The Abomination

Story by Tristan Hawthorne on SoFurry

, , , , , , , , , , , , ,


This is a commission for WhitefireTyger. All characters are fully fabricated for this story.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

They awoke in total darkness. They didn't know about each other yet, or about why they were there. First thing they found out was that they were tied up on a cold floor.

The room was slowly illuminated by a torch. Those facing the right way looked up and around. Now they could see all their fellow captives were also bunnies. Then they saw a figure entering the chamber, seeming almost to glide, only his upper half visible, and quite obviously a bunny.

The bound bunnies tried to call out to the lapine with the torch, but he just smiled and put a finger to his lips. The torch bearer was black of fur and was slender and effete, what they could see of his hips being quite broad. He stood at a ledge above the shallow pit they all were contained in, a single ramp leading from that level, around to behind where the standing bunny was.

The captives heard the one thing that would make this situation worse. The hiss of a snake. One of the largest of the bunnies, possibly a hare at his size, was at the base of the ramp, and he looked up, to see with horror a black scaled snake slithering towards him. He wiggled and cried out into the gag across his muzzle, struggling to remove his bindings of leather, he could tell from the taste in his mouth...

The serpent flitted his tongue, and the black bunny above simply grinned as he watched. The serpent opened its maw and started to take the largest bunny in, jaws stretching out to work him past his jaws, not needing to constrict him, as the bindings prevented him from biting or clawing as he was dragged in, in flexes of at least six inches at a time. The other bunnies were terrified, trying to scoot away from the snake as it devoured their fellow captive.

The black bunny seemed to step away smoothly from the ledge as the snake started to follow the scoots of the bunnies in the pit, before gliding down and around the ramp facing perpendicular to his direction of travel. When he came around the bend of the curved ramp the other bunnies saw.

About a foot below the bunny's "hips", past where his heavy sheath and sac hang swollen with arousal, fur turned to scales, and their eyes followed that body all the way to the snake head that had devoured one of their own, now a bulge in the strange combined body. The rabbit grinned, licking his lips as his other half conveyed him down into the pit with his captives, "Mmmm... who's next...?"

The captives squirmed and struggled to get further away as the long bodied predator took up a good deal of the space at the bottom of the pit. The snakelike part coiled around the nearest of the bunnies, and brought his head up to the black lapine hybrid, as he set his torch into a sconce in the wall below where he once stood. He cooed softly to the coiled bunny, before hefting the lapine up and out of his coils with a smile, which got wider... and wider...

The bound bunny watched in terror as the bunny proved he was more than just half snake, that maw gaping open and revealing a glistening tunnel of flesh, which soon descended upon his head. The others were pressed together tight against a wall eyes wide at the sight, watching another of their own being devoured by this abomination.

Soon another bulge adorned that form, this one remaining in the torso portion of the creature, paws gently rubbing over the squirming form, rumbling as his sheath fell back, a long black member growing out into the open. A few feet lower than that, a slit in the scales parted, two hemipene extending out as well, flexing and curling a bit, showing they were as flexible as the half of the beast they belonged to.

Slithering sort of backwards, the bunny torso approached, grabbing one of the last two bunnies, hefting him up with supernatural strength, so that his bound feet dangled above his cumslit. The remaining lapine stared in horror as the cumslit gaped open like a snake as well, and the bunny started to be fed into it, watching, unable to look away as it throbbed and flexed its way up the long slender legs of his fellow captive, then over his hips and over his arms, the black lapine leaning back, taking his paws away as his powerful maleness devoured of its own volition now, flexing its way up past shoulders... before with one last look, long bunny ears were slurping out of sight, as the bottom of the shaft bulged with the trapped bunny, who slid down slowly now.

The remaining bunny was so distracted, he didn't notice the hemipene before it was too late! They had wrapped around his legs and were pulling him towards the broad slit they had slid out of. He squirmed and whimpered at his gag, torn between watching his feet disappear past scales and the sight of the ballsac only a foot away sagging lower with the shape of that bunny, squirming in the ravenous maleness, as a soft burbling sound started to be heard in the chamber.

He struggled more, but his knees were sliding in, and those hemipene worked like arms wrapping around his waist and pulling him deeper into the warm space between them. He writhed as his hips were drawn in, the flexible shafts now tugging atop his shoulders, the last of his body leaving the ground as he was tugged further in. The abomination rolled onto his back, torso still upright as he stroked and fingered his shaft from around his belly, which was slowly twitching, watching his last catch sliding deeper, soon just his head outside, as the serpent head curved around to lick the last bunny softly, licking his lips as the two hemipene wrapped around his head, engulfing it fully, before they sliiid down out of sight, the slit closing up.

The strange naga rumbled a bit, happily, before rolling around and coiling up, his heads resting together across bulges in his form, feeling the struggles slowly end as he fell asleep to process his meals....

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Comments? Questions? Commission requests?