Commission Story: A Starry Night Sky

Story by Ennek on SoFurry

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#7 of Commissioned stories

A commissioned story for MizukiThia over on FA, a sort of un-official sequel to "The Night Shift" story


It was a pleasant night in city as the seasons begun shifting back to a warmer climate. Crickets chirped, nightingales sang softly, and not even a cloud dotted the sky.

Enek pulled out his phone and checked the time. "Hm, 10:20. I think Betel gets off soon, maybe I'll check in and see how she is." The human leaned against the wall of a nearby building as he muttered softly to himself out loud. "The bar she worked at is only just a few blocks away too." The thought occurred to him, nodding as he settled with the idea and set off down the sidewalk.

The bouncer at the door gave him a slight smile, waving him inside. Enek returned the smile as he passed the familiar rhino-morph and ascended the small stairway. The bar inside was noisy as per usual, but nothing over the top at least. Certainly not like it had been the first time Enek had wandered in here looking for a drink. Working behind the bar was exactly who he had come to see, Betel.

The brown and white patterned fox-morph had her purple hair tied into a ponytail tonight that draped over her left shoulder as she hurried from task to task. Taking an order one moment, she was pouring a drink the next, then right into cleaning glasses behind the counter, yet despite all the work she perked up the moment her eyes met with his. With a coy grin on her face as the human sat down on a bar stool at her counter, she leaned forward on it towards him. "Hey there cutie, something I can get you?" Betel punctuated it with a playful wink.

"I'll take my usual." Enek laughed softly, it was a routine they'd been through more than a few times as pulled out his wallet and put a few dollars onto the counter. A moment later Betel returned, taking the money and placing a glass of rum and coke down for him. Picking the glass up and bringing it to his lips, the human took a sip of the cool liquid. "I meant, ALL of my usual." He put emphasis on the word as he looked back at her from behind the glass.

The fox-morph flicked her tail behind her as the grin slowly spread even wider. "THAT..." She put just as emphasis back at him. "...will have to wait til I'm done." She ignored the pained sounding groan from him, as he always did when she told him that. Turning away from the counter she bent over to pick something up off the floor. Glancing back over her shoulder at him, Betel knew the fabric of her work skirt was straining against the action and even riding up a bit. She didn't care who else might have noticed, because it excited the fox-morph just knowing that he was watching her do it. Enek simply grinned, bringing the glass up for another sip as he watched the not so subtle show.

An hour passed by as the human made small talk with the occasional curious 'morph that pulled up a seat nearby, either eager to learn more about what one of his species was doing here or a familiar face catching up with Enek. A voice boomed over the crowd, silencing all conversation as attention was drawn to the source. "Last call was half an hour ago you lazy bums, get out of my establishment and I'll see most of you tomorrow!" The voice belonged to the bar owner, Edward a giraffe-morph, who stood just beside the exit wearing a clean suit and small squared glasses. His jovial tone was punctuated with laugher and groans from the crowd as they slowly filed out.

Enek exchanged a quick glance to Betel who gave him a knowing nod before leaving along with everyone else. Leaning up against the brick building, he waited a few minutes before the fox-morph exited as well. With a soft sigh she reached up and pulled the hairband out, letting that purple dyed mane flow freely behind her. "My shifts done but there's still one last order to serve for the night." Betel gave him a smile as they wrapped their arms around one another in a hug. "Your place I take it?" The fox-morph's tail swished excitedly behind her.

Shaking his head, her expression shifted to one of puzzlement. "I had a different idea in mind this time actually. It's such a beautiful night out so why not we go for a bit of a walk?" Enek returned the smile with his own as he turned them towards the direction of the park.

Her ears perked up at that before swiveling back in uncertainty. "Oh Enek, I don't know. I mean I would want to get a shower first, and change out of my work uniform, and maybe pack a small picnic basket, and-Mm.." Betel's words were cut off mid sentence as Enek took her cheek in hand and tipped her mouth to his in a kiss. Sliding her hands along his chest as they gently teased one anothers tongues using their own, they parted a few moments later leaving the fox morph panting softly and wanting more. She nodded her head, wrapping her tail around his waist. "A walk sounds wonderful." The pair chuckled softly together as they strolled down the sidewalk, the warm spring night air accompanying them along the way.

The park was as peaceful as ever, though there was a few late nighters out for their evening jog like the middle aged housewives in spandex body suits right out of an 80s earth montage or just the casual nocturnal 'morph observer that parked themselves on a bench while they figured their evening out, the distinct lack of the normal population that inhabited the park during the daylight hours lent a strange serenity to the area.

Enek and Betel walked hand in hand giving a polite "hello" to those curious enough that watched the human in particular, though likely in part to his companions own loveliness Enek was sure. A grin passed his face that she noticed, squeezing his hand in hers and swatting his backside with her tail. "You're thinking something naughty aren't you?" She leaned up and whispered in his ear.

His grin widened at that. "Perhaps, eager to find out?" Turning the teasing back on her and watching as her tail bristled in embarrassment.

Betel looked around cautiously in case anyone had even overheard the exchange just now. "What?! Are you sure here? I-I mean.. no! This is too public Enek." She swallowed hard, a shiver running along her back at the mere thought of doing something with the human, yet at the same time a part of her entertained the thought awhile longer. "Let's just get this walk of yours over with."

Releasing her hand, Enek wrapped his arm around her shoulder instead and hugged the fox-morph into his side. Her reaction had been more than telling, and not entirely surprising either. "I've got more than just a walk in mind, you'll see." His playful wink was met with a half concerned frown from her.

He led her off the normal path and towards a sloping hill half hidden by the surrounding trees. They stumbled slightly in the relative darkness but steadied one another as they climbed to the top to take seat there. Betel looked around, ears turning to and fro searching for sounds as she met Enek's barely noticeable gaze. "It's so dark, there's nothing to see." She smiled sheepishly at him, confused about why he had chosen this spot out of them all. Even the lights of the city seemed to be shut out from the very area.

At her question the human laid back onto the grassy hill, wrapping his hands behind his head. "There's plenty to see Betel, just look up." He chuckled softly.

The curious fox tipped her head up to look, gasping once she realized what Enek had meant. "Oh wow, it's beautiful.." An arrangement of stars spread out overhead as her eyes adjusted. Slowly she laid back just as he had, gazing out at the constellations she once watched when she was young. A smile crossed her lips as a satisfied murr left her throat when one of his hands wrapped around her, hugging Betel to his side as they watched together. Slowly names begun coming back to her as she looked across the field of stars overhead, Taurus... Aries.. Cassiopeia.. and then her favorite of course, Orion; which held the star she was named after, Betelgeuse. The soft sounds of night were the only accompaniment, the chirping of the crickets in particular lulling Betel off into a drowzy haze. She lost track of how much time had passed simply laying there beside Enek, but it was a moment she was more than happy to hold on to as long as she could.

She was pulled however from that bliss as she felt Enek shifting away from her, whining softly in her throat as the world refocused around her. Betel looked up into the face of her human companion, a wide grin on his face as he leaned down, bringing his lips to hers. Her whine immediately turned to a soft moan right into his mouth as she wrapped her hands around the back of his head to gently hold him during the embrace. Their eyes slowly drift closed as tongues playfully explored and teased one another, the pair simply enjoying the warmth of one another. Betel's tail twitched, wagging on the grass beside her as Enek's fingers brushed across her soft cheek fur.

It was his turn to moan softly as she ran her hands through his hair, curiously feeling the stark difference where the shaved part of his head met the mohawk atop. She followed it all the way down to where it tapered off just above the back of his neck. Their lips slowly parted, a soft sigh leaving Enek. His fingers traced just underneath the hem of her shirt as he inched it up her chest, watching the fox for her reaction. Looking into her eyes, she looked back back up into his and nodded her head in silent agreement. Pulling the work shirt the rest of the way up with help from her now, they tossed it a short ways away. The dark blue, lacy bra cupped her chest; rising and falling softly with each excited breath Betel took.

A shiver ran through the fox-morph's body as she felt a familiar bulge pressing against her inner thigh, reaching down and grabbing his clothed manhood. "Well hey down there, seems like someone wants to play." She giggled softly, giving him a wink.

Grunting a response Enek nodded his head. Watching with a slight grin on his face as her hands reached up to the button on his pants, slowly popping it open with deliberate slowness before doing the same with the zipper. A shiver of pleasure ran through his body with a soft moan escaping from his lips as the fox fished out his cock from within. The cool night air blew across his length but was quickly replaced by Betel's warm, furred hands.

As she looked up into his eyes, Betel opened her mouth and slid out her tongue with an "Ahhh..." urging him to come closer towards her. With her fingers wrapped around his manhood, she began stroking him as Enek crawled forward on his knees. With a surprised yip, the fox squirmed beneath him as he reached down and slipped the straps of her bra off her shoulders before pulling the lacy front down her soft breasts, leaving her top fully exposed. She giggled softly with a smile as she squeezed her soft orbs between her arms, feeling his heavy balls come to rest right on them and leaving the rest of his shaft for her mouth. As she licked her lips and leaned up for it, the fox unceremoniously took his cock into her mouth. Sliding her tongue around the tip in a circle and closing her lips around him, she continued stroking the rest of his length that wasn't inside. The almost bitter, salty taste on his cock led Betel to assume he had been sweating, likely from working today but yet despite this she didn't mind the taste since it belonged to him, and something much tastier laid within.

Betel closed her eyes with that same smile still on her face, moaning softly as his scent surrounded her. It was never one she could try to explain or describe, but the fox just knew she would be able to pick his out in a crowd. It was both comforting and arousing at the same time, as she rubbed her thighs together feeling herself getting wet and continuing to suckle on his length. Feeling his length throb in her grasp and mouth, Betel almost had an orgasm on the spot when she felt his pre cum bead from the tip. One of her favorite parts as she spread it around with her tongue before the slickness was lost to the rest of the moisture of her mouth.

His hands were placed on either side of Betel's head, as he sat leaned over her chest. As breaths caught in his throat or moans slipped out instead, the fox was pleased with her work. Ears perked forwards towards him so she could catch every little gasp or stutter he made and repeating the action that caused them. Betel slowly began bobbing her head, taking the rest of his length into her mouth and feeling him subtly rocking his hips towards her in response. Murring softly in happiness as she felt his tip tease the entry of her throat with her lips pressed tightly around him, she pulled his cock slowly back. The fox savored every moment as she felt that thick shaft sliding along her tongue until only the tip remained within her lips; before reversing direction and taking him back inside. This slow pace continued effortlessly as her tongue lapped up and down his cock, feeling every twitch or throbbing from his manhood. The otherwise silent night was broken with the heavy sounds of every breath he took, and Betel knew he was getting close.

Here she was, blowing her human lover in the public park at night and knowing at any moment someone could wander by; and yet despite her earlier apprehension Betel almost wanted someone to find them now. She entertained the thought of someone stumbling upon them just so they could see the hazy eyed, blissed out expressions they were likely both wearing at this moment. Betel continued rubbing her thighs together, feeling the slick arousal running through her fur and dripping down to her ass. Certain that even the human's nose could detect it now as she swallowed around his cock and moaned with it filling her mouth. Taking another deep, lust filled scent of her lover in, Betel opened her eyes and slowly pulled his length out of her mouth. Picking back up the pace by stroking his wet manhood however and looking up at him, the fox was panting softly as well. "Cum inside my mouth, let me have it all." Reaching her other hand up and gently kneading his heavy balls, Betel knew it was going to be a lot.

Enek smiled, opening his eyes to look back down at her. Brushing one of his hands across her cheek as he clenched and sighed shakily. "Was about to tell you too, so close now.. Ahh.." Moaning again as she took him back inside her mouth and stroked his shaft faster. He really wasn't going to last much longer, feeling her tongue dance around his tip and bathing his manhood. As she gently squeezed his balls in her hand, his hips bucked forward and head tipped back. The sensation pushing him firmly over the edge as he moaned, balls tightened in her hand as the warm cum shot from his cock, pouring across her tongue and down her throat.

Closing tightly around his tip and sucking as she had a small orgasm of her own in the same moment. Squeezing her thighs tight together as she cried out softly, knowing that her panties and work pants were likely soaked through now. Betel made sure not a single drop escaped as she swallowed load after load of his creamy spunk. The fox savored each time she felt his warm cum travel down her throat, feeling it pool in her belly. Continuing until she felt he was done, affectionately squeezing his balls beneath him once again and letting his cock slip from her mouth with a satisfied sigh. The fox-morph's tail waved happily beside her as he laid down once more on the grass next to her. Panting hotly and pulling her to lay in the crook of his arm, Betel in turn nuzzled happily into him as the pair stared back up at the stars.

"Mm, thanks for the treat." She winked at him, rubbing a hand across her midsection like she had just gotten a hearty meal. Glancing down her body and pulling open the waist of her pants, Betel could see even through the limited light how soaked she was with the way her fur was matted down. "You mister, have gotten me all dirty now. So.. wanna help me get clean at home?" She asked him with a tone dripping in seduction.

Enek turned his head to meet hers with a smile as he caught his breath. "Sounds like a plan, just give me a minute here though." Chuckling softly as he let his head rest back on the grass.

Laying her hand along his chest, and intertwining their legs together, Betel wrapped her tail around them both. As the rest of the world came back into focus around her, she could hear the soft crickets once more along with the quiet nightingales. The fox took a short nap in his embrace, feeling the steady heartbeats in his chest as a soothing rhythm.

Catching his own breath from the post climax high, Enek closed his own eyes for a few moments to enjoy the sensation. With the warm vixen pressed into his side, Enek sighed softly. 'The park was definitely the right idea', he had thought to himself as the last image he saw before letting his eyes drift closed was the soft illumination of the stars overhead.