Making Your Wish Come True

Story by hamnat on SoFurry

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Hello, everybody! This is my first submission (and hopefully not my last!), and I wrote this for Skatelian and Picklessauce69's story-finishing contest! If you don't know about it already, you can find it over here: https://www.sofurry.com/view/869330

Max of 3500 words, preferred limit of 3000. Sad to say I needed 3102 (or around that, anyway). I probably won't win. BUT! I'm hoping you guys enjoy this all the same.

Thanks Skate and Picklepup! And good luck with your budding romance. Hope it flowers into something as awesome as you two are!

EDIT: I managed to pare it down to, I think, exactly 3000 words. Woo! :)

EDITx2: Okay! Results are here: https://www.sofurry.com/view/885333 I didn't get first, or second, but HEY! Apparently I got the accolade for "Hottest" entry. So that's something at least! I was going more for cute than hot, but I will TAKE IT DAMMIT! And another thing!! ..... A big big thank you and a hug for Skate and Pickles. They set up all this, made it possible, and I really hope they keep each other blushing and euphoric for a long time to come. They deserve each other. In a good way!


Tim's mind raced at Jackie's words, the snow leopard recalling a story he'd written so very reminiscent of this very moment. He quietly kicked himself for not keeping his notebook around, or really anything to stop her from finding out that he was getting very, very excited down there. But...she was just so cute. Her blushing, sweet smile, the way her eyes gleamed in the starlight, the way her fur shifted and danced in the cool caress of the night breeze.

"Tim?" she said, startling the boy from his reverie. He realized he'd been staring at her, and the insides of his ears reddened as they pinned back in embarrassment.

"Y-yes, Jackie?" he replied meekly to her questioning tone.

"Did you make a wish?" Jackie asked, the girl blushing herself. Why? she wondered quietly. He's so cute and shy...But why do I want him to kiss me so badly?

"I-I, I mean...y-yes..." stammered the hapless snow-colored kitten. He was stuck in a strange place; he wanted to run and hide, but also to stay forever with this amazing girl.

She giggled a little bit, trying to cover her own nervousness. "Well? What did you wish for?" she asked him, shivering again. No...not shivering, trembling with anticipation. She became very aware of the very small distance between their and faces. It made her tingle all over with an odd, restless warmth. Jackie decided that she was going to give this boy his first kiss whether he took it or not."I...I mean...I wished..." he stammered slowly, uncertainly, and most of all: in a whisper. Jackie's heart jumped as she recognized that he was leaning in, thinking he was going to kiss her.

He took a deep breath and finally resigned himself. "I wished for-MMMF!!" His words were cut off by the excited, impatient canine. Jackie had taken his approach as a sign that he wanted to kiss her too, and she just couldn't wait any longer. Her lips pressed to his, eyes closing tightly as she enjoyed the intimate moment. Her paw slowly came up to his cheek, the girl deciding that--not only did she want to kiss him--she wanted to keep kissing him!

Tim's heart hammered away in his chest. She was kissing him! He'd been inspired by the stories of intimacy. He'd poured his desires into his own works, trying to fill a void that he thought he'd never have filled otherwise. Until tonight, of course. He gave a soft whimper, feeling as though this were some trick or something. He couldn't dare believe that the perfection he'd gazed upon during their bus ride was now kissing him. But truth is stranger than fiction, or so they say. And as he finally gave in to his own desires, he gingerly placed his hands on her body. His hands practically gravitated to her hips, resting along the curve of her form.

Jackie's heart skipped a beat once again as she felt his hands on her hips. Oh gods, don't stop touching me! she wanted to scream. All that came out was a soft, muffled moan. The kiss lasted just a little bit longer until they both retreated. Their breathing was heavy, the kiss having lasted long enough to leave them out of breath.

"J-Jackie, I-" Tim started, but was stopped by her finger on his lips.

She grinned sheepishly, blushing furiously under the light of those heavenly stars they'd forgotten about completely. "You don't need to say anything, Tim. I...I know what you were doing on your phone earlier on the bus..." she admitted to him.

It was his turn for his heart to skip a beat, the feline looking very alarmed until she put her finger back on his lips. "I read while you were writing...it was really very good, you know," she said to him. She just wanted to hug him against her breast, wanted him to unleash those desires he'd locked away in the text of his stories.

For his part, he was dumbfounded that this girl not only knew what he spent most of his time distracted with but actually approved! He finally managed a shy, sheepish smile of his own, and he gave a cute, quiet little shrug. She giggled at that little shrug and leaned in to kiss him again, more gently than the last time. She lowered her muzzle a little bit and shyly asked, "I don't imagine you'd write a story for me, would you?"

Tim blinked and tilted his head curiously. "I guess I could write you a story, if you really wanted..." he replied, still uncertain that this wasn't all just a big prank by the popular kids. He thought about it for a second, "I could write something about you and one of the football players, I guess...or maybe your favorite celeb-"

Her finger had found his lips again. She shook her head and went back to her shy, demure little smile. "I want you to write a story of us," she said. He became very aware of her breasts gently brushing against his chest, of her hands on his shoulders, and of his erection throbbing angrily in his shorts. "But...I don't want you to use words..." she finished her earlier thought.

She looked so shy, so cute, and so alluring. He whimpered apprehensively, looking into the darkness of the sleeping bag. He could see down her shirt, eyes locking in on the curve of her cleavage. He wanted her so badly right now, and she seemed to return the favor. His teeth caught his lip for a few indecisive moments before he decided to go for it.

Jackie let go of a quiet moan as she felt his touch on her still-growing breasts for the very first time. Through her blouse and bra, it didn't do much in the way of sensation, but the very idea of it made her whole body tingle. She recalled that there was people all around them, blushing furiously at the idea that any of them could catch them at any moment. Or the teacher, for that matter! Somehow, that just made it more inticing. Particularly since her partner had been writing porn under their noses for a long time now!

The snow leopard continued his fumbling, uninitiated caresses. He looked up into her eyes, watching her expression as he continued to touch her. It's not quite the same as my stories... he observed, noticing how it wasn't as easy as simply touching her. He shyly nibbled on his lip before lowering his hands to the hem of her blouse. He looked into her eyes and asked, "C-can I take your shirt off?"

She wanted to groan with frustration. His shyness was only turning her on more and she almost wanted him to just rip the wretched thing from her body. She forced herself to whisper her response, "Yes, get it off me already..." She winced internally, her response much more forceful than intended. But as the cloth prison began peeling from her, she knew it achieved what she'd wanted. She raised her arms up and let him take her blouse all the way off, the garment quickly forgotten. It'd be so easy to realize what was going on, but they were too caught up in each other to care.

Tim's paws somewhat haphazardly tossed her blouse a couple of feet away from them, his focus much more intently focused on her mostly-bare upper body. His fingers lightly brushed against the shape of her belly and waist, tracing along until he finally worked up the courage to touch her breasts again. He looked up at her face now and then, watching her reactions to his touching. This was his first time at this and he didn't want to blow it already. She's so soft...and warm he observed, not even thinking to say it out loud.

Jackie, for her part, was just enjoying the touches. As awkward as they were, she found a pleasure born of desire. After a minute of this shy exploration, she decided to help things along. She nosebumped him gently, taking advantage of his momentary cute, cross-eyed hesitation to reach back and undo her bra. They both blushed deeply, and he gingerly took hold of the garment and pulled it from her body. His eyes shone with the gleam of an archaeologist finding a long-lost treasure.

Jackie blushed furiously, withdrawing away from the leopard shyly. Her breasts were still on the small side, lending to the very tomboyish figure that Tim found enticing. If only they were bigger... she thought to herself self-consciously. "They're perfect..." he said somewhat distractedly. The canine blinked in surprise, her ears perked up at the unexpected compliment. Did he say perfect? she wondered incredulously.

Tim looked up in her eyes, and then back to her breasts. In fact, he repeated this awkward moment for several seconds before hugging her chest to his and kissing her again. Whatever reservations the two of them had quickly melted, and they locked their lips together, building the passion for what was to come. One fluffy arm withdrew, releasing her body so his fingers could carefully latch on to the nearest breast, a fascination gratis his age and raging hormones. His palm molded itself to the curve of the soft, firm globe, and his fingers gently squeezed and ran circles. He broke the kiss for a moment, panting as he looked for where his thumb needed to be to toy with her nipple.

Jackie gasped loudly as his thumb brushed against it, the nub firming up as cool air took advantage of their momentary separation to leak into the sleeping bag. "Quiet down out there!" called the teacher. The two young lovers felt their fur stand up from the shock, thinking they'd been caught. But once they realized they were safe, they giggled to each other. Rubbing her nose against his, she pecked his lips and pointed out with a giggle, "You know...you're supposed to be writing me a story..."

Tim blushed furiously and blinked. He looked away for a second, as if thinking, then turned back to her with a smile. "Jackie's nipples were hard with desire, her breast swelling into Tim's palm as he carefully caressed it," he narrated. He blushed even deeper, his ears almost glowing, as he admitted, "Tim's member was painfully hard, trapped inside of a cloth prison within a cloth prison. The boy was so incredibly turned on by the perfectly sculted form of the beautiful siren sharing his sleeping bag."

Jackie moaned again, almost stuffing her fist into her mouth to keep herself quiet. "He leaned in, brushing his nose against her neck, and then found her breast," he continued. "His nose brushed lightly against the perky nipple, the leopard boy marveling and wondering how he'd ensnared such a beautiful girl," he said. "And then, he parted his lips...and brought warmth back to the cold-stiffened peak."

Jackie barely stifled her cry of pleasure as his feline tongue dragged against her nipple. Her voice betrayed the strain of trying to hold in her desires as she said, "Oh gods, it's rough!" Tim felt a flurry of warmth in his chest, feeling happy that maybe his stories could be brought to life after all. His tongue flicked against the nub, the feline chuffing happily.

"The canine girl, Jackie, felt a pool of warmth building in her belly. Her remaining clothing felt stifling and constricting. She begged Tim to free her from the coils of the cloth snake," he said.

Jackie whined a little, "J-just get them off me already..." Her own paws had found their way to his pants, pulling down the zipper and fumbling into them to try and pull his member free of his underwear. Tim obediently worked, undoing her own jeans and then hooking his thumbs into her panties. He looked up at her, sheepishly grinning again. Jackie lifted her hips, arching her back so that her clothes weren't trapped between her rump and the soft padding of the sleeping bag; the snow leopard wasted no time in freeing her from them. He pushed them down far enough that his foot was able to take over from there, distractedly tugging at the pants while his paws focused on her breast and lower tummy.

"Tim's paw trailed down her flat, sexy tummy, working slowly down to where heat radiated from the girl," he said as he went back to narrating. The fingers teased around her navel before moving down to seek out her cleft. He accidentally pressed right against her clitoris as he found it, and Jackie almost shrieked at the intense, unexpected sensation. Her own paw grabbed his wrist tightly while the other stuffed its fingers into her mouth. Tim blinked for a few seconds before grinning and rubbing his fingers against the button he'd found.

Jackie felt as though her head were spinning. The celestial vault of the sky tumbled dizzily as those fuzzy fingers rubbed back and forth against her button. Her breasts heaved as she gasped for breath, the canine feeling that warm glow in her belly quickly growing and filling her up. She did the only thing she could think of. She bit Tim's shoulder, closing her mouth around its curve while almost screaming in orgasm. A couple of the closer students looked around, curious about the strange noise, but otherwise it was successful.

Tim winced from the pain of her teeth clenching on him, but took it as a sign to hold his fingers still. Lucky for Jackie, he was pressing his digit directly on the sensitive button, unintentionally dragging her orgasm out. After what seemed like an eternity-after the constellations in the skies above them had mixed together to form one indecipherable cosmos, her body relaxed and she let go. She panted weakly, letting go of his wrist and shoulder.

Tim sighed a bit as the pain passed, his fingers exploratively probing. She whimpered softly, bringing her fingers to stroke against the member she'd managed to free earlier. Tim huffed, feeling sensation a more intense sensation than he'd expected. She leaned forward and whispered into his ear, "What comes next, Tim? What happens next in the story...?"

Tim moaned a little as her fingers brushed a sensitive spot on his member. "Th-the girl pushed him on his back a-and straddled his waist, pressing her delicate flower intently against his naked girth. S-slowly, she moved back and forth, before using her paw to line it up and sink it into her depths," he described to her. Jackie went back to blushing furiously, but did as he'd envisioned. She shifted the two of them so that her cunny was pressing against his member and she laid atop him in the sleeping bag. She reached between the two of them, taking hold of it while rolling her hips against it.

"Sh-should I be gentle?" she asked teasingly, referring back to one of the lines in his story. He looked up in her eyes and shook his head. "You should do it however you want," he replied. She kissed his nose affectionately, then shifted him into place and sank herself down on his member.

The two teens gasped as they brought their hips together, slowly sinking him all the way into her body. "S-so tight," he moaned. "So hot," did she. Together, the young pair began to roll their hips, slowly working into a rhythm. "Oh Tim...!" she moaned quietly into his ear, still doing everything she could to avoid alerting everyone else. The chance of being caught doing something so naughty made her tense up, accidentally squeezing the boy.

"Ah! D-do that again!" he moaned to her, rolling his hips carelessly into her. She nodded absentmindedly, "Uh-huh," before clenching her muscles. It was an unpracticed attempt, but still somewhat effective. He throbbed inside of her, little squirts of his pre-cum already splashing against her cervix. She relished in the feel of him inside of her, the warm feeling of being filled up, and the way his body felt against her bare breasts as she moved.

The snow leopard huffed and puffed, his length throbbing away within her as she rode him slowly. He realized he wasn't going to last much longer. "Th-the f-feline...throbbed inside of his partner...getting so c-close to his climax. He hadn't l-lasted long...and wouldn't last much longer!" he said.

Jackie continued riding him, either ignorant of his warning or ignoring it. She didn't care, she wanted to feel him release inside of her. "D-do it..." she whimpered in his ear, totally ignorant of the fact that people were pointing their way. "Do it ins-side..." she moaned as quietly as possible. Tim continued to pant as his penis tingled and trembled with impending release.

"T-Tim...held off for...as long as he could" he huffed. "B-but eventually his...barbs flared inside of Jackie...Ooooh!! C-cumming!" he moaned. He grabbed her hips and thrust up into her, the snow leopard moaning loudly as his barbs flared into the walls of her passage. And much as in his story, there was an explosion of sound and pleasure as his seed poured forth from him and painted her cervix. The two of them had lost control of the situation, letting bliss take over as his uncovered member released its fertile load into her unprotected womb.

Their hips bucked and rolled against each other in the throes of their shared orgasm, the two sharing the sounds of their pleasure with the giggling audience and the quickly approaching, disapproving teacher. But even as the doom of these starcrossed lovers approached them, they cared for nothing but the bliss they had brought each other and intended to continue to give.

Tim looked up into Jackie's eyes, smiling happily. "D'you like your story...?" he said lazily.

She blushed and grinned down at him, "Did you get your wish?"