Darren and Travis' first story

Story by Galaxyclouds on SoFurry

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some story I made for a friend, I might make more


It was as autumn, it was cold a lot of wind, leafs falling, in this little village people lived, people who like Gut punching, some like receiving, some like giving it, Here lived some people, not that much, it was a place full of males, there lived 13 animals, 2 bats, 2 hyenas, 1 fox, 3 dragons, 1 bunny, 1 armadillo, 1 squirrel, 1 deer and for last 1 hedgehog.

These where, Ratzo and Spike as for the bats, Travis and Chris for the hyenas, Kip the fox, Khan, Corbin and Melodies for the dragons, Darren the bunny, Phineas the armadillo, Hunter the squirrel, Jared the deer and Mark the Hedgehog.

Everyone was friend there; yet, some of them saw each other more like rivals, Spike and kip Saw Ratzo as one rival or annoying friend, Melodies and Darren just wanted to beat each other and then hang out.

Others were couples, Kip and Spike, Darren and Travis, Phineas and Mark.

The place was pretty much a place was known as Red hoodie.

It was a very cloudy and it seemed it was about to rain, Darren took out Travis for their third date, Darren was feeling Chris was getting his like and approval, since last time they talked for hours like friends, He was feeling like the strongest bunny in the universe, and he wanted to make his boyfriend his prince of the universe, his universe...

Darren: hope you're having fun, since we don't have much places here.

Travis: Dude I was born here, I have my own ways of entertaining here since child; you just came some months ago.

Darren: then excuse me for trying to be a good boyfriend.

Travis: You know I have fun with you even while sleeping together.

Darren: yeah thanks, but don't say it too loud for now, I'm scared your father is hearing it *says with a preoccupied face*

Travis: Calm down, He has watches us every night while we sleep.

Darren: WHAT?!?

Travis: since when you thought my father wouldn't take care with me, more if he's dating another guy.

Darren: I suppose, but that's a bit weird.

Travis: yeah, my father is extreme with me; he wants me to be a great hyena when I grow up anyway.

Darren: I know you'll be, just not muscled...

Travis Yeah, thank you for telling me my truths in my face*in an annoyed tone*

Darren: well, eh, you know, ah.... Hey look, it's about to rain we should go now

Travis: we can stay here

Darren: Travis, dear, we're in a forest, and our village is way away from here, we should go, now...

Travis: but.

Darren: now!

Darren and Travis started walking to their houses, yet they were still in the forest, walking slow while the storm was about to start.

Darren: You know, if we don't make it, we could stay in Ratzo's house, it's pretty near from here, and it looks like it's about to rain, like really about to rain.

Travis: why him?

Darren: you know he is my friend; he can let us be there for the night-

Travis: If we don't die from his cockiness first ...

Darren: aw, come on, he isn't that bad; besides, he has no mean to show off when he have no reason to, it's not like he's going to be cocky of why he is the greatest bat when we are not.

Travis: ok, but then let's get fast so we make it to at least my house then.

*just about that time rain started to fall*

Travis: damn

*both rushed as fast as they could to Ratzo's house which had the bat outside over a place he uses to see the starts but today uses to see the rain fall, as he sees both run to his house*

Darren: Ratzo! Ratzo: oy

Darren: can we stay in this night? Our houses are way to away.

Ratzo: sure.

*Darren and Travis got inside the house with Ratzo*

Ratzo: so, you should take a bath so you get no cold, and you don't wet more my floor.

Darren: yeah, thanks, we're can we leave our clothes?

Ratzo: I could wash them. Travis: thanks.*says kind of annoyed*

Ratzo: sure?

*both gave their clothes to the bat so he could wash them, yet they stayed with their boxers on*

Darren: so, let's take a bath.

Travis: it makes no sense to take a bath after taking a bath of nature.

Darren: it's because we may get a cold with that water.

*they enter the bath together*

Darren: you should be a bit better with Ratzo, I know you don't like him that much, but he's a pretty good guy when you do know him.

Travis: it's just for what kip and spike have told me about him, he doesn't seems like such a bad guy, but it actually a cocky ass bat that only cares to show off how awesome he is.

Darren: well that isn't that much of a problem, and he isn't like that, he sure is cocky but his not an asshole.

Travis: and he doesn't uses clothes I like, I mostly see him with only boxers and shorts, that's not ok.

Darren: well kip and spike don't use shirts too.

Travis: they are in training, it makes sense, and at least they use shoes, besides, out of those clothes they look p[pretty fashionable.

Darren: yeah, but that's not all you know.

Travis: I know, it was just a thing I don't like about him.

*they both come out and stay in boxers, they sit on a couch and hug each other*

Ratzo: your clothes are getting washed right now.

Darren: thanks bud.

Ratzo: would you like something for dinner?

Darren: want something bae? Travis: maybe some nachos, pizza and some big glass of soda.

Darren: eh Ratzo, come please, dude, he has no soda, he doesn't likes it.

*Ratzo comes in his pajamas, some blue star printed socks, long pajama pants and a white special bat shirt, and his normal necklet*

Ratzo: so what would you like?

Travis: since when do you wear normal clothes? Darren: Travis!

Ratzo: normal clothes?

Travis: you're the only one who always goes shirtless.

Ratzo: any problem with that?

Travis: BE NORMAL Darren: yeah well, let's be calm here; sorry Ratzo Travis is a bit stressed right now.

Ratzo: then at least calm him.

Travis: what If I don't want to?

Ratzo: Just Shut up

Darren: let's not be angr- Travis: Say that to your own face, you ugly being

Ratzo: just stop sayi- Travis: or what? You will show me how much you suck?

Ratzo: stop that rig- Travis: or that you barely even win. *a bit of silence, that comment touched Ratzo's little nerve, Ratzo just tried to reserve his emotional rupture containing his anger to remain in his ideal of no violence towards others*

Ratzo: ... enough? Travis: not really, I would actually like to know why you draw if you never show it, is that you can't draw? *Ratzo is ongoing with no violence, but that comment just made him explode inside; he clenched his spiky fangs in fury and lifted his fist, yet just didn't moved* Darren: sorry he's acting like an ass, but don't even touch him.... *said Darren lightly*

Ratzo: no Travis, I just don't like showing them off...

Travis: like if that was truth, you only show off about things that are not real about you- 'BAM'

*a loud punch by Ratzo towards Travis' head*

Ratzo: stop or I'll- 'THUD' - AAAArnghhhhhhhhhhhhh

*Ratzo is interrupted by a punch hitting him in his middle belly right in his belly button and getting lifted into the air by Darren using his sucked punch insides Ratzo's bat belly, one hand is put in Ratzo's back and starts pushing down making the sucker punch that was already inside him go deeper and deeper, Ratzo gets its air out of him as some drool starts to fall into the floor, he isn't able to touch floor as Darren is a bit taller than Ratzo leaving his paws in mid air, Darren was blinded by his fury, even if Ratzo was his friend he just wanted to make him feel pain*

Darren: or you'll do what?

*Darren lets the bat fall to the ground, Ratzo starts to gag as his air gets inside him, he's hugging his belly.*

Travis: well, that's way better...

*Travis stands near Ratzo and takes his shirt off*

Travis: well this is how you like it anyway.

*Ratzo's belly has a red print of a fist in his middle gut; Ratzo's belly is really soft and delicate, gets red with ease, as punches get inside with ease too*

Ratzo: why the he-'SPLAT'- OOOfffff *Ratzo's air gets out again as a big bunny paws stomps his stomach as hard as Darren can, Darren then stands in one paw, his paw over Ratzo, his now shitless body can show how long his belly is and how deep things get inside his belly. Ratzo with his jaw wide open unable to close it as a way to relieve pain opens more when Darren Jumps one paw into Ratzo's belly crushing the insides of the thin Bat. Darren stands away of Ratzo, leaving a Red and pounded Bat belly alone, Ratzo trying to get his air back unable to move by the pain he had in his stomach*

Travis: well thanks lov- *Darren views Travis with anger*

Travis: eh? Don't tell me you didn't like punching this bat bag.

Darren: don't make me hit my friend's weak gut just to defend you from something that was already your fault...

Travis: come one, you have already told me you have punched him in his belly a lot of times so-

Darren: I have PLAYED with him, but I wasn't really hitting him with force, here I treated him like if he was the fault of the problems in the world.

Travis: he did punched me first, so there you have a reason to pun-

Darren: NO, just NO, You made him angry, even if that's hard, you really think is funny that someone comes and tells you can't do a thing that you have been doing with love all your life, you just don't tell an artist they can't draw, how much time do you think that takes?!?

Travis: but-

Darren: or tell him that he's a liar, he sure gets to say that he's good at things, but you think he says it like that's real? I mean, yeah you don't know him that well, ok, but not because of that you have to be such an ass with him, after he just let us in his house, washed our clothes and was going to give us food, for no reason other than being a good guy.

And now he's in the floor trying to relive his pain, a pain that I gave him just to protect you from a single punch to your head.

Travis: well you should have punched him that much times or that hard.

Darren: Oh, now it's my fault.

Travis: well, maybe, you just crushed his belly.

Darren: and, now, you're defending him for hitting you because you were and idiot with him?

Travis: YES!

*silence and tense hits the room as Ratzo starts to get up hugging his belly*

Darren: what?

Travis: yeah I was being a douche, I know it, but I just felt to take it out of my head.

Darren: that's not, how even, I mean, what?

Travis: I just felt to tell him that.

Darren: why? That's not a way to get out things, even worse in that guy's face.

Travis: I just did it, just like you when you punched his gut, It just came out.

Darren: but- Travis: dude, were both impulsive, too impulsive, that's literally how we met...

Darren: ...

Travis: look Ratzo; I'm sorry for all this, I just was an ass with you.

Ratzo: it's ok

Travis: eh?

Darren: ah?

Ratzo: it already happened, so no need to be mad at it, it was the past, just try not to do it again.

Travis: but, look at your belly it's still pretty red, you should be mad.

Ratzo: should I be mad, OR you want me to be mad? I don't feel angry for both of you, so just accept it.

Darren: well, thanks.

Travis: I still don't get it, but thanks, and sorry.

Ratzo: it ok, calm down.

Darren: you have always liked getting ab eating right?

Ratzo: you're both perfect for each other....

Darren: what does that mean? Ratzo: so, again what would you like for dinner? *says while putting his shirt on again*

Travis: pizza, soda, nachos, French fires-

Ratzo: how does your father even support your stomach?

Travis: eh, well he gets me everything I want... somehow...

*time passes as Travis tries to accept how easy Ratzo forgives, and they get to eat together, while all trying to get better along even after that random fight*