Ch. 1 Amnesia-1st paragraph
#1 of Dream to Reality-Follow Your Passion!
Hey guys, what's going on! Here is the first paragraph for my upcoming story, Dream to Reality-Follow Your Passion! It starts off as a collaboration with Zoqu the Dragonheart, but we both agreed to break off after a certain city so we can develop our characters better. However, we will still keep in contact with each other after the separation, because we want to end off the stories with a bang! At least, part 1 of my series will be ending, but all in preparation for a part 2!
Ch. 1 Amnesia
I woke up in an alley, my body reeking of pain and soreness. I don't remember anything about what happened before now except for a few details. All I recall is that my name is Mar, and I'm 18 years old. I have spiky, dark brown hair, hazel eyes hidden behind red-colored contact lenses, and a moderately-toned body. I am 5' 9" tall and weigh 190 pounds. I'm wearing a dark orange, longsleeve shirt, dark blue jeans, a dark blue vest-jacket that is orange on the inside, a pair of brown hiking boots, and a blue-camouflage hat, always on backwards.
So, what do you guys think of the first paragraph? Don't worry about there being more, because I've already written the first 3 ½ chapters! I started writing mine early so that I can type it out a couple of chapters before so Zoqu can read it and get his side of the chapter written around what I've written. This may sound a bit self-centered, but until we get to the mainland, the story focuses more around Mar and the start of his journey. After reaching the mainland, Zoqu and I will have to agree on what happens from there, since it's about both of our sides.
Hope you have a good day furries!
Until next time, I-I'LL SEEEEE YA!