Let there be darkness part1

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#1 of Let there be darkness


Author's note: Just a fanfic of The Secret of NIMH. Contains M/M sex, although quite brief and between an adult and a youngester.

  • * * Life is always complicated, no matter who you are, or where you are. On a momment, one feels more happy and alive than ever; in other, sadness prevails, and you feel dead inside, missing the most dearest and happiest moments you had. In this later cases, the old, unstranslatable "saudade", the eerie legacy my language left to the world, is more than appliable. Something like this happened in Timmy's life. Laying in the ground, he remembered the series of events that lead to the eerie climax of the story... "Thank for everything" said a blushing Mrs Brisby, soonly awakened after falling unconcious while using the "sparkly", as Jeremy used to call that thing (eventually the name stuck) "Oh, it was nothing" said Justin. The rat simply smilled, in his usual sexy way. The rats were ready for leaving. Faced with the danger of being recaptured (or likely killed), by the very same organization that turned them in what they are now, they were heading for Thorn Valley. The journey would take several hours at the very least, so they were completly packed and ready; the vehicle that would take them away for once and for all was a bizarre mixture of a gyrocopter and a toy plane, with some improvised "car-boat-thingies" as extra transport vessels. Their escape was for good, having no plans of discovering how grimm their fate would be should they stay. "Don't worry, I might make one or two visits" "Just in case, I want to give you something" Mrs Brisby handled the "sparkly" to Justin. The rat certainly wasn't expecting to receive such an important gift. The mouse would always remember that face Justin made after realizing he would have the amulet. "I-I can't have this. Its too precious" "Nonsense, I want you to have it" "Are you sure?" * * * Jeremy flew around, in search of more strings. He didn't realised, however, that he was being followed...by another crow. She giggled as his clumsiness lead him to be chased by an angry hawk, and later by a rabid opossum. She thought of him as being cute. * * * Justin decided to meet Mrs. Brisby's children. She specially insisted for him to stay for dinner, but he would refuse, no matter how much she insisted. Eventually, she managed to get him to eat; her children, specially the girls, giggled a lot at this situation. Martin was nowhere to be seen; he was too busy sleeping like a pig. Why exactly was he so tired, nobody knew for sure, though probably he either played a lot or Mrs Shrew was telling him stories. "So, may I see the boy that had the honor to start all of this" Justin said, smirking "Sure" was all Mrs Brisby said, with a face quite similar. They entered the little mouse's room; he was sleeping like his brother, only more gracefully, and with no snorting. Call him whatever you like, he was purely angelic in his rest. "I'm going to clean the dishes. Want to come?" "Nah, I'll just stay here. I'll come in a while" "Okay, but if he bites just shriek" Obviously, Timmy wouldn't bite; probably, he wouldn't be capable in the tired state he was. As Mrs Brisby left, Justin continued staring at the little mouse. He was the cutest rodent he had ever seen in his life. He also resembled quite his father. So beutifull. Justin sat next to him, in the little male's bed. He was still sleeping, in his inoccent, adorable way. The rat run his fingers throw the little mouse's fur, so silky, so soft. Timmy got closer to Justin, unconsciously searching for that source of affection. Justin leaned down, his muzzle now close to the little sleeping form. He smelled quite nicely, no strong musk or any other odours typical of older males; just a soft, earthly scent, with small hints of his future puberty. In a couple of weeks, the first sings of maturity would appear; that, of course, assuming that he and his sibilings would grow like normal young mice, as the experiments of the rodents NIMH made increased their life span. He started licking the little form, so unresistable was his scent. "Mom?" The little mouse whispered, his eyes still closed. He, however, noticed that strong, masculine smell couldn't possibly come from his mother, and he backed away, a little scared, his eyes now open. "Ssh, its okay, I'm not gonna hurt you" "Promise?" "Yes, I promise" With that said he started running his fingers throw the little one's arm, getting him relaxed. Justin then kissed the little mouse's cheek, such peck soonly followed by longer, more affectionate kisses and licks. Timmy started smilling and kissed the adult back, eventually falling asleep again. "I see you have experience with kids" Mrs Brisby said, coming in. Justin blushed a little, not noticing how much affection he showed to the kid until Timmy's mother came in "Your's are actually the first kids I've seen since a long time. Oh well, I think its time for me to go" "So early?" "Yep, we can't stay a lot longer" They both left the room, and even after arriving to his new home, Justin still had Timmy's image on his mind. A month had passed since those events, and Timmy was now fully healthy again. His body had now started to show the first signs of puberty. He had also started to feel now as if he had a hole, and he felt as if he longed for someone, his heart not letting him rest until he was with that person again. But who? His mother told him that, at his age now, he would begin to feel desire for mouse girls. Truth to be told, there weren't a lot of mice around, and the only young mouse female in that area was taken by Timmy's older brother Martin. His older sister had also went away, with Mr. Ages's nephew. Timmy's little sister was now the child of the home. One day, the young male was making an exploration along a stream. He enjoyed to explore around the forest, venturing far from home. That was his wish: to see the world beyound were he was. In his adventures he would often meet Jeremy and his girlfriend, now not as regularly due to the fact they had eggs in their nest. He continued walking, picking objects he had an interest on. He was leaning in the stream's margin, when he slipped in the mud. As you can imagine, he felt in the water, being dragged by the stream. "Help!" "Grab my hand" a voice said. Timmy didn't had time to react before a paw grabbed his wrist, and dragged him out of the water. He was cold and shivering, not noticing the stranger until he felt a towel being wrapped around him. Whoever saved him dragged him close, and embraced him in his strong but delicate arms. Timmy didn't felt scared, specially not after seeing who was his saviour. A big smile came to his face as that muzzle kissed him again, and as he kissed Justin back "You're quite cold, let me dress you new clothes" Before Justin had finished that sentence Timmy was already naked on the grass. He blushed a little as the rat looked at his young body. A bulge formed in Justin's uniform, between his legs. Still, he managed to fight the urge, dressing Timmy with a shirt; being rat sized, it covered the little mouse's body decently. "Are you sure about this?" "Don't worry, I'll bring him back soon. I'm just going to borrow him for a week or two" "Humm, okay then" "Yay!" said Timmy, so happy and excited he was. After saying goodbye to his mother, he went to Justin's helicopter (a toy helicopter turned into an actual vehicle), and both headed to Thorn Valley, the little mouse in the rat's strong arms "Wake up Timmy" The little mouse opened his eyes as he felt a loving lick on his cheek. He smiled as he realised that the events of yesterday weren't a dream, and he hugged Justin. He looked throw the large frontal window of the gyrocopter; below them, the green forest canopy was starting to get darker and with orange tones as the sun started to set. The sky was now of a dark blue with pinkish/orangish borders, and there were no clouds other than some thin ones here and there. The terrain had started getting mountainous, with hills covered by forest or grassland; eventually, they reached a canyon. At its bottom a river passed; as they ventured more into the canyon, it became wider and slowlier. Eventually, they reached an area where it became a lake, and at it's center layed an island. Sorrounding it there were several rings of land, connected to each other and to the island by bridges. Everything was dotted with what seemed to be small buildings; on each ring there was one particularly large building, which Justin said to be energy factories. The gyrocopter headed for the center of the island, where there was some sort of palace. Once they landed there were many rats in around them; judging by their clothes, the elite guard. "Welcome back sir!" was the standard reply. They seemed quite curious about the little rodent, though they didn't gave him a lot of attention, since they already knew he was comming there. Suddenly, a opossum entered the room. "Sir, you must come! The meeting... oh, I didn't knew you were bring guests" "Don't worry, I'll go to the meeting. Racso, take my little guest to my bedroom. Don't worry Timmy, I'll come to you in a moment" Timmy got depressed as he saw Justin leaving with the possum. He then felt some pat his shoulder; he looked up and saw a large, dark brown rat with a white circle around his eye smilling down at him. He gently picked up the little mouse and carried him to an elevator; once they got out of it, they were in Justin's bedroom. The rat petted the little one's head and gave him a little kiss in the head, before going down the elevator. Justin's room was quite big, with a huge window that took the space of the wall in the large bed's right. Throw it Timmy could see the shinny rat town/city/whatever below him, and the blue night sky above him. Some bats flew above the island, the aerial guard. Timmy jumped to the bed; it wasn't as soft as his, but it was still quite confortable. At the bed's left there was a small table with some objects above it; the one that drew the mouse's attention the most was a box, made in wood and some golden metal. The box had a key next to it, which Timmy picked; unknownst to him, he was one of the only three rodents that could open the box. As he rotated the key the box opened, reavealing a collar with a big red stone, glowing a little in the dark. The mouse got fascinated by it, seeing his reflection on the stone. "It was a gift from your mother..." Justin had just entered the room, with a big smile on his face as usually. He sat down on the bed, and embraced Timmy with one arm, pulling him closer, and proceeded to kiss his nose. "...which in turn received it from your dad" "Really?" "Yep" "Wow" "And now I'm giving it to you" Timmy gave a big hug to Justin, and kissed his cheek. The rat kissed the mouse back, licking his neck, feeling the little one's pulse with his tongue. He then got up, and removed his clothes, revealing his somewhat muscled body. "Why are you naked?" "I like to sleep naked" Timmy nodded, despiste being used to sleep with his clothes on. "I-I think you should try. Its how grown ups sleep" He hadn't even finished his sentence before the little one removed his clothes. Both were nude now, on on the bed and the other still standing. Justin looked to the little one's body, making the little mouse blush furiously. The rat didn't noticed his erection, his meat coming out of its shealth. "Wow, your dick got so big! How did you did that?" It was now Justin's turn to blush. "W-well, it gets big and hard when...look, yours geetting too" Timmy looked at his penis, and he saw that he too was having an erection - only that his member was obviously much smaller than the rat's. "Why does it get like that?" "Well, sometimes your body wants to do some things. Here, let me show" Justin sat on the bed, next to the little rodent. He felt a little worried that he could hurt the little one, so he decided to avoid mounting him yet. He leaned down, his muzzle touching the little boy's bits. His tongue then rubbed Timmy genitals, causing the little one to moan. Justin involved his muzzle around Timmy's tool, bobbing up and down slowly. "Please, faster" the little critter moaned. Justin finished his job enveloping the mouse meat with just the tongue, as the little one unconsciently thrusted upwards, releasing his first load of cum. The rat swallowed it all, as the mouse panted on the bed. "Now's my turn" The big rat cock ended in front of the little boy's face, coating his muzzle with precum. As the rat instructed, Timmy grabbed the cock with his hands softly. As it it rubbed it, some moans came out of the rat's muzzle. "Lick now" The mouse then licked the penis head with his little tongue, making the rat to create more moans of pleasure. "Now Timmy, I want you to suck on it. Mind the teeth" Timmy did as told, sucking on the rat cock. Amazingally, most of it fitted on his muzzle. "Oh, very good. Just be more carefull with the teeth. Oh God!" As the rat moaned, Timmy released his hands. He didn't need to do anything, as Justin thrusted on his little muzzled. Soon, he stopped, as a load of cum entered the mouse's throat. Timmy swallowed most of it, but some came out of his nose. The big rat was exausted, panting in pleasure. "Good boy Timmy" He then kissed the young rodent, and both fell asleep, on each other's arms. Both were unware of a wittness masturbating wildly in the elevator...