A Bumpy Rave

Story by Wolfen Vic on SoFurry

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Still not sure if I like the ending but I did enjoy writing this one. Who knows, may come back to these characters and flesh them out more in another story.


Thump, thump, thump, thump. The sound of a good time, the sound of a rave in full swing. Bodies were withering as if people were having seizures but to this crowd, that was dancing, and the moving to the music is something everyone enjoyed to do. Be it those who were doing almost robotic movements, to those who were slow dancing, to those in the dark corners grinding upon some chosen guy or girl.

I myself was giving people a light show with my various LED glowsticks. My mane swished back and forth as I spun around with my spinning glowsticks. I had been at that for the past fifteen minutes as a high energy song had been pushing me faster and faster and to be more and more creative and active. When the music stopped suddenly I pulled out the quick end maneuver which involved me flicking the sticks out straight in front of me and then yanking them back straight into my waiting hands.

A few furs around me cheered and a few groaned for the end of that song. The next was a bit slower than the other fast paced dubstep the DJ had been playing. Picking up my water bottle I took a large gulp, before throwing my mane out of my face. Looking round I noticed various furs grinding on each other and the few who weren't, were chatting up others or drinking at the water jugs lining the room. Stepping out of the middle of the floor I walked over and leaned against a wall. Resting before the next song where I could give a show.

Glancing over the dance floor I noticed a peculiar wolf with blue fur looking round confused. Taking another sip from my water bottle I watched the odd fur intently. It wasn't that he looked weird or out of place, just that he seemed clueless as to what was going on around him. He tried dancing one or twice but kept stopping and staring at those round him, I chuckled to myself, it was kinda cute actually.

It was on the fourth try that the kid sighed and started walking over toward the water jug near me. When he crashed to the floor next to the wall I raised an eyebrow. "What's wrong kid?It looked to me like ya were getting the hang of it." The wolf glanced up at me. His eyes seemed to linger on my fishnet covered chest. "I.. um... I've never been to a rave. Not sure how to dance and stuff."

I chuckled and leaned against the wall. "It's not like other things kid, there is no dance moves, you just move to the beat and what ever that is, is it." The kid seemed more dejected at that. Sighing I pushed myself off the wall. Reaching down I offered him my hand. "Know what kid, I'll show you if you like?" The wolf looked nervous for a few seconds but when I started to lower my hand he reached out and grabbed it.

"Sure I guess. I mean, you look like you know what your doing." At this he waved toward my fishnet shirt. I let out a chuckled and smiled down at the wolf. "Yeah, I might know a thing or too. So, name's James little wolf, what's yours?" I felt a smirk coming over me as he started pawing at the ground. "I'm nobody really, but I guess it can't hurt, the names Tray."

"Tray, good name. Now lets get started." The slow song was just wrapping up and the beat of something much faster was picking up. "Alright kid, give me your hand and just follow me." Tray smiled and grabbed my hand. When the first big beat hit I stomped, Tray mimicked me. The next I jumped, he did too. I continued slowly showing him new thing after new thing as the song came, while keeping in time with the beat. As the song wrapped up a new one that was much faster started to pick up the pace.

"Alright kid," letting go of his hand I stepped back, "take everything we just did and mix it up into your own dance, just do what feels right." Tray nodded, but his slowed reaction told me he was in a different world.

The kid started off stomping a bit then started jumping, it wasn't long till he was fully immersed in the music moving to his own internal choreographer. I watched as his butt swayed in those blue jeans, and his chest moving back and forth to an imaginary partner. My arousal had gone down earlier while I'd been teaching him the basics but now, watching him, I felt that undeniable hunger to claim this wolf growing.

When the song died down and he started walking over toward me, this time sweat dripping off his bangs onto his muzzle, I felt myself fully harden. He bent over and got a cup of water and took a long gulp before saying anything. "That was amazing James, thank you." I smiled down at him. " It was my pleasure little wolf"

A slower pulsing beat caught my ear. Looking over I noticed Tray was looking much more shy, and maybe a tad sad. "Can't really dance to this one, maybe I'll just sit it out. Besides it seems like it's mostly couples out there." Ah, he's single, no wonder. "Actually little wolf, if ya want, I'd dance with ya. This is more emotion based than music based." The wolf blushed a bit but took the offered hand. Maybe he was a bit more adventurous than I thought.

Spinning him round I brought him close to my body, my arms round his chest. "So just shimmy and move with the music and me, don't move your feet." The deep bass set out a rhythm and slowly we started swaying. The wolf sighs and leans his head back against my chest. Smiling I take that as a sign and slowly push my groin into his back, he pushes back. Smirking I grind my semi, hard against him. A small whimper escapes the boy whose ass I was pushing on.

Leaning down I breathe into his ear. "So, little wolf, wanna go back to my room an dance in private or shall I just take you here?" Being that close I got a good whiff of his sweaty scent. Grinding into him again I hear a breathless whimper. Smirking I pushed my hands down his front and under the hem of his jeans. Finding no underwear I felt my groin twitch a bit. "Your a kinky bitch aren't you? Bet you love wearing no underwear, hoping that some guy finds out and takes advantage of it." Pushing my now rock hard organ against his rump I listen to him groan.

Grasping his hard wolfhood I gave it a slight pump and squeeze. "I think this says I should take you here, just imagine getting fucked hard, by this stud, in front of everyone." Letting go of his bone I let my hands wander back and grab those buns. "Everyone knowing you were bred by me, and a few probably wanting to breed you themselves. You'd love that wouldn't you?"

The whimper and slight nodding proved me correct. Smirking I looked around, one or two people glanced our way but mostly people were lost in the music themselves and their own partners. Letting go of his wolfhood I moved my hands to the back, pushing down on the hem of his pants with both of my hands. I forced more of his ass into the air. If anyone didn't know better they'd think his pants were just hanging off the front.

Glancing down I found the two wonderful mounds I'd been grinding. Reaching back round front to grope him, I let the other hand get to work unzipping and fishing my tool out of my rave pants. I sighed in relief when the cold air touched my hard length. Pulling the wolf back into me I grind my bare erection against his mostly bare ass. I grind into it with the beat of the music and slowly feeling myself getting lost to both it and the lust rising in me.

The air surrounding him and I was now heady with my crotch musk and his sweat. One large explosion of a beat, I pushed my dick hard against him. Lightly I felt myself push against his hole. The wolf was whining quietly. As I pulled away I glanced down and adjusted myself to push against his hole better. My flared tip pushed gently against it and as a new song picked up speed I slowly pushed harder, forcing the tip against the wolf's hole.

Finally I gave up and forced the rest in, reaching round I gave him my hand to yell into. I blushed at the few lust looks I received from those around us. Quickly I pulled out and pushed back in, not giving him too much time to adjust and trying to catch up to the beat in the music.

I felt his tight ass grip me and after a few seconds those biting teeth were more open in moans. Seems little wolf was into rough sex. Groping at the front of his pants I found a wet spot slowly forming.

Bucking into him hard his gasps caught the attention of more and more furs round us, some were quite obviously turned on while others took their partners elsewhere on the dance floor.

Baring my teeth I slapped his hips against mine, precum filling his insides as I roughly took his cherry. Panting I looked down an watched as my giant cock disappeared in an out of the wolf's hole. He yipped each time I slammed to the pelvis an a few furs were now crowding around us, one or two also yiffing, an one fox was openly jacking off at our display.

Leaning in I pulled the wolf down hard impaling him all the way, I felt myself climax,emptying gallons of cum into the wolf. His hole squeezed me as the wet spot on his front started leaking. Smirking I pulled a business card out of my back pocket and put it in his as I pulled out.

Cum oozed down the wolf's leg as I tucked myself back in my pants. The fox who'd been jacking off high fived me as I went to grab my stuff, after picking up my LED glowstick I turned round to find the fox giving the wolf a pounding as well. Smirking I walked by and pushed the fox's ass into the wolf more and groped him too before walking past.

As I exited the room I looked down at the wolf's driver license I'd swiped. As I exited to the parking lot I let out a chuckle. That wolf looked much older, I'd be seeing him again soon, and maybe I'd get second on that tight ass of his.