The Field

Story by Nora Nightwolf on SoFurry

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#1 of Short Stories

This was a short story I wrote about a year ago between classes my first year of college. I actually didn't intend for it to be erotic, it kinda just happened. I haven't really let any one read it. I've received very mixed reviews, I want to continue to write short stories, so please give me your constructive criticisms so I can learn to write better stories for the reader.

This is no where near where I truly want it because I wrote it a while ago but it a start and I want to become a better writer.

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The Field

I crave to be out in the field. To be stalking my prey in the tall grass. My senses at their peak and feeling my heart beat. Sitting silently while watching my prey, learning its weakness and strengths. Letting my strategic and tactical mind run free. The time is right. I am the wolf, who is silent as a ghost bust as deadly as the grim reaper. I am the black knight of the night searching for a kingdom to call my own.

I strike, my claws out and my fangs ready to tear at my prey. My prey looks up and sees me but it's too late. I'm already upon it. As I go for the killing blow I am stunned and see spots for a brief second. I regain m senses and look up.

Standing above me is my prey. It is not what I thought it was. It was neither a buck nor a doe. To my amazement it was another wolf. It looked to be a year or two older. I realized that it had tricked me into thinking it was a doe.

I tried to get up but my trickster growled. I stopped; I knew who the Alpha was now. I laid back down on the ground in submission. After a couple of minutes the Alpha moved back and allowed me to stand. It was then I realized my Alpha was a female.

She was the first female I had seen in a long time. The last three I did meet, abandoned me before we could start a pack. The female in front of me looked at me strange and growled. I bowed my snout to show that I knew who the Alpha was. I looked up to see that she had a pleased look on her face.

She had dark fur like that of a wolf but I could now see that she had rubbed herself in the dirt to lighten it to the shade to that of a deer's. Her eyes were green and she had red fur on her underbelly. Again I noticed she had a pleased look on her face.

I could tell that she was also looking me over to try and figure what to do with me. Suddenly she stood up and walked towards me. I wasn't sure what to do so I just sat there with my snout slightly bowed and unmoving. She walked around me a couple of times before finally stopping behind me.

She sighed like she was deep in thought. I started to move my head to look behind me to see what she was doing. She growled as soon as I did, so I went back to my original position. The whole time I'm sitting I was trying to think of what she wanted of me.

After what felt like an eternity of being scrutinized by my Alpha something strange happened. I felt her breath on my back. Her breath was warm and sounded strange. Next think I know she was rubbing her head on my back. A sign of property, she had claimed me as hers.

Again I tried to look back but she growled at me once more. I was anxious to know what she had in store for me. I was in such deep thing that the thing she did caught me off guard. She flung herself upon me to where her underbelly was on my back and her fore paws were next to my head.

The next thing I felt was her lower body moving back at forth. Slowly at first but after a while it got steadily faster. She had mounted me and making sure that I knew my place and that I was hers and only hers. Unbeknownst to me I had become excited.

She noticed my excitement and growled in what I believe to be in pleasure. After a couple more minutes of her rubbing herself on me she stopped. I could still feel her juices on my lower back running down to my tail and began touching my back hole. At this point I finally noticed my excitement.

She walked around to where we were facing each other. I didn't know what she had planned next for me and what I was going to do with my excitement.

Again she caught me off guard by turning around. I thought she was going to walk off and abandon me like the others had because she had her fun with me.

I was wrong.

She started to back up. I didn't know what to do so I just sat there in the exact position. I could smell her scent. It was a metallic smell but also like fruit at the same time. It smelled delicious. I want to lick it; I wanted to taster her. I could see her juices clearly now. They were running down her hind quarters and legs to the ground.

She backed up until my snout was touching her. I didn't do anything since I didn't know what she wanted from me. She turned her head and looked at me growling. So I began to rise but she growled at me again. I didn't know what to do.

Again I could smell her juices and see them. I wanted to taste it so badly. Finally out of pure curiosity I licked her. She yipped when my tongue touched her. My first couple of licks were from curiosity of wanting to know what her juices tasted like.

Her juices tasted salty but had a sweet metallic fruity flavor. The more I licked her, the wetter she became. She started making yips out of what sounded like pleasure. I started to notice that there was a little bump at the one end of her hole. I grabbed it gently with my fangs.

Apparently she wasn't expecting that and yipped in surprise. I did too when her juices came squirting out into my mouth. I drank it all because it tasted so good to me. I went back to licking her but starting licking her hard spot too. I really started to become addicted to her taste and smell. Suddenly she walked forward.

I started to follow but she growled while turning around. Her face looked full of pleasure and she was breathing heavily with her tongue out. Her look made me even more excited and I whined for more of her lovely juices. Again she looked pleased with how I was acting.

I thought she was going to around and let me taster her beautiful juice making hole again. Instead my Alpha started walking forward. I started to get p to move back but she growled for me to stay where I was. She continued walking forward until she was against me. She pushed me till I fell on my back onto the ground. I yipped in surprise as I fell.

I looked up and saw that my Alpha was standing about me with that pleased look of hers. Again I didn't know what she planned for me. She caught me off guard once more by licking the side of my snout. I seriously had no idea what she was going to do now.

Fore once I caught her off guard when I returned the lick to her snout. For a brief second her eyes grew wide in surprise and I saw how cute she really was. She suddenly scooted down and I tried to get up but yet she growled for me to stay where I was. I was still excited when from out of nowhere I felt her tongue start to wrap around my excitement. She licked it all the way from the base to the tip several times. She did it slowly and with a loving touch of licking a new born pup. It was the greatest pleasure I had ever felt in my life. This feeling was almost the same pleasure I get when I stalk my prey.

While I was swimming in the sea of pleasure I felt her take my, now very hard extremity, and place it in her mouth. Her mouth felt soft and warm. Her saliva was all over me and her tongue wrapped around me. While my excitement was in her mouth she suddenly started to suck.

My back arched and I whined in the sudden feeling and influx of pleasure. I knew she had that pleased look on her face. She sucked on me until from out of nowhere something came shooting out of my excitement. She released me when I came. I just laid there for several seconds trying to regain my senses.

Finally I looked up to see my Alpha panting and licking her chops. There was white stuff all over her face. She had the look of intense desire on her face. She again took my excitement and sucked out the rest of the white stuff.

I thought she was done but she wasn't. My Alpha walked forward until our snouts were touching. I went to lick her snout but instead found myself licking her juice producing hole. She had turned herself around to where her head was at my extremity and my head was at her hole.

I instantly knew what I was to do. I began to lick her while she started to suck on me. She laid on top of me while doing this.

This didn't last long for she suddenly got up and down to my quarters and laid back down I wasn't quite sure what going until I felt her tongue started licking me again. This time she didn't suck on me. Again I came but all over myself. She got up and started to lick all the white stuff off of me.

My Alpha is very seductive and vexing.

I crave to be out in the field. I live to stalk my prey, though my prey has changes slightly. Today I hunt not for deer or rabbits but for my Alpha. She is teaching me to be a better hunter and I know that one day that we will part way but until then. I swill show complete devotion and loyalty to my seductive Alpha who has vexed me.

Several months have passed since I last saw my Alpha. I don't know what happened but I know she abandoned me. I found myself alone one morning after a day of training. She had left me but I tried to her I couldn't.

About a week ago I was walking near the river when I caught a scent that was familiar. I decided to follow it and see who or what it was. It didn't take me long to track it down. The closer I got, the stronger the scent and the knowledge that I knew who it might be.

I almost walked right into her. She was walking up the bank and was about to go through the bush when I spotted her. She had another with her who had noticed my scent but didn't know where I was. He instantly went on the defensive and had her get behind him.

I decided that it wasn't worth a confrontation and backed out slowly until I was a good distance away. I didn't know what to do. I knew that female fro before but it had been a long time since she abandoned me. With nothing better to do, I stalked them to put my skills to the test.

Right off the bat I know the male was still a juvenile and did not know much. The female was that I had to be careful about. She knew some of my habits and scents. I didn't know if she had caught my scent or not yet. Only time will tell.

Two days passed before I risked a chance to meet the female. I caught a break when she split from the male to get some water. I followed.

When she bent down to get her water, I came out of the bushes quietly and sat down where I was behind her but she couldn't see me. I got close enough to where I could silence her if she tried to howl for her male.

When she finished with her drink she sat down and looked behind her. I think she was expecting her male but instead saw me. The last time she saw me I was still inexperienced and my fur was always kept clean. Now I still keep my fur clean but disheveled to help break up my outline when stalking my prey. Plus I had a couple of new scars that I had received from bad scrapes with prey.

She looked at me closely and gave out a surprised yip when she recognized me. I lunged at her and forced her to the ground with a low growl. She understood that she wasn't to make a sound. I stood there for a couple of seconds before me something that I didn't realize.

I licked her snout.

With that I backed off with a low growl. She got up and looked at me with a puzzled look on her face. I heard some rustling in the bushes nearby and slunk away into the shrubs nearby.

Several second later the juvenile came out of the bushes. He snarled expecting to find his female and another wolf. Instead he only found he female walking up to him. He growled at her to sit. She did.

From there he sniffed every part of her body for any possible scent of another male. I scoffed at him because he won't find my scent because I had rolled in some mud that I had found to cover my scent before I made my move. The female looked in my direction but I bared my fangs at her to force her not to look in my direction.

The male was satisfied that he couldn't detect any foreign scents on his female. He rubbed his head on her just in case. Then they moved off together into the bushes. But before they left the female looked over where I was only to find that I had moved.

After our first meeting at the riverbank, I humored myself by stalking them for several days to learn the juvenile's patterns and habits. He was strong but arrogant in the way of stealth. I followed him on several hunts where he would not catch anything. This forced the female to go hunting most of the time.

After a day of watching her hunt, I learned that she had picked up some new tricks but also had the issue of stealth. On multiple occasions I sat behind her while she stalked her prey. She never knew I was there. Every now and then I would hunt an extra rabbit and place it near where I knew she would be hunting.

A couple of days passed of pure bliss in which I was content with my stalk of the pair. Today was different though. Around noon I heard growling and snarling coming from where the pair were camped. I hurried over there as fast as I could without drawing attention to myself in the bushes. As I got to a bush where I could see them, without being noticed, I saw the juvenile snarling and growling at the female.

I don't know what had caused him to act like this. That's when I noticed the half eaten fish I had caught and left for the female. It dawned on me that the juvenile had caught onto my presence and was now challenging her. I could tell the female was annoyed by this but had her head held low in submission. As I looked her over I noticed something on her one paw. Blood. There was a small wound on her left front paw.

I had to hold myself back from lunging out and ripping the juvenile to shreds. My claws dug into the ground in rage while I gnashed and ground my fangs together. I knew that I would have to contact her today and treat her wound. I backed out of there slowly and began to scheme for my meet up with her later.

That night I went back to their hideout to find the juvenile asleep while the female stood guard. It irritated me that the juvenile was forcing the female to stand guard all night while he slept I decided make my move. While the female stood guard facing away from the juvenile, I padded softly up to the juvenile and place a rabbit skull where he would see it. From there I walked quietly towards the female. I sat down next to her without her realizing I was there. My fur was a dark brown thus allowing me freedom in the night.

I looked her up and down to see how she was. I noticed that she had lost a lot of weight, mostly likely from the male eating most of the food. Her fur was disheveled and matted down to where I could see the outline of where the juvenile had his way with her. There was blood that had congealed on her paw from her wound. Her eyes were bloodshot from lack of sleep and her eyelids drooped. She was about to fall asleep.

I got up and walked in front of her to where we were eye to eye but she still had not realized I was there. At that point I opened my mouth and placed it to where her snot was in my mouth. When I applied some pressure her eyes shot wide open and she struggled to break free. After struggling for a couple of seconds she stopped and finally recognized me. I let go of her snout and bent my head down and started to lick her wound to clean it up.

She whined in pain when I touched her wound. This caused the juvenile to stir but not fully wake up. I stopped and watched the juvenile until I knew he had fallen back asleep. I then got up and motioned for the female to follow me to the river bank where I could finish cleaning her wound.

After cleaning her wound, we sat on the bank in silence. This was the first time I had been with a female like. I felt very awkward and seemed to lose all of my self-confidence. The way the moonlight reflected off the water and onto her was hypnotizing. I must have stared at her for a while because she turned her head and looked at me. Her eyes were that of a catching a pup acting mischievously, but her one eyebrow was cocked in playfulness. I lowered my head in humiliation of being caught.

She got up and walked over to me and rubbed her head all along my neck. My heart started to race and I could feel my blood flowing through my veins. It was exhilaration and I became excited. My breathing became heavy and my body became hot. I started to move uncontrollably to where I was sitting but my hind paws danced like I was sitting on thorns. I knew she noticed and that she would think of me as a juvenile.

Instead she stopped rubbing her head and licked the side of my snout and looked at me with eyes full of lust. That's when I noticed the smell that was similar to my old Alpha. She lifted her and placed it on my head. She sighed, stood up and walked away leaving me alone to figure out what happened. After a little while I got and went back to where I was sleeping.

When I got back to my spot all I could think about was what I had seen and I had done. I felt like I had something stupid and would regret it. I needed to hunt; I needed the basics of who I am before I could make a big decision. I curled up knowing that it would be a long night.

When I awoke the next morning I immediately went on a hunt to curb my hunger. It didn't take me long to find the scent of a rabbit. The hunting of the rabbit was exhilarating. To feel my senses heighten and to have the blood pound through my veins. My claws pawed the loose dirt and caused little marks. I could feel the slight breeze and smell the different scent it carried.

After searching for my prey for several hours I found a rabbit's hole underneath a giant tree near the river bank. There were several rabbits outside the hole hopping around and eating the grass. They hadn't smelled my scent nor detected my presence. I started to move closer to one that was by itself. It was and plump. I started to get ready to pounce when all of a sudden it sat straight up. I feared that I t had noticed me somehow, when I noticed some movement in the bushes on the other side of it.

It was the juvenile by himself. He wasn't hunting but was just walking by himself. Then I heard a whine and the female walked into view. By this point my possible breakfast was making for its hole. I pounced and was lucky enough to get the rabbit quietly. After I knew I had make my kill I looked up and saw the female sitting there dejected and sad. I took my kill and walked over to her. Before I could lay down the juvenile came back and growled at her. I quickly ducked into a nearby bush and watched what he was doing. Off the bat I could tell the juvenile was angry. He was growling and spitting at the female. He swiped at her with his paws and snapped at her with his fangs. The female was looking pitiful with hear held low in submission. I think she was trying to disappear by how she looked. The juvenile's treatment of the female was irritating me more and more.

Finally I couldn't take any more of the juvenile's behavior towards the female. I jumped out of the bushes with my fangs bared and a snarl that would have startled a bear. My anger strengthened me but had blinded me for I still had the rabbit in my mouth.

The juvenile looked at me strange causing me to realize the rabbit situation. I turned around and placed the mangled body in front of the female. This angered the juvenile to the point that he lunged at me whine I had my back to him. He got me good on the surprise but he didn't have the experience I did.

We rolled into a ball and flew past the female. We bit and clawed at each other, until we fell apart. We both got to our paws quickly and snarled. I could feel the blood seeping from a wound on my underbelly. The juvenile had a slight limp on his right hind paw and he was missing several patches of fur on his back.

We circled each other growling and snarling every now and then. We got close to each other to where he or I would swipe at the other. Finally growing tired of this game, I sat down and calmed down. This confused the juvenile and let his guard down by coming closer to me. When he was close enough I sprang at him and forced him to the ground, with me standing above him. He tried to fight back, but whenever he did I would go for his throat.

Finally after several attempts that failed, I was able to get him to submit. I backed off and allowed him to stand. He got up slowly and then sprang at me again.

I swatted at him with my right paw. It connected. I looked at him in disdain, while his head was held low. After a couple of seconds he looked up at me snarling. There was an opened wound that started from the top of his left eye down to end of his snout. There was blood oozing everywhere.

I growled at him to leave my presence. He snarled at me once more so I raised my paw while growling. He finally turned around and walked away. I watched him until I couldn't see the bushes move anymore. At this point I turned and looked at the female.

I hung my head in humiliation for letting my anger get the better of me. I didn't know what the female thought of me or what she would do. I could tell that she was in front of me but I couldn't face her.

After what seemed like an eternity I felt her tongue lick my snout. I looked up at her and saw that she had water coming from her eyes but she had a loving look that reminded me of my mother. She licked my snout again and then rubbed her head all over me. My mind went bland and all I could think about was her.

We rubbed heads for a while until I noticed that her breath was getting heavy and that the smell was back. Just that smell caused me to become excited. I could tell she had noticed she started to me onto my back. I just went with it and laid down.

She licked my wound and got it cleaned up but this caused me great pain and I howled in agony. When that was finished she started to lick me down there. Oh, the pleasure that I felt make me forget the pain of the wound. I quickly became excited again and tried to get up, but instead was kept on my back by her paw. She continued to lick my excitement lovingly. I made a circle with my head to get her to turn around. At first she didn't understand thus forcing me to make the movement again but added a licking motion to. She understood that time and turned around thus allowing me to lick her at the same time she licked me.

Her tasted was different from my old Alpha. She tasted sweeter but a little tart. At the same time was licking her she had taken my excitement and was sucking on it. She was sucking furiously and had all of me in her mouth. I knew I wasn't going to last much longer at the rate she was going. I decided that I need to pick up the pace or I'd be the only one having fun. I licked furiously and forced my tongue into her until I found her bump.

I took her bump and nibbled on it. She became wetter and I could tell she was losing control of her hind legs. I stopped and forced my tongue into her. She was pleased. I could tell, so I decided that she needed to finish. She had me in her mouth and wrapped her tongue around and rocked her head back and forth. The pleasure I felt was indescribable. So of course it didn't take long for me to shoot out the white stuff into her mouth.

She finally allowed me to stand and showed me how much was in her moth. I was amazed at how much there was, what surprised me more was when she swallowed all of it. She turned around and wiggled her hind quarters while looking back at me seductively. That was my queue to mount her and I didn't miss it. My excitement slid into her easily and I lost control. The pleasure was bliss and I couldn't feel anything else but my excitement ramming into her over and over again. Each time I rammed into her I went farther and farther into her until I hit something. Whatever it was, make her lose control of her body and she fell to the ground with a groan of pleasure. To keep going though, I had to hold her up by myself.

Finally I couldn't hold it anymore and had to exit. But when I tried to exit, I shot my hot white sticky stinky juices all over her. Her beautiful fur was covered with my white juices. She looked up at me panting with pleasure etched into her features. I wanted to go again but I couldn't and collapsed next to her.

My vision became blurred and my hearing became muffled. The world was spinning until the blackness finally took over.