Commission: Subway
#2 of Written Stories
Free short story provided to foxstar30 as part of my attempt to improve myself while giving back to people that enjoyed The Meeting Part 1. Both Megan and Samantha belong to foxstar30 and used with permission.
This was a one and done. One pass through the story. I used this as a creative exercise and haven't had the chance to thoroughly go back through it. It most likely needs heavy editing, spelling and grammar changes, and clarification on some parts. It's a bit more raw than I would have it be, but that would defeat the point of the practice. (I didn't use proper pronouns for Samantha for one)
Let me know what you think below! I do like the story enough to go back through it and edit it, just need to find the time for it :)
"Subway"
Music blasted from the headphones as the skunkette's grip tightened on pole of the subway train. Music was the only thing capable of keeping herself distracted from her "problem" as she found solace in the different rhythms and how they were paired with the artists lyrics. She had only been riding in this car for a few minutes, but it was mid-day in a major city and there was no place to sit down and relax, she felt boxed in, her inner thighs rubbing together nervously. It felt like a personal hell for her as the available space in the subway car shrank with each station stopped. While the music helped initially it was slowly getting to her as she stepped back from her place at the pole. Deciding right then to get off at the next station and wait for an entirely new subway, and thats when she felt it, her hand had barely touched the crotch of the passenger behind her but a glance downward confirmed that she had indeed groped the package of the stranger.
"I'm s-", she stuttered as one of her paws pulled at the headphones, removing them from her earlobes as she noticed the stunning Kitsune standing behind her. "-orry". She tried her best to hide her amazement that she had groped such a beautiful woman as she felt an extremely light shiver travel through her body. Working as hard as she could to control her "problem" from arising and causing a scene.
"Don't apologize, it's too cramped in these compartments to begin with" said the strange woman, her stunning green eyes noticeably looking over the skunk's features. "You can go back to listening to your music, I don't want to bother you."
A few minutes passed from the small encounter and train approached another station, filling the compartment and causing even more stress for the female as the momentum of the train moving caused her to fall backwards into the Kitsune from before. Eyes widening in fear as she felt it, her head turning upward to look at the lady as she confirmed it growing against her rear. It was at this point that her "problem" reared it's ugly head. Making no mistake about the state of her arousal as she could already feel her moist lubrication dripping down her inner thighs. "Do I excite you, stranger?". The nymphomaniac skunkette couldn't help but grind her rear against the growing erection in the Kitsune's skirt.
"You can call me Samantha, and-" The Kitsune hesitated to find words as she began to smell a striking aroma emitting from the woman in front of her, "can we get off at the next station together?"
Dealing with the hyper-sexuality problem was becoming increasingly difficult as she could feel the growing member pressing against her rear, almost pushing herself against the now noticeable erection coming from Samantha. An audible pant escapes from her snout as her eyes locked with the hermaphrodite pressed up against her, the cute kitsune trying her best to cover her own arousal. "But my stop isn't for a couple more miles..."
The kitsune's eyes flared, her own snout moving closer to the woman's ear as one paw moved to hold onto the skunkette, the other grabbing at the headphones and pulling them away so that she could be heard clearly. "I wish to be inside of you." The halt of the train as it pulled up to the nearest station allowed the perfect opportunity to help push the skunk towards the exit, her erection still pressed up against the backside of the female as she tried to not get discovered by the other passengers. Finally outside standing at the station loading area, she whispered to her new companion, "Come on now, we can both benefit from this. Or am I wrong to believe that the smell you were emitting wasn't from your own arousal?"
"I'm Megan by the way, if you ever want this to...become a regular thing." The skunk had turned around to face the Kitsune, her eye wandering around the empty station as she wondered exactly where they were going to do this, her thighs rubbing against each other in anticipation. "There isn't exactly a 'Hey! Fuck here!' place for us to do this, ya know?"
Samantha couldn't ignore the problem between her legs any longer as she advanced on the skunk. Placing her snout on the smaller figured woman in front of her she pushed the skunk backwards towards a bench with a kiss. Her paws holding onto the side of the skunk as she began to gently caress the hips, pushing down her pair of tight jeans. Continuing to direct the flow of the engagement, the herm pushed Megan even closer to the bench, the rough material of the jeans dragging along the floor as the skunk's aroma became much more potent. Sniffing in the almost intoxicated smell of her partner, she sat down on the bench and began to push up the fabric of her skit, allowing a full view of what was to come if her partner chose to continue.
Megan could smell herself in the air; her aroma, her arousal, her nymphomaniac tenancies dripping down her legs as she saw the huge erection in front of her. She couldn't figure out if she was drooling or if the kitsune exposing herself in front of her had a very wet kiss. "I've never done something like this in public before", the skunk felt the burning blush on her cheeks as she climbed on top of the herm, positioning herself on top of the ten inch erection between her thighs, the tip of the cock rubbing against her moist cunt as her paws cupped the snout of Samantha, bringing the two into yet another kiss. Her hips moving slightly as she was penetrated, her weight shifting downwards as she lowered herself onto the pulsing erection, moans escaping from her throat into the kiss as the moist squelching of penetration echoed through the subway station.
She broke the kiss as her paws held onto the shoulders of the sitting kitsune, whispering quietly to herself "Oh my god...I'm not going to be able to take it all", the combination of girth and length of the erection causing a deformation of her stomach as she struggled to sit down fully on the lap, her hips grinding as best as they could to lubricate the shaft the further she went down. Her breathing increased as her muscles tightened around the erection, her paws scratching playfully down the collarbone of Samantha before stopping and grabbing at the breasts of the hermaphrodite through her clothes.
A fire erupted inside of Samantha, her paws grabbing at the skunk's hips and pushing the skunk further down her shaft as her own hips thrust themselves upwards. Wrapping her arms around the body of Megan, she shifted her weight so that she could fully penetrate into the womb of her partner, small growls of pleasure pushing through her clenched teeth. Establishing a rhythm of grinding her hips and thrusting further into the skunk, the herm moved her paws up underneath the fabric of the skunks blouse. They had only been intimate for a few minutes but the poor skunk's upper torso was already moist with sweat as the kitsune's paws continued upward, grabbing at Megan's own breasts before digging underneath the cup of the bra. Pinching the nipples slightly before twisting and pulling upwards as the sounds of their sexual intercourse filled the empty station. "You...did this to me, you and that intoxicating smell."
Megan was about to scream in a mixture of pleasure and pain, her eyes rolling up into the upper regions of her head as she head the sounds of the train pulling up behind the two, the screeching sound of the brakes doing their jobs properly silencing out the love making for only a few seconds before the train was off running again. A pair of footsteps echoed for a bit in the station, before an audible camera click could be heard, the flash bouncing off of the walls and illuminating the couple in much more detail. Megan was not paying attention to the whistle, nor the sound of those same pair of footsteps walking away from the station, she was close to orgasm and the excitement of getting off in public was destroying her. Her thighs began shaking as they did the best they could to cross themselves while the cock was inside of her, the muscles inside of her body all tightening at once as she felt the rush of electricity through her body, she couldn't believe the power of the orgasm that shook her too her very core.
Samantha grunted in pleasure as she brought the poor skunk girl to orgasm, her cock plowing through the tightening of the girl's inner muscles, her thrusts became more frequent as she herself was close to spilling her seed all over the small subway station. For the first time in awhile her senses were heightened, ear ears twitching as every moan escaping from Megan gave her cock a satisfying twitch, every painful gasp of breath that accompanied a nipple pull or slapping of rear pushed her every so close to fulfilling something she hadn't done in a long time. Before too long as the tightness wore down to an exhausted limp, the kitsune could feel her knot filling with seed, ready to burst. Grabbing a fluff of skunk fur with her powerful grip, she tore the limp woman off of her cock and stood up, throwing Megan onto the bench in front of her.
"You weren't finis-" Megan spoke through exhausted breath before looking upward at the Kitsune, catching the eruption of the herm's orgasm, the seed spraying in numerous different strings at her face as she barely closed her eyes in time to shield herself from the warm, sticky, and thick seed. The skunkette felt the warmth soak into her fur and clothes, the smell filling up her nostrils as she waited for the assault to finish. Another train approached and screeched to a halt to let individuals continue onward to their destination. Yet more camera clicks and flashes were aimed at the two as they panted out of breath at each other.
Samantha leaned forward towards Megan, her tongue licking the messiest parts of her own seed from f the fur of the skunk. After a few minutes of cleaning the poor girl, Samantha removed her wallet from a small pocket in her blouse, the Kitsune takes out her business card and makes sure to kiss the backside of the stern material, leaving a cum-crusted kiss on the card as she places it into the cleavage of the skunk. Seemingly satisfied with the deed the two had done in the station that day, the Kitsune began to walk out of the subway station.