Amaeture Love - Part 1 The Connection
Note: This is my first story seeing as the original was a failure with many mistakes and serious plot and character issues, so please be nice and remember to comment positively is possible. For those of you who are curious, original story: 66 pages long with no editing. After edit + yiff: 243 pages long and I forgot to convert to ascii. After second edit + yiff edit: 299 pages long, so you can see my predicament here.
I already know this sucks it is meant for character development purposes only and the story will have yiff later on so bear with me.
Enough with that, on with the story!
The rays of the morning sun came through the blinds waking Koga to another boring day in school. Not wanting to get up he buried himself in the covers to get another 5 min of sleep.
However, he fell out of bed when he heard his mother shout "HONEY GET UP, YOU'RE GOING TO BE LATE!"
"Yea yea I hear you mom." He groaned
Getting out of bed with his azure eyes still red from the previous night's festivities he headed over to the bathroom to freshen up. Looking at himself in the mirror he noticed his snow white fur was a rather gray color from the dip he took in the pool and was wild from a rough drying. Taking a quick shower to rinse and clean his fur and dressing in a pair of blue jeans and a sky blue shirt he went downstairs to the kitchen. He smelled breakfast cooking, consisting of eggs and toast.
"Did you sleep alright honey?" His mom, a gray wolf, inquired.
"No it was awful, my fur is out of whack and my eyes are just burning."
"Well that's what happens to you teenagers at your wild parties, why don't you have something to eat, I'm sure you'll feel better."
"Thanks." As Koga ate his breakfast hungrily his father, a light brown wolf, walked in the room from the front yard with the newspaper.
"Good morning son." His father said to him.
"Good morning dad."
Koga finished his breakfast grabbed his things and headed out for school without another word, leaving his parents to their morning.
He walked down the street toward High School, he hated school all the girls liked him because he worked out three times a week and was in peak condition, none of them like him for who he was. Being 15 didn't help much either since he played hard to get and only made everyone want to know him more.
Making his way through the halls and into first period, Science, the most dull and boring subject of the day, his teacher Mr. Unmack announced they were receiving a new student today and that I would be sitting next to him. "Well I guess today wouldn't be ALL that boring. He was a black slender wolf who intrigued me, nicely toned body and a face that screamed stage fright. His eyes were as blue as the sea which only drew me in more.
He made his way over to Koga and stuck his hand out, Koga took his hand and shook it saying "Hi my name is Koga I guess we will be sitting together."
"My name is Alex, nice to meet you."
They took their seats and the teacher started the day's lecture and notes section. The same ritual was repeated for nearly all the classes except Math.
When they got to P.E. Koga saw Alex again and walked up to him "You seem a little lost, the locker room is over here."
"I know it's just that, I'm ... you know, a little shy seeing this is my first day."
"It's not that bad, just try to imagine the room is empty and get it over with as fast as possible, that's what I always do."
"Yea, thanks"
P.E. started with a running portion, Koga was always the fastest of the furs at the school. A whistle blew and they all started to run around the track, Alex running past all the students, Koga had to work fairly hard to keep up.
"Nya, you like to run I see."
"Yea "pant- I guess "pant-, how about you.?
"Me? I'm always first."
"Not today you aren't."
They ran several more laps than were required both head to head trying to see who would last longer, eventually they were stopped by the coach with a very loud whistle which broke their trance.
"That's enough you two."
"Sorry" they said.
As the day ended Koga gathered his things and started to walk home when Alex came up to him and said "Wait, I was wondering if you would consider being my first friend here?"
"Hm, I would like that seeing as I don't have any."
"Really, well why not, everyone seems to like you."
"I guess it's because they don't know me well enough for me to consider them friends."
"Oh, well I'm glad I made a good fresh start."
"Well see you tomorrow."
"Yea, you to."
Things progressed like this for the next few weeks as Koga and Alex became closer to each other and spent more time together, and one Friday afternoon after school.
"Say, Koga, I was wondering if you would like to come over for a... no never mind."
"What out with it."
"I know you'll say no."
"You never know until you ask."
"Would you would come to play games and watch movies at my place say this Saturday."
"Sure, ill come"
"You will!" The wolf's face lighted up with excitement.
"Sure why not?"
"Great I'll see you tomorrow."
Thinking to himself Alex thought "This is going to be so much fun." He couldn't stop shaking with excitement.
Part 1 Fin.