Monstrous Reviews

Story by Thunderdramon on SoFurry

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#15 of Story Commissions

A quick commission done for FA: Jerichowing Involves kaiju related incidents, fatty TF among other things.


"Damn, you really know your food spots!"

"Hmmf!" Jericho nodded as he stuffed his face with his second hamburger, the second of many. Across the table from him, Thunder hummed a quick tune as he finished his fries off one by one, occasionally taking small bites of his sandwich. The whiskered dragon and dinosaur loudly devoured their food, idle squeals of joy erupting from their location, mostly from Thunder's pudgy companion. A restaurant chain under the name of "Monstrous Eats" had opened in the area. While fast food joints weren't a usual for the eastern, he figured one day of eating out wouldn't do that much damage to him. Jericho seemed incredibly elated for the fact that the place was carrying a "Buy two, get three free with a friend" special which left them with enough food to satisfy several people, or perhaps just themselves.

As Thunder ate the last of his fries and began working through one of his lemonades, the dragon couldn't help but glance around the area. "Huh, there aren't that many people."

It was nothing short of surprising. From the dinosaur's raving about this place, one would have assumed that such a large fast food place would be mostly packed or have a line or two leading up to the register. Aside from the staff that took the orders and made the food, it was nothing short of a ghost town. Jericho didn't seem to hold any suspicions as his pudgy fingers found themselves grabbing a soda and unwrapping another sandwich fiercely. He didn't have the same amount of love of food as he did, but the more he kept going through his meal, Thunder found himself eating almost as furiously as his friend.

Minutes passed before Jericho and Thunder finished their meal, the two males rubbing their round and chiseled stomachs respectively. The eastern dragon had unbuttoned his shirt what with every breath he took straining the front, leaving his muscled green torso out in the open.

"Haha, and to think, you said you weren't hungry." Jericho chuckled as he rubbed his belly, t-shirt riding up along the surface of his torso.

Thunder waved him off and stuck his tongue out as he rubbed along his abdomen. "Yeah, though I still feel kinda peckish."

"Same. Got enough cash for another special?" Jericho asked.

"That's of no need."

Before the eastern dragon could nod in response, one of the staff had come up to their table. In his hands, he laid out yet another full course meal meant for several. "On the house."

No convincing was needed for the two to dig in once more. The server left with a grin on his face, turning his head back toward the two gluttons. Despite working at the bottom of the barrel, he loved his job oh so dearly. The poor fools had no idea what exactly was in store for them.

Thunder and Jericho drooled at the sight of the food, immediately digging in and stuffing their faces with the greasy fast food. As they ate and ate, a tight feeling nagged at their bodies. Thunder's stomach was free of any constrains, but he could still feel the sleeves of his shirt stretching alongside his back and the waistline of his pants. Jericho's t-shirt stretched more and more, riding up along his stomach until it resembled an odd looking bra over his chest, bright orange belly bumping against the table. As the server watched, the grin on his face grew wider as he noted the sounds coming from their ravenous feeding were like music to his ears.

Thunder snorted and growled as his shirt ripped from the sleeves, the tears traveling down to his back. His biceps burst from his sleeves. The eastern dragon blinked, sparing a glance at his food to look at his clothing. Instead of seeing rock hard muscle, he was greeted to the sight of a thick bicep covered in fat, the peak barely there. He looked along himself, noting that a doming green belly nudged against the table alongside Jericho, meaty green pectorals sagging a bit. He merely shrugged his shoulders and continued eating, barely taking any bites and just gnawing on his sandwich. Jericho's tail thumped against the ground unceremoniously, his t-shirt long since ripped at the sleeves of his packed arms and chest.

Thunder let loose a guttural sound as he finished his meal, a yelp emerging soon after with the sound of two cracks and one slam after the other. The steel chairs that supported the two had groaned and broken under their weight, the amount of fat packed on almost staggering. Without missing a beat, the server soon arrived in his clean cut apron and bowtie with yet another serving of food. He dropped and left it without a word, their obnoxious sounds filling the restaurant. As the two went through their meal, their bodies gave a throb that shook the floor. Thunder's body was the first to respond. His legs exploded out of his jeans, pudgy, thick thighs and legs kicking over the table and the food along with it. Jericho fell to his back with a burger still in his mouth as his body filled out in front of him. He couldn't see anything over the doming surface of his belly and the scaly mountains that served as his chest. Everything about the two males expanded and swelled in size, the ceiling not long for them.

The server took cover behind a stand deeper inside the restaurant, the sounds of limbs thumping against the floor and kicking over the tables more than enough for him. Thunder and Jericho erupted with an inhumane roar, their tubby yet firmly packed bodies pushing against another tightly. Two meaty tails thumped and slapped against the walls of the establishment, dragon and dinosaur left with nothing to do but push and grind. Euphoria and hunger filled their minds, words beyond them as they thrashed about the tiny building. Growls and snorts were the only things that came out of their muzzles, their bodies taking on a more feral appearance. Frazzled fur and manes, thick yet slightly short limbs and enormous legs, feet and large tails to support their bodies.

As they grinded and pushed, their bellies seemed to be fighting for space as well as well as their endowments. Two throbbing shafts pulsed and throbbed in tandem in some attempt to make themselves known beneath the underside of their massive, heaving stomachs. As their stomachs were pushed up from their own sheer size, a deep, pleasurable growl rung out between the two. They resumed their avid pushing, this time attempting to focus and let their bulging, growling bellies meet along with their drooling cocks. The ceiling burst as they erupted in size once more. Wide shoulders and heads cut through the roof like tissue paper before the two monsters stood up in their full glory.

The building couldn't contain their utter size, their tails causing more collateral damage as the thick and long appendages thumped against the roof and the sidewalk. With a content snort, the monstrous eastern dragon took the first move as they grew. With a firm bump of his belly, Jericho toppled over onto his back, the ground shaking from the tons of weight. The pudgy dinosaur monster blinked as he growled in confusion. The building sized creature above him soon draped himself over the dinosaur's body, their bloated stomachs meeting once more. Two, meaty, sausage thick hands gripped Jericho's chest, Thunder rumbling as he firmly grinded against Jericho to the ground. The twin meaty shafts throbbed in excitement, their size enough to push their bellies back and let their own prides fully grind together, pre cum drooling about and smearing their stomachs along with the ground underneath from the thick ropes they produced. The blonde haired dinosaur purred and growled feebly as he tried to push the eastern dragon off. The two enormously fat monsters rolled about in their ever increasing size, the city around them in utter chaos. People stared as the two creatures thrashed about yet remain in one spot. Scaled and smooth paws the size of large cars made the ground shake with each quake, Jericho's toes curling at the sensation. Thunder hooked his ankles around the dinosaur's own feet, their packed and pudgy digits grinding and curling together as their tails began to knock over buildings with ease. Every grind and squeeze of his chest brought the dinosaur and dragon to another level of feral, carnal pleasure and they hadn't even moved from their spot.

Underneath the debris of the former "Monstrous Eats", the server emerged from the rubble, patting his apron and pulling out a phone. As he dialed a number, he couldn't help but stare at the green and orange monsters in the street as they grew, block after block slowly succumbing to their immense pudgy bodies and size.

"I wonder how big they'll get. Judging the way they ate, I doubt they'll care once they get back to normal...if they do. Kaiju never usually do."