First Kindness
This will be my first story I've ever written and it will be a series. Constructive criticism will be greatly appreciated.
"Wake up Kitty, it's only an hour before we arrive to your new owner's home." The voice speaking to her seemed so kind, so friendly though Jaccie knew this was just a facade. The man speaking to her cared little about how she felt or if she was comfortable, as she already knew from the black eye she received when she refused to get in the back of the van. The van was freezing and it wasn't helped by the metal benches in the back. She wanted to be back home, back in Dukat with her family.
The Iguana from the passenger seat got up and squatted down next to the frail Leopard "Now little missy, if you dare try to hit me again you're gonna get a lot more than a black eye. Oh and thanks to you getting me angry I'm gonna have to cover that up." Jaccie watched as the lizard pulled out a tin that contained make up. He proceeded to make harsh strokes and dabs attempting to cover up her bruise. "That's not going to do anything you know. You need to apply it softer." The iguana grabbed her by the ear "Now did I say you could speak whore?" The pain shot threw her body, made worse by her throbbing eye. He continued to apply the make up somewhat harder than before, obviously frustrated with the lack of results. It wasn't long before he stopped, evidently proud of his work.
"Oi, we're coming up on to the destination, is she ready?" sounded a gruff voice, apparently the driver, who hadn't spoken the entire trip. "Yeah, she's ready." The slimy lizard grabbed her breast and squeezed, hard."Real ready." The van jerked to a stop without warning. "Alright bitch, I hope you're ready to meet your new master." Jaccie was shoved out of the van without warning. She would have fallen if it wasn't for someones arms. Looking up, she viewed a large wolf with cigarette in his muzzle "Get off me now girl!" She hadn't realized she had been holding on to him for a few minutes now. The wolf took her arm and shoved her in a car "Stay put, your master will be here soon." She sat down in the car and waited, her paws were cuffed so even if she tried to escape she couldn't. The wolf slammed the door and walked away. She looked over to the van she was in before and she saw three people, the large wolf, the iguana, and someone new she guessed this man was her buyer. She looked him over, He was a tiger and he most certainly was rich. For some reason this gave Jaccie some satisfaction, knowing that she must be worth a lot. The tiger pulled out a wad of bills and handed them over to the wolf. He nodded to them both and began walking toward the car.
Jaccie didn't realize it until now but she hadn't took a breath since she had been locked in the car, she took a deep breath and readied herself for what was to come. She had been sold a few times before but the people who took her always sold her off for more than she had been sold for before, that is not until the used her first. Everytime she gets a new buyer the first thing they would do is stroke her leg, but then move up higher, feeling the deepest parts of her. While she was deep in thought, Jaccie didn't notice he had already gotten into the car. He put his hand onto her shoulder and she looked up at him. "Well aren't you going to tell me?" Jaccie looked at him, she didn't want to say anything to him she didn't want to acknowledge him with her speaking to him. "I asked you what you name was, Darling." "J-Jaclyn" She said it involuntarily, it was such a mundane question that the response was already hardwired into her being. "Well Jaclyn, I would like to welcome you to your new life with me."