reveng of the stories final

Story by freakdudebob on SoFurry

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#2 of the reveng of the stories major fourth wall destruction


"Ok I'm back. What has happened to him?"

"Well we had his arms broken a few times and his legs as well. The cool thing about being able to make a story is that ANYTHING can happen!"

"Well now that I'm back, let's get back to a story we can show people!"

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テ「竄ャヒ弩hy is the room spinning? What the... you have got to be kidding!' "MMMM!!!" テ「竄ャヒ彡rap. Still gagged' Robert thought as he finally woke up to find himself suspended by ropes that were spinning around the room. He saw Penna and co. following him around and when they saw that he was awake, Penna took out a bull whip. Crack! Robert felt a searing pain on his back that was soon followed by others all over his body. After what felt like a good thirty minutes, Roberts's entire body was covered in whip marks. Tears were running down his face as he struggled to get free.

"Get the cattle prod!" Penna told Malual as she through down the whip. Malual handed her the cattle prod and she turned it on. ZZZZZZZZZZ Robert let out a muffled scream of pain when it touched him.

"Good! we're not finished yet Robert so we don't want you to faint. HEY!! TYPE SOMETHING SO THAT HE DOESN'T FAINT!!"

"OK!! UMM... HOCUS POCUS YOU CAN'T FAINT ROBERT!"

"Ok... where were we?" Penna said as she pulled up the cattle prod and zapped Robert with it again. And again. And again. And again. I think you get the point. Well anyways, after the cattle prod was used on every reachable part of poor Robert's body, Penna got an inflatable butt plug coated in a concoction that should be familiar. With a certain hot sauce and some fire coral. If you don't know what I am talking about, read through the Kael series.

She shoved the thing forcefully into Robert's tail hole and Robert let out another yelp of pain. After a few seconds, he felt a severe burning sensation. It got so bad that he began to cry again. Penna began to inflate the plug causing Robert even more pain. By all rights, he should have passed out but the hocus pocus spell worked!

Penna then pulled out a machete and brought the blade down on Robert's arm cutting it clean off.

"WHY WOULD YOU MAKE ME DO THAT?!? SOMEONE ELSE WRITE SOMETHING ELSE. AND UNDO THAT LAST THING!!!"

Penna then pulled the whip back out and attacked him with it again. Blood was being drawn from some areas while others were just plain raw. She then pulled back out the cattle prod and did what you do with shampoo. Sort of... whip electrocute repeat. The plug was unnoticed because of a searing blinding pain in his asshole. Robert could not even think straight. Penna got tired and went back to her own story with Malual leaving Robert alone with Sarah and Elise.

"Cut him down Elise." Sarah said. "We want to see how long you can hold your breath Robert." They carried his struggling body to a pool that was right in the room. Tying weights to his legs, they tossed him in with his arms tied behind his back. they let him hit the bottom before they jumped in to save him. When they pulled him up, he was panting. The plug was still in him and they were not going to take it out. They put on some scuba gear and dove after Robert when they let him drop again. He could now breathe underwater! The put weights on his arms so he could not move them and then they opened a jar that had a jelly fish in it...

The pool had salt water in it... I am not going to explain myself.

They placed the jelly fish so it would be stinging Robert's cock. Robert shivered but he could not move at all. They then cut off his air and let him sit without any new air for a little bit. Before he drowned, they turned back on his air. They then pulled out a nose ring. Robert saw this and freaked. He did not move very much though. Elise grabbed his head while Sarah placed the nose ring on his nose. She closed it and it went straight through his nose. He screamed and the respirator came out of his open mouth. Luckily, they got the respirator back into his mouth and held it there. His nose hurt even more because of the water and a jelly fish tentacle got onto his nose. His asshole still burned but he could not comprehend anything now. He was practically brain dead. They took him out of the water and took off the weights. He did not even try to get away. He could not think about anything. They pulled out the plug while whispering "This will teach you to make stories of us attacking our little brother!" Robert's eyes popped open and he remembered everything. He was so angry that he managed to obliterate the fourth wall. He now had complete control over the story.

"Wait... What? Why would you write that??"

"I didn't write that. Oh shit!!"

"SARAH AND ELISE ... DELETE! MY BODY ... BACK TO NORMAL!! PENNA AND MALUAL ... STRAIGHT TO HELL!!! NEW GUY WHO'S NAME I DID NOT THINK OF ... TOTAL ERASE!!!! THIS STORY ... IS ACTUALLY KIND OF NICE SO I'LL KEEP IT!!!!! FOURTH WALL ... UNBREAKABLE!!!!!! EVERYTHING ... BACK TO NORMAL!!!!!!! THE END!!!!!!!!

"I WILL NOT LET THAT HAPPEN AGAIN!! HAVE FUN READING THIS!!