced to occupy the same bathing quarters as these lowly creatures. All for the sake of an education that was so mammalian-biased Seth was sure he had stepped into an episode of the Twilight Zone where nagas had never existed.

And so he scrubbed his mouth clean, grumbling at the thought that such a fine institution such as the University of California could have fallen so low. It only took the naga a minute to clean his mouth out. Being a snake, he only had four fangs, and he barely had much use for them. Being of the superior serpent species, he had the privilege of being able to swallow his food whole.

Some movement to his left caught Seth's attention. He passed a glance, and found the stinging blue eyes of Josh looking up at him. Their eyes met for but a brief moment before Josh walked passed him, but Seth felt his stomach tieing into a knot (which was pretty big considering that his stomach was nearly as long as his body). Josh was a pretentious little mouse who was a member of a student organization known as Prey Pride. Seth thought that the name "Meat Pride" fit them much better. He watched Josh's reflection from the large mirror that hung over the row of sinks opposite the showers. The mouse kept his lower region hidden behind a towel, but Seth was still able to admire the mouse's gorgeous backside. For being a scrawny little mouse, Josh had quite the physique going for him. Seth hardly knew enough about the rodent's hobbies outside of being a "Meat Pride" advocate to know what he did to earn some of those miniscule muscles, but that did not stop him from enjoying them.

Seth spat out his tooth-paste and ran the sink. His head whirled with thoughts. It was a Friday evening, and much to the naga's luck, the dorms were practically devoid of student life. Most of them were already out drinking and partying, and since alcohol was not technically permitted in the dormitories - though that hardly stopped anyone - just about everyone who could be a witness would be too far away and too sloshed to witness anything.

Josh's shower turned off.

It was now or never. Seth had been hungering for that little punk of a mouse for months. He would have cornered the morsel months ago if not for his little "Meat Pride" friends. The advantage to a group was that one was never alone. But Josh was not with a group tonight. He was not surrounded by friends. He was alone. He was vulnerable. He was meat.

"Nice ass," Seth said with a whistle. He had slithered up to the shower as quietly as he could, and smiled as the unexpecting Josh dropped his towel in startlement.

"What the...? Dammit Seth!" Josh yelled, staring angrily at the naga. He bent down and picked up his towel, quickly trying to cover his modesty. "The fuck are you doing in here? This constitutes harassment, you know that!"

Seth continued to smile. He leaned an arm over the top of the shower divider, showcasing his size and superiority, but also to prevent Josh from being able to slip past him. "So? Gonna sic the RA on me again? Maybe your... 'Meat Pride' friends?"

The look of fury on Josh's face filled Seth with what some might call glee, though he would never admit to ever being gleeful. "You know damned well that it's Prey Pride you speciesist fuck! Now get out!"

Seth, of course, did not get out. He stayed right where he was. Although the towel prevented Seth from enjoying Josh in the full, he took in all the rest of the rodent's physique. Covered in white as bright as snow, Josh was a pristine example of a well kept piece of meat. He had a fine set of abs, nothing close to Seth's, but well shaped and just perfect for a mammal his size. His narrow muzzle, though full of rage at the moment, was rather cute, as were his sky blue eyes. "So shy and uppity at the same time," he said with a chuckle. "Such a cute combination."

That seemed to send Josh over the edge. "I've fucking had it with you, Seth!" The little mouse shoved a finger at the naga's face. "This isn't the fifteenth century, you aren't some Naga-lord, and we are not your fucking meat!" The fire and fury of the mouse's words might have sent a lesser predator to his knees, but Seth was not lesser, nor did he have knees.

"Oh but you are, little Josh." He spoke slowly and sensually. He inched closer to Josh as he spoke, carefully moving a little further into the shower. "You and all your 'Meat Pride' friends. You know it's true; I can hear how fast your heart races when I'm nearby." Casually, his left hand reached up to touch Josh's cheek.

"You miserable-!"

Seth interrupted. "Josh, look at me." He gazed deeply into the mouse's eyes.

"Wait just one-"

"Look at me!" The sudden increase in his voice caught Josh off guard. It was all the naga needed to secure his hold. His eyes glistened and swirled hypnotically. They became two little yellow mirrors, reflecting Josh's visage back at him. The mouse's eyes went glassy, and his pupils dilated as if the room were growing dark. "In every way I am your better. I am your master. Your superior. Your God." Josh's lower jaw grew lax, and the tension in his face slowly melted away. "We've been pretending otherwise, but we both know it is true."

Josh's voice was a whisper. "But... I..."

The mouse's will was beginning to falter. Seth smiled, knowing he just needed to push a little more. "Shh... Just relax now, little one." Seth let his hand wander along the contours of Josh's face. He brushed the mouse's whiskers back, and enjoyed how they popped back into place a moment later. "It's alright. There is nothing left to worry about."

"Please..." Josh whispered, his voice sounding strained. His grip on the towel loosened. One by one his fingers gave way, and the heavy cloth fell to the shower floor, leaving Josh's crotch open to Seth's lustful gaze. "Gh-" Josh attempted to speak again, but the naga's hypnotic powers had just about taken complete hold over him.

"Gooood." Seth ran his hand over Josh's head. He pushed the rodent's ears back with his petting. Josh looked so helpless like this. It reminded Seth of a child, so young and helpless, in need of someone wiser to help lead them down the right road in life. "Poor little Josh... Always so angry. Always so confused. How much happier you would've been to go through life without free will. It feels so good to give it up, doesn't it?"

Josh did not respond. He looked up at Seth with glassy eyes and a blank expression. His mouth soon hung open, slack and bereft of any consciousness controlling it. Seth moved in closer and placed a hand on Josh's shoulder. "Yes... That's the expression I've been waiting to see. Now... Kneel... And learn your place." WIth a guiding nudge, Seth helped Josh to his knees. He kept his hand atop the mouse's head, leading him to the erect pink shaft growing from Seth's cloaca. Seth's cock was quite serpentine, almost conical in shape as it went from a wide base to a small tip. It was already wet with pre-cum. Wet in anticipation.

Josh's mouth took in the pink shaft without hesitation. Seth continued to guide him, but under his influence the mouse took to his new place expertly. Seth hummed contentedly as Josh's mouth slowly encompassed about half his cock. Josh gave a muffled "Mrphh," when it seemed he had hit his limit. Seth was feeling rather enthusiastic with himself, though, and wanted more.

"Such a good boy. Wrap your lips around the base..." Seth's voice slowly trailed from his hypnotic tones. "... and I'll just give us a bit of privacy. You're such a shy little thing, after all." He pulled the shower curtain shut. Half his body stuck out, but he thought little of it. Josh would be finished soon - in more ways than one - and there was no one likely around anyway. And if someone did walk in, as unlikely a chance that might be, all he would think was that Seth was just taking a shower. Nothing could go wrong.

Despite hitting his limit at the halfway point of Seth's length, the mouse had no choice but to force the entirety of Seth's cock down his throat. He obeyed the order given to him by his new master, his mouth sucking hard upon the tender member engulfed in his maw. Seth relaxed, letting Josh do all the work. He recalled how Josh had always shrugged off his advances, claiming to be straight. The expertise the mouse seemed to have at sucking cock, however, gave Seth other ideas.

It did not take long for Seth to find release. He felt his body tremble as the rush passed from his loins and up his very flexible spine. He forced Josh's head to stay down as a wave of cum flooded the mouse's eager maw. He let go and allowed Josh to continue sucking, even as he pumped hot seed. Josh closed his eyes, trying to suck the torrent down. He grunted, and made a few muffled sounds. Seth did not take notice at first; the glow of the orgasm weighed his senses down. But when the mouse suddenly stirred, things went to hell quickly.

"Gah!" Josh's eyes flew open and he suddenly and violently pulled away. "What the hell do you think you are doing, you sick fuck!?" Josh's voice carried more rage than ever before. "Get the hell out of my mind!"

Seth was taken back by Josh's sudden grasp of consciousness. His mind raced with questions. Suddenly, Josh turned violent and launched at Seth, blood red rage in his eyes. Seth let out a shout of obscenities that echoed in the confines of the communal shower.

* * * * *

Kyle's hand stopped just short of the bathroom door. His ears perked when he heard the sudden scream coming from the bathroom. His heart skipped a beat, and although he was worried that something horrible was waiting for him behind that door, he felt like he needed to check it out. That voice also sounded familiar.

"Uh... Hey!" Kyle called after poking his head in. "Is everything okay in here?" He looked around and quickly saw the familiar serpentine body of his roommate sticking out from underneath a shower curtain.

Seth's face popped out from behind the curtain. "All good," he said with a weak smile. "Some ass flushed a toilet somewhere." He adjusted the curtain, and Kyle could have sworn he heard something - or someone - else in there as well. "I didn't realize you were there..."

"I wasn't," Kyle replied. He set his towel down by the sink. "I was in the hall." He cocked a curious brow at the brown-scaled naga. "What happened? They pour ice on you, or something?"

"Well I am cold-blooded, you know," Seth laughed. "It makes me sensitive."

Kyle relaxed. "Well, try not to hog all the hot water," he said with a chuckle.

"Hey, I appreciate it." Seth pulled the curtain over his face.

Kyle slipped out of his briefs and stepped into the shower next to Seth's. His mind was at ease. Of course it was only Seth. That guy's had trouble with cold water for as long as I've known him. The horse smiled as he lathered up his shampoo. Must be hard, not being able to enjoy a cold shower once in a while. Good thing that everything is okay, and no one was hurt.

* * * * *

"Now then... Where were we?" Seth scowled at Josh with his arms crossed. To keep the little mouse from blowing things, Seth had to resort to a much more violent approach at keeping Josh subdued. His long, thick body coiled around Josh from his legs to his head. He managed to secure Josh's arms at his back, and used the immense strength of his snake body to nearly crush all the air out of the mouse's lungs. For added measure, he wrapped the tip of his tail around Josh's throat, cutting any words off before he had a chance to utter even a whimper.

Seth held Josh as tightly as he could, without killing him. He eased the mouse's head against the shower wall, and put a hand on Josh's chin. Josh looked so timid like this. The fire and rage that were present but a few moments ago were gone, replaced with the instinctual fear of his ancestors. Seth stared deeply into Josh's eyes. "Such a strong will you have. Admirable, but misplaced. I am not your enemy here." He could slowly feel the mouse's mind slip. Josh's will was strong, but no mammal, no matter how tough he appeared, was immune to a hypnotic gaze for long. "I know you..." Seth carefully loosened his grip on Josh's throat. Josh gasped for air and whined. Seth made sure his tail held on tight, letting the little mouse know that any loud words would find him silenced permanently. "You fear being weak, so you want to be strong."

While he talked, Seth slowly let Josh's legs slip free from his coils. He carefully repositioned his prey, using the wall for support. Despite the slight freedom, Josh made no attempt to fight back. The hypnotic eyes of the naga, plus his strained muscles and lack of air, made it near impossible for the mouse to put up a resistance of any kind. Seth slid a part of his body underneath Josh, and leaned him back, lifting his legs up and spreading them.

"S-Stop..." Josh wheezed, his words barely audible. "Get out of my head..." Despite his words, Josh's body was already showing signs of submission. With Seth's powerful body against him, his will overpowering him, Josh's body responded sexually. The naga mentally grinned at the sight of Josh's erection, the tip actually dripping just minutely with some pre-cum.

"You think "prey" means "weak," so you flee from yourself." Seth eased his hips forward.

"Straight... Don't..."

"You want to be a part of something bigger. Something stronger. That's why you joined your little Meat Pride group."

"Prey... Pride..."

The tip of Seth's cock was wet and ready. He eased it against Josh's hole, rubbing the slick shaft tauntingly around the ring. "Isn't it?" He could feel the mouse's will fading once more.

Josh hesitated for a moment. His eyes darted, but he responded with a weak, "Yes..."

Seth smiled. His hips moved forward, and his dick spread that tight little hole ever so gently. "You want me to make you something bigger, stronger than yourself?"

"Yes..." Josh replied, a little faster. Seth slid in deeper. "Yes. Yes. Ye-ahhhh!" The power in his words jumped as Seth thrust hard into Josh's virgin ass.

* * * * *

Kyle's ears perked at the sudden "Ahhh!" that came from the shower next to him. He paused, his hands coated in shampoo, as he thought about what it could mean. It must be Seth... But now that I think about it, he isn't running any water. He's in the shower... but not running water... and I heard a loud moan... It dawned on the horse almost immediately. Of course! He's jerking off. With a sly grin, Kyle continued cleaning his long blonde-hair. Must be thinking about the naga girl that lives in the girl's dorm a couple of blocks down. Although... I could swear I've noticed him looking strangely at some of my friends. I wonder...

* * * * *

Seth rocked his body into Josh with gentle precision. Caution was the name of the game now. Josh was a fighter, both in body and spirit, as Seth had unfortunately learned moments ago. With Kyle in the shower next to them, the naga was playing this game like he could strike out if he fumbled the ball while double dribbling... Or however those sports terms went. "That's it, little one. Take pride in your submission." Josh's ass was virgin tight. Despite how slick Seth's cock was, it was a little rough digging deeper inward. This was most likely the first time anyone had popped his cherry, and Seth beamed with pride knowing he was the first - and last - to break in this mouse's taut ass.

Josh stared up at Seth with a blank expression. The little mouse's mind was zonked well and good this time. Although his eyes were locked with Seth's, the mouse was truly looking into space. Seth's long forked tongue slid out casually. He let it land on Josh's lazily hanging tongue. There were sensations no snake could ever describe properly to non-serpentine creatures. It was almost literally like tasting the submission. Josh's entire state, his emotions (or lack thereof) washed over Seth like a spring breeze. It was more refreshing than a warm spot of sun, and more delicious than the sweetest of nectars. It spurned the naga on, filling his loins with heat, and his belly with hunger.

"Only by giving up your free will can you be strong. Are you ready to be strong?" He pushed harder into Josh.

"Yes..." Josh whispered.

"Are you ready to submit?" Josh's tail snuggled Seth just under his hips. The naga swayed back and forth, pushing harder, digging ever deeper, asserting his power with every passing moment.

"N..." Josh hesitated for a split second. "Y-Yes..."

The end of Seth's tail slipped between Josh's open muzzle. "Shhh, little one," Seth whispered as he silenced the little mouse. He no longer needed to use his hypnotic voice, as Josh was far enough gone at the moment, and Seth needed to concentrate on the task at hand. He held on to Josh lightly, using the last few feet of his tail to keep a firm, but flexible hold over the little mind-zonked mouse. "There's nothing sexier than a prey who knows his place." Seth nudged his hips, eliciting a whine from Josh. "You should thank me for showing you."

Seth bucked his hips, and Josh moaned; the mouse's noises were muffled by the tail lodged between his jaws. With a few soft thrusts, Josh's cock began to leak. Seth grinned. "Good boy," he whispered sensually. Seth had no more words for Josh, not at this time, anyway. He arched the mouse back, and shoved his entire length into the tight abyss. He paused a moment to enjoy the warmth surrounding his cock; the tight flesh hugged every square inch like a latex glove. Seth closed his eyes and thrust at a steady rhythm. His tongue flicked out, catching the scents and heat in the air. Under his power, Josh was akin to being in heat. Seth could taste the desire looming from him. Mixed with his masculine musk, it was all too delicious, and Seth had to keep himself from devouring the mouse right there.

Not yet. First... I must claim him completely.

Avoiding noise was the hard part. Seth was filled with power and domination. He had wanted to take Josh for the longest time, to slam into the little straight-boy, thinks he's better than meat, milk suckling, little mammal for months. Drill into him until the skin of his ass was red and he dripped with the cum of his superior for hours. Pound him so hard, with such fury, that he would have no choice but to call out Seth as his lord and master, his superior, his god!

A rush of heat signaled the end. Seth gasped silently as his cock emptied into Josh. The load of jizz splattered against the fleshy walls, and easily spilled out from the tight confines. Seth fucked a few more times, pumping out every last ounce he had. His eyes slowly opened, and a look of absolute satisfaction grew upon his face. While reveling in the satisfactory glow, Seth leisurely unsnaked his coils around Josh. The mouse slipped off of Seth's cock with a loud shlorp, the naga's cum streaming down the shaft and spilling out of Josh's used hole. Josh fell to the floor in a lump, his legs still partially wrapped around Seth's hips.

Seth sighed. "I've been waiting too long for that." He watched as Josh scrambled to his knees. The mouse obediently began to lick Seth's wet shaft. Seth grinned. Josh was exactly where he needed to be. Without his pesky will holding him back, he automatically knew what he had to do in life: please his lord and master. "See what you've been missing all this time?" Seth asked, but with no malice in his voice. Josh just responded with a grunt of satisfaction as a bit of cum cascaded onto his nose. He promptly licked it clean.

"That's enough, little Joshy." Seth turned on the hypnotic charms once again. With his lust and pride as a snake satisfied, there was one thing left for him to do. "Look up at me, your superior." He placed a hand underneath his mouse-slave's chin and angled it so Seth's entrancing gaze stared deep into Josh's pathetic soul. "Poor thing. All your life you've tied your identity to your independence and power." He chuckled. "And now you have neither." He beckoned Josh to rise. Josh slowly rose, pulling himself up by climbing up Seth. The naga loved the poetry of the situation. "You want that back." Josh climbed higher. "Being a part of something powerful." Josh's hands reached for Seth's smiling face. "Something... Like me." Seth let his words flow like warm water over Josh. As he spoke the last of them, he opened his jaws wide.

With a gentle, guiding hand, Seth helped Josh to his feet and lead his right hand into the open maw. He closed his eyes as the furry appendage pressed against the the wet flesh of his mouth. His tongue danced along Josh's skin and fur, gathering the molecules of taste and flavor of rodent meat. It made Seth's mouth water. He gulped the arm down some, lodging it firmly in his throat. Suddenly, Josh began to fidget. Seth opened his eyes to find the little mouse trying with very little effort (but effort nonetheless) to pull away.

Seth flicked his tongue out to catch his slave's attention. Josh's head turned back to meet Seth's gaze, and the naga quickly hit the meekly struggling boy with another dose of entrancing hypnosis. Seth was surprised at how easily Josh was able to come out from the mind-zonking. Despite being a puny little mouse with no real skills but being a pest, Josh had an inner fire that Seth found rather... annoying. While Josh's attention was focused on Seth's eyes, he quickly crammed Josh's left arm into his maw and shoved it down until it and the right arm with firmly stuck in place.

Seth kept Josh from looking away while he gulped this appendages further down his gullet. If Josh's will was as strong as Seth feared, then the mouse's mind would need a strong dose of "education," lest he rebel too early and ruin Seth's meal. The process was slow, at first, but eventually he managed to clamp his jaws around Josh's muzzle. Though their eye contact was lost, Josh was still under Seth's control. Despite the rather loud grunt of rebellion that Josh managed to voice, his body made no attempt to fight the inevitable. Seth grabbed Josh by his buttocks and hungrily crammed the entirety of the the mouse's head into his drooling, stretchy mouth.

* * * * *

Kyle's ears perked up once again as a strange sound echoed through the wall from the other shower. It took the big, beefy stallion a moment, but he recognized the tone of that voice. Josh? He thought rather curiously why Josh's voice was coming from the shower that Seth occupied. He pushed an ear up against the tiled wall. A loud shlorp rang in his ears. Why would Josh be... But Seth is in there... So Seth, plus Josh, plus hot sticky wet noises... Oh! It came to him immediately. The stallion's mind drew an image of Seth butt-fucking Josh against the wall of the shower. He grinned. Though not into that sort of thing, Kyle had no problem with it. He had suspicions about Seth, but thought that Josh was as straight as an arrow. Who would've thought him the type? he thought. He went back to scrubbing down his body, ignoring any further sounds from the other shower.

* * * * *

With Josh's arms pinned together in the tight confines of his throat, Seth had no problem taking Josh's shoulders. The noise of his eating echoed off the walls, but Seth did not mind. He forgot about Kyle, his mind instead drifting between prideful satisfaction and gluttonous appetite. Josh's body tasted no better or worse than any other mouse he was devoured, but it was the fulfillment that filled him like air in a balloon, knowing he was about to put this impertinent little walking pile of meat in his rightful place, that made this meal all the more sweeter.

Drool cascaded down Josh's chest and dribbling down Seth's body and splattering onto the slick shower floor. As Josh's upper torso disappeared into Seth's dripping jaws, the mouse gave a slight grunt. When Seth reached Josh's belly, the mouse let out a loud whine that was audible only to Seth. Despite the growing apprehension in the mouse's voice, his body resisted in no way. In fact, as Seth angled Josh toward the ceiling some, the young mouse's cock was still rather hard. His mind was fighting between submission and independence, and for now, his submission was winning.

Not that it mattered. Josh was too far down the snake hole to come back out. Seth leaned back against a wall and rested his head against the palm of his right hand. He looked over what little of Josh remained. The mouse's lower half wiggled meekly about. Seth caught Josh's left leg to steady him. He felt the mouse shiver, and wondered if it was from the hypnotic arousal or perhaps Josh's fear bubbling to the surface. Seth's scaly lips curled tightly just above Josh's hips. There was something wonderful about feeling prey wiggle as they slide down the gullet. Seth could never understand why anyone would want to eat a meal in pieces, when any struggling just added to the fun.

Josh's body was already pressing into the stomach sac at Seth's abdomen. Although his stomach technically extended down into a large portion of his serpentine body, a stomach sac, similar to a mammal's, resided in Seth's upper body. His meals were first deposited there, and then eventually moved down to the rest of the stomach. Seth had some control, but nature would always win in the end.

With a tilt of his head, Seth guzzled hard on Josh's hips. The base of the mouse's tail slipped in, followed quickly by his buttocks. Just before it too disappeared into the naga's depths, Josh's cock gave a shudder. The mouse let out a muffled moan of pleasure, and released his seed in his ultimate finale. The cum splattered onto floor. Seth mentally smiled, but did not waste a moment to stop and admire his meal's last pleasure. His stomach quickly filled. Josh's arms pressed tightly against his belly, bulging the scales out slightly. As his upper body filled the space, the bulge grew bigger, taking on the contours and bumps of the prey within.

Seth slurped at his mouse's legs, taking the wiggling appendages in without a bit of trouble. Drool dribbled down his chin as he neared the finish. Josh's feet shook around just outside of his mouth. Seth paused for a moment, and lingered on the thought that this was the last chance Josh had of freedom. The mouse's last bit of experience with the world outside of an acidic naga stomach was about to come to the close. With a gulp, the feet vanished. As the lump they made traveled down the naga's throat, Seth slurped on the last of Josh's tail like a really big noodle. It filled him with a sense of childish glee.

With a small burp to release any collected air, the deed was finally done.

Seth stared down at his mouse-shaped belly with contentment. He placed a hand where Kyle's head was, and felt the little ball of meat move. He rubbed the squirming shape gingerly. It felt amazing to have his flesh and scales stretched tightly by the shape of another - soon to be non-living - creature. "Ah, little Josh," Seth said to the struggling lump, "already kicking again. A fighter to the end." Not that it does you any good, you arrogant little mammal. He squeezed where Josh's head was, and was rewarded with a heavily muffled scream that reverberated from the pit of his stomach.

* * * * *

Kyle was already brushing his teeth by the time he heard the Seth's shower curtain slide. He spat out the foam in his mouth and rinsed the remains out quickly while he heard Seth's body slither out from the shower. With a wide, cheeky grin, he said while turning to face the two boys, "Hey guys, have fun with-" Horror and shock filled him when he saw only Seth exit the shower. Not only that, but he had a very strange, and oddly familiar looking, bulge in his belly. "Your... shower... there..." It took him a moment, but Kyle realized that a naga, plus a mouse, plus wet slurpy noises, did not equal gay sex... but rather a snake's murderous appetite.

"I, uh... I gotta go."

Despite the speed at which he turned to run, Kyle was unable to escape before Seth caught his arm. "Every time we go through this," he thought he heard Seth mumble. Kyle was too driven by fear to work out what he meant by that.

"Get off, Seth!" He tried to pull away, but Seth's hold was surprising strong.

"Easy there, Kyle." The horse's ears perked at the sultrous tone. It sounded so familiar, like a memory that he knew was there, but which his brain was unable to find. Kyle turned to face his roommate, and their eyes met instantly. Seth's eyes seemed to swirl. The tension in Kyle's muscles slowly melted away, replaced by a longing to be still and obedient. "Shhh. It's alright." The words were like soothing music that caressed his troubled psyche. Kyle drifted, for a moment, to a world of happiness and willingness.

"Bu.. But..." It was hard to talk. The music in his ears and the swirling in his eyes made it hard to think. He barely felt the soft touch at his cheek, nor the drool escaping his slightly open mouth.

"You trust your daddy naga." It sounded like a question, but felt like a command.

"Y-Yes..." As he said it, a fire lit in the equine's loins.

"Good. Just relax."

"But you ate Josh." His mighty erection was already wet and dripping with anticipation.

"Don't be silly."

"But..." The heat was starting to take hold. Even as the world clouded around him.

"Sleep, Colt. Sleep..." The words echoed in Kyle's head. As darkness slowly set in, blocking his vision, blocking his thoughts, he felt a warmth cover him like a blanket. It snaked around him, holding him close, keeping him secure. It spread to every inch of his body, and though he could not see where it came from, he could feel it all around him. Eventually, the warmth concentrated inside of him. It seemed to grow hotter as time went on, boiling, growing more intense with each passing second. It was so good, utter bliss more delightful than getting first place. It grew so hot that it eventually exploded within him, but instead of pain, he felt pleasure riddled with more contentment than anything in life ever gave him. The heat slowly began to cool, and Kyle yearned for more. It was too good to let go. He could not let it go, the warmth... The lo-

Beep Beep.

Kyle's senses flared.

Beep Beep Beep.

Something was wrong.

Beep Beep Beep Beep.

It was that fucking alarm clock of his. With a resounding slap, Kyle reached over and shut the hellish machine up. As his eyes slowly opened, the world slowly came into blurry focus. The past night... What happened last night? His thoughts strained to tell him, but it just gave him a headache. He remembered going to practice - and how hard the coach pushed them - and then going back to the dorms to take a shower... The rest was a blur. A completely hazy, and yet strangely warm, blur...

* * * * *

Seth raised an eye up from his book when Kyle's alarm went off. As the big stallion opened his eyes to the world of the living, Seth cheekily said, "Have fun last night?"

Kyle managed to sit up on the bed. He looked as if he was waking up from a week long nap, or a really bad inebriation. "Crashed after practice," the stallion mumbled. "Don't remember a thing."

Seth smiled at hearing that. "You must have. You look like shi-"

The sound of Kyle cracking his neck loose drowned Seth's word out. " I keep waking up sore." He got up and started to stretch, loosening all the sore and tired muscles. Seth watched the stallion out of the corner of his eye. Kyle was naked, though in his dreary state he probably did not notice it, and if he did, he did not seem to care. "I need Coach to ease off."

"At least you keep your sunny disposition," Seth smirked.

"Bite me, Seth," Kyle replied with a glare as he passed.

Kyle scrounged around for a shirt. "Has Josh been by? We had a study group today."

"Haven't seen him," Seth said without hesitation. He glanced down for a moment at the bulge in his lower body. Although not not recognizable as anyone specific, and with much softer curves than before, the lump in his serpentine body was still mildly recognizable as a person. Seth figured that Josh still had a ways to go before his body was completely broken down. Even in death, the annoying little pest put up a fight. Seth turned his attention back to Kyle, who had finally found a shirt. "But I'm sure he's around."

"Well, if Josh shows up, tell him I went for a jog." As Kyle slipped the shirt over his head, Seth caught a glimpse of the cum smattered rear that Kyle had yet to notice. The poor stallion was so oblivious to things. It was a rather cute trait... for a mammal. "I need to clear my head." Kyle quickly threw on some pants, blocking Seth from gazing upon his delicious body.

That was the last thing Seth wanted. "No, Daddy Naga thinks you should stay in." Kyle's ears perked, and he turned to meet Seth's eyes.

"Oh... Okay," he said without tone in his voice. Seth grinned as the stallion's pants quickly tented. Such a well trained horse he was.

"And do some jumping jacks."

"Sounds good."

Seth set his book down, beaming. "No pants."

THE END

Thanks to Beachfox for letting me novelize his comic. I had fun doing this, and might try something like it again in the future.