Chapter One: Banished

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This is my version of "The Phantom of the Opera" I would recommend you read the book, or watch the one with Gerald Butler (The Phantom) I liked it. There's a lot of singing in the movie so giving you a heads up.


** ** It was dark stormy night I ran back out of the burning manor for breath of air and then ran back in. I was looking for the two girls that should be in the building. I couldn't find anyone and ran back out for more air. On my way out a beam fell and hit my right eye. I fell to the ground screaming in pain but I got back up and ran covering my eye with my hand. I got close to the doorway and then a explosion knocked me off my feet and I hit the ground hard. I got to my hands and knees when I herd a scream I looked the saw the whole village there looking at building being burned. I was to week to get up. I needed to breath but my lungs where full of smoke. The man that lived in the house walk over to me he had his cane in his strong grip "I'm sorry..." that's all I could get out when he hit me with the cane on the head with the cane's iron handle and knocked me out.

I woke up noticing that I was bound in a cell. My arms were tied behind my back and a bandage was on my eye. I tried to see what kept my arms bound. I saw rope wraped around my wrist. Has I waited for my trial it felt like time was slowing down to the point that it had stopped. As I continued to wait for my trial my oldest friend Christine came in. She was and will always br the one true friend I have. She walked up to cell that I was held in with sadness in her eyes. I looked at her and she looked back at me. "Why did you do this?" she asked with tears coming down her face. "Izaak's daughters are dead." I couldn't believe what I have herd. I looked everywhere in the manor for them but I never found a trace of them.

"I... I..." was all I could get out as the guilt of the the lives that still had so much to live for was ended by one of my creations. She ran away from me I could see her tears hitting the floor. I couldn't do anything to get her to come back I couldn't even talk to my only friend. I never felt so useless in my life. I couldn't do anything but wait for for the trial. When the guards came and brought me to courtroom. I waited for them to speak.

"Blaze the Firesmith your creations where found at the home of Izaak, and you confessed to him. We have far to much evidence against you that we do not need a trial." said Christine's farther and my godfather James being the head council. He took me in when my parents died. They died when I was little. "Your punishment is banishment." I ran to tell them my side of the story but a guard grabbed me and through me at ground. "You'll be banished tomorrow night." I heard him I looked up at him with fear. I got up and I tired to tell him but this time the guard hit me in the back of the head wit his staff and knocked me unconscious.

I woke up back in the cell I couldn't go back to sleep I was terrified of my punishment. Then I herd the the door open. I looked but saw no one I could fell like I was being watched. I kept looking for someone but did find a single soal. I then turned around to see a dark figure looking at me. I couldn't see its face because darkness consumed its head and a portion of the torso. I couldn't tell who it was but that it had a snack in its hand. I looked once again and all I could he had a robe on the only ones that wore robes were the councilmen. He had dark fur there's only two that have dark fur. I noticed the ring he wore it belong to James. "What do you want?" I asked him.

The next day came by fast as I waited for my punishment but it felt like it would never come. I was lead to the the edge of the village and I could hear all the villagers yelling at me. "Murderer." someone yelled and threw something at me. I could fell several things hit me but I couldn't see who was throwing them or what was being thrown at me because of the sack on my head. I kept walking and hearing the things that they called me.

"I knew this would happen." said a female.

"Murderer." said someone what he said was the most conman one I could hear.

"Baby killer." was last one I could hear one before they were salience.

"Hello Blaze." said James I herd him from my front I would say about six feet away.

"Hello James." I said doing my best to look at him.

"You are aloud to say one last thing before you are banished." said James.

I turned towards the villagers "One day you'll need me or something I have to live. This whole village will need and I won't listen to reason. Because none of you would listen. One day I will get even this bloody village." I then turned to James. "And you and me will be an eye for an eye." I said with a whisper that only he could hear then I was lead to the forest shortly after.

"You Blaze the Firesmith. You are banished for the crimes of murder and the burning down of Izaak's home. If you ever come back you'll be hung." said James I pushed into the forest where I kept walking into the forest. I stop and let them see I that I had stopped.

"Mark my words." I said then continued walking. I kept walking until something tripped and the sack came off. I saw how far I was and kept walking to my workshop and my new home. I when I got to my workshop I cut my bounds. I headed to entrance of my new home and looked at the village that I know hate everyone their but one. "Mark my words I will not save you if you beg me from the the depths of hell! You will burn in hell! I will rise again, while you fall to hell. I will have MY REVANGE!" I yelled at the top of my lungs.


That' the first chapter of this one I don't know how many there will be, but once I fell that that it's done that's it. If you see a mistake in my writings tell me I might missed it. If you like my stories tell what you like, and if you don't tell some parts that I should work on. I have little problem when it comes to spelling words properly, but luckily the program I use to write shows all my misspells. I manly write stories that have romance, drama, a second chance at life, and sometimes yiff will be in them. If you want to read more of my stories, then go to my profile. I have a few besides this one and I hope you read them and love them.

See you till next time.