Blackfox: recorded mission one: No fair
This is my first story ok, i started it out to be a gothic blood bath, then i wanted to add some sexyness which turned into some comedy, inform me of any rules that come with writing storys or some code. be harsh, i can take it , tell me what you think! * * *
It was late, about 02;00 in the morning last he checked his new nike watch smirking at the thaught of the device being a small token taken from his previous kill three nights before, such fond memories. But of all nights chosen to kill the next target it had to be new years day and the streets were alive with the singing of drunk furries, merry orca and a couple having sex in the near by ally sorounded by a crowd eagerly watching with naughty grins, the couple didnt seem to mind there audience and continued. Fox didnt have the time he thaught to himself and possitioned himself back to the opposite end of the ally way were he had recieved a tip his next target would be selling some black market goods to a terrorsit group known as Flaming tigers, an asian feline group who despized the cops and frequently attacked police headqauters throughout the city in open war. The Targets name was Jerramy Karinkakov, a russian leapord Aka The weapon man, his speceality was supplying heavy weaponry to various groups throughout america and europe. A scedualed meeting with the flaming tigers would be the perfect opotunity to take him out. Tucked away in the darkness atop of the buildling overlooking the mouth of the ally way was an almost too perfect spot, the roof top even allowed easy deployment of the 50 calibre sniper rifle fox braught, abit much for a single man but he realy enjoyed dismembering limbs. Blackfox of course was no normal fox compared to the average orange and red foxy that whent about, no! for one no fox geneticly could be black in furr colour but he thaught it was fitting, almost reflecting who he was inside, a demon. Dark in nature and personallity it also affected his wardrobe, head to toe in black leather, skin tight finished off with a black cape to hide his face. Equiped with duel Barretta Storm 9mm modified with a light trigger system, killing never felt so light. Army throwing knifes rapped around his left leg and a retractable wrist knife, thanks assassins creed. All these weapons used with deadly affect when combined wtih blackfox's inhuman abilities, he was thee perfect weapon. Tonight of course Fox's weapon of choice was the 50 calibre sniper rifle, the tank buster and a weapon his was very familiar with. Excitment began to run through fox's body, the thrill of the kill, the adrenaline, the need! 'control yourself' he muttered softly and began unwrapping a pack of skittles picking out the red ones and tossing them over the edge onto the street thinking ammusingly how many would hit a wasted passer by. Time began to run by and soon it was 03:50 and the streets started to empty, the couple in the car had left, maybe before and after the audience started getting involved, just passed out party gowers were left amounst the garbage. 'Hurry up' he thaught angrly and stood up to strech, the crack of his bones echoed against the walls with that silence settled back upon the rooftop. It wasnt long before blackfox become irritated and thaught of a good idea, kneeling next to the 50 calibre fox peered through the scope, hoping to see something of intrest. after five minutes of servaying empty office buildings and open windows with no light, a small flash of floresent light caught blackfox's attention, a light had just turned on and fox positioned the rifle towards it. Peering through once again he could make out a person rather dazed and tired looking. Still unprofessionally bored, blackfox continued to peek and it was apparent of a few glares that this stranger was female and very attractice. It was obvious that she was a nurse by the clothes she was wearing and a very cute mouse as her tail swang side to side reluctant to adhear to the exhausted owner. 'She must have had to work late due to all the parties out tonight' he wispered slowly continiung to scope the beautfull rodent. It was with those words she started to undress slowly, to tired to rush. The sudden suprise caught blackfox off gaurd and chocked on the collected saliva in his mouth, he couldnt believe his luck. After a few helpings of oxgen, fox again peered into the scope hoping she hadent left and surprisingly she hadent, The mouse was in the middle of unzipping her nurses unifrom, to tired to rush she did it slowly. licking his lips in an attempt to moisterise them fox found it difficult to hold a 12kg rifle and releave the growing pain within his tight leather pants 'maybe later' he thaught and contunued to enjoy the show. At this point, the gorgeous mouse girl had removed here nurses outfit and yawned eagerly in here underwear, this sent more excitment done blackfox as he zoomed in the scope onto her chest. Finishing the long drawn out yawn she removed her pink bra which revealed perfect petite breasts with tight nipples. Fox watched transfixed eagerly awating the pink butterfly panties to drop. At that moment he thaught they come off but the beautifull mouse girl had left the open view of the window which spread instant disapointment down his entire body. Leaning back blackfox sighed, disapointed and bored once again, he had completly forgotton about the russian. The weapon man had come and gone while fox was perverting with his sniper rifle. It was four more hours till he realised his mistake "How could this year start so badly" he muttered angrly 'foiled by breasts' he thaught and began to laugh, what a night. * * *
ok that was my first story ever, was kinda short and not to eroitc or violent, more funny me thinks, plz comment on my idea or style, i know my spelling will be off so no need to say. I will make a mini series with Blackfox with added soarsyness and successfull missions and more detail to his past and ability.