Melting down a snowflake (Illustrated)

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#1 of Short n' Spicy

Heya! This is a contest piece for the 2014 summer story contest. It clocks out at 2000 words EXACTLY, which makes it a nice little "fap read"

This is also my first formal attempt at F/F, and I really hope i captured it properly. Illustrations are done by alwayseversoawesome Devoid-Kiss

Also, this being a contest piece, if you find ANYTHING that feels off or a typo or something, please let me know with a comment ^^

Characters (c) me

Proofreading by Harrar SwiftFang

Inspiration by Picklessauce69

ENJOY!


"You have got... To be... Kidding me" the mouse girl muttered ,staring down at the now silent AC unit.

"Oh no... Did it just..." Her friend asked, the white furred rodent leaning up from her teenage magazine to look at what her brown colored counterpart was doing.

"Hang on..." Amy said as she delivered a swift kick to the big old unit. It coughed and sputtered briefly, and ran for a couple seconds... Before shutting down again.

"Yup, it's dead. Uuuuugh, this is not good..." Amy added with a frustrated groan. It was 104 degrees outside, and that old rusty AC had been the only thing keeping the two teenagers comfortable.

"What are we gonna do?" Kathy asked her friend, closing down the magazine and looking at the other girl.

"I dunno, snowflake..." Amy said with a sigh.

"Heeeey... Don't call me that, you know I don't like it" Kathy said with a pretend hurt face.

"Oh shush... I only do it 'cause I'm jealous of that white coat of yours. You should see how all the boys drool at you" Amy said as she jumped into the bed.

"You're the one who actually has some chest for boy's to drool at! I'm flatter than a sheet of paper!" The white furred girl mumbled.

"Stop it you... Ugh, I'm starting to feel the heat already. I don't know why people like summer, it's like living in a massive oven all the time..."

"Yeaaaah..." Kathy said as she scooted over to the other girl, both resting side by side on the small bed. "I can't wait for winter to come back. Nice cold weather, fresh powder on the mountains to ride on..." She daydreamed melancholically.

"Don't tease! you have no idea how much I'd like to go for some snowboarding right now..." Amy whined.

"Let's go to the airport and take a plane to... I dunno, the other side of the world! It's winter in New Zealand right now..." came the reply from the lighter mouse.

"Heh, yeah right... How are we even going to go to the airport? Our parents won't be back from that stupid thing until tomorrow... And they've got the car... Not to mention our passports... The keys to the shed where our gear is... Oh, and the money" Amy said.

"Well, you're right... Hey, what do they even do at a swinger retreat anyways?" Kathy pondered out loud.

"According to mom, they learn how to sing and play monopoly all day long" Amy said before a slight little pause.

"Boooooring... Hey Amy, do you mind if I stay in my undies? It's too hot in here..."

"Sure thing, snowflake. I might just do the same" Amy said as she began to undress.

"Batman? Cute!" Kathy said, pointing at the other girl's panties and the superhero's logo printed on the front.

"Yeah, found them at a sale down by the old district. They fit a bit tight, but they're comfy" she said.

"Neat!" Kathy said as she too took her shorts off and tossed her shirt aside. She was wearing a simple green set, with neon pink hearts printed over. It contrasted starkly with her pristine, white fur, and Amy had to look away to hide a little blush.

"I'm uh... I'm gonna go get some cold water. Want some?" She asked casually over her shoulder.

"That would be awesome" Kathy said as she dove back into the gossip section of her magazine, rolling around on the bed a little.

Amy walked to the fridge, shaking her head. She had to keep herself in check. The heat suppressants she had taken were working, which was probably the reason she was not jumping that white mouse's bones right then and there. But the fact that they'd grown so close... And that she had developed a little crush for that little white angel wasn't helping. She filled the glass with chunky ice cubes and then water, watching as the ice crackled in the cold liquid. She indulged herself in pressing a couple fingers over her panties and almost bucked her legs at the feeling. The pills might have curbed her lust... But not her swelling or the sensitivity.

"Get a hold of yourself, Amy..." She mumbled as she took a deep breath and let go of her crotch. It was still dry, thankfully, and the little maxi pad she had put there would keep her panties from turning into a bunched up piece of wet and sticky fabric.

"It can't really get any worse than this. You've held on before, and you will now" she muttered to herself before walking back into the room, glass in hand.


The glass clinked a little from the ice inside as it was placed on the night stand after both girls had their share of cold water.

"That was so good... bleeeeh, how can people live with this heat??" Kathy asked with a groan.

"I don't know... I feel like I'm slowly melting from the inside out... Uuugh..." Amy said, wiping some sweat off her brow.

"Why haven't your parents upgraded the AC?" Kathy asked.

"We're moving in like a month or so, and the new place has a central climate control system, so we just agreed it would be a waste of money" Amy said, flopping on her belly over the bed and groaning against the sheets.

"Huh... This is going to be a long month for you then..." Kathy said softly.

"Yeah.... I just don't know what to do anymore, this heat is unbearable" the caramel mouse said, blushing against the covers as she noticed her little Freudian slip. Luckily, it went unnoticed.

"Well..." The white furred girl said softly. A mischievous smile appeared on her face as she looked at the ice in the otherwise empty glass. She leaned in and grabbed one of the ice cubes with her hand, and suddenly pressed it against the back of Amy's neck.

"Eep!! What are you... Whoa..." She said in delighted shudders. Kathy dragged the ice cube down her naked back, cooling down her fur in tingly delight.

"Feels good, doesn't it? This is what I do when I'm in he-... Hot places" Kathy said, almost slipping some private information. The other mouse was too preoccupied with the ecstatic feeling of ice melting on her back. Once the little cube ended up as water, Amy turned and looked at her.

"Do it again?" She asked cutely.

"Nuh-huh, now it's your turn" she said as she laid on her belly. Amy leaned in and grabbed another ice cube, and bit her lip as she felt her snowflake squirm under her, while she rubbed the ice on her lithe body, circling her navel and under her training bra.

"aaaah... D-don't stop, that feels so good..." Kathy said in little whimpers. Amy straddled the white mouse and kept on rubbing the ice into her fur, until it finally melted down. She quickly grabbed another one and leaned in to do her neck and cleavage. Kathy could feel the warmth coming from her friend's crotch, and the shaking of her breath. Before any of them noticed what was going on, they were tasting each other's Chapstick, moaning ever so slightly as they kissed intimately and shyly. It lasted quite a while, neither having the valor or the willpower to break their lip lock. Finally, they had to split up to catch their breath. Amy's emerald eyes peered deep into her snowflake's, trying to decipher those dilated black pupils surrounded by lapis lazuli blue.

"I think we're going to need more ice cubes" Kathy said in a barely audible, shy whisper.


Kathy shuddered as the ice cube ran down her belly and was pressed on her navel. Her own paw trembled, shaking the ice cube that was teasing her partner at the same time. Their lips brushed together again and again, and the two mice interlocked into each other's flavor. They barely stopped to breathe, and it took two full glasses of ice cubes before Amy finally broke the silence.

"I didn't know you liked girls..." She said with a blush.

"I don't know if I do... Sure as hell like you though" Kathy said as her ice cube dipped under Amy's bra and brushed her nipple. The brown furred girl shook noticeably and pressed her own ice cube against Kathy's breast in response.

"Ah... I've never... Done this before with a girl..." Amy replied with a whine, coming closer as she saw the white furred girl undo her bra.

"I've never done this with anyone..." Kathy confessed. "Took you long enough to break though... Just like your AC. Couldn't stand the heat" she said as she began to undo Amy's own bra. The girl barely resisted, she was in a sexual daze.

"Y-yeah, it is pretty hot out there..." Amy said, trying to deflect the question.

"Silly... That's not the type of heat I'm talking about" Kathy replied, a teasy grin on her face.

"How did you..." Amy said shyly as she felt her roam a new ice cube over her budding breasts.

Kathy just smiled as she pulled her panties off to the side. Her outer lips were red and swollen, and a little string of moisture connected her sex to the fabric.

"Eh?"

"Whitten effect" Kathy said with a chuckle, leaning to rub her ice cube against the outside of the caramel furred girl's panties. Kathy had gone into heat the morning before, and the Whitten effect stated that it would make any girl around her also go into heat.

"Nyah..." Amy said as she felt cold fabric on her sex. She barely protested as the white furred mouse pulled her panties to the side and exposed her cunny, swollen and eager for attention.

"Meep!" She added once Kathy pressed a cold ice cube against her vaginal folds. It felt delightfully tingly, cold, refreshing and exciting... And she quickly returned the favor by rubbing her own ice cube up and down the fair girl's inner folds, making her shiver and writhe around in pleasure from the light nips of cold. Petite, cute meeps came whenever she approached her clit, and they found themselves scooting closer and closer together. Legs brushed against each other, then thighs were side by side... Kathy was the first one to realize it truly though: the ice was working wonders. But now she needed the warmth of another girl down there to take the itch away. In a bold movement she pushed her hips forward, trapping both ice cubes in the space between the two outer folds of the girls, both holding onto each other and letting out a shaky moan. Erratic hip movements made them grind their intimate zones together, fueled by primal needs. The ice cubes got pushed into Amy's passage rather easily while they did this, making their plump genitals rub directly and making both girls see fireworks off the corners of their eyes.

"Oh g-g-gods..." The caramel furred girl said, pressing harder and clenching down on her insides. The ice cubes slid out to their joining once more, lubricating the naughty grinding that was going on between these teens. Their paws on each other's shoulders, their mouths open in silent moans and shaky gasps... Both sweating and tense, sharing the blissful feeling of being penetrated by cold ice cubes while rubbing their sensitive, bare flesh together...It was only a matter of time before...

"A-ah! Snowflake!!!"

"Oh gods...!!!"

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Both girls shook and gasped, eyes closed and lips pursed together. It was all over in seconds, both loving teens turned into a wet, sweaty and twitchy mess of fur.

"Whoa... That was..." Amy began.

"Shush... I was there too..." Kathy interrupted her, pressing her naked body against her lover's. "Mmm... Do you think there's still ice left?" She asked.

"No, but there's a cucumber in the fridge" Amy said with a light chuckle.

"Mmm... This will be a fun summer"

-J

Easter egg: This is what Snowflake was reading

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