Bat vs. crocodile

Story by Galaxyclouds on SoFurry

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I wanted to do a kind of ritting that looks like Creaturebeat's one and

I kind of don't know what I did in the end ._.U

  • = refeence to my character Orion Ratzo, who is a Hyena that mostly his body is made of electricity

Bat vs. crocodile

So, we I was in sixth grade. 18 years old and basically typical teen boy, I was really thin though my like to videogames, guys come on how can we be that thin while just playing games?, well I was thin at least, anyway video games and whatnot. One day an old teacher and I got some problems we did this a lot. But today was different, my teacher said to me look I will be in the need to call your parents" "there is no need to do that" I told him, then he answered "then fight me" I... accepted.... Well so, we'd agree on a time and place and then meet there and fight. I just don't know why I did it, and why I went there, but well when I got there, he told me "until one of us gets unconscious", I just didn't had any other way to do anything I was there anyway, well I am there, my name is Chest, and I'm fighting my teacher, Backs.

It was a Friday in the night, all the kids had gone home by this time, and so had all the teachers. Except both of us, my dads where dinning in a special restaurant, one of my dad told me before I'd left that day that he wouldn't be there until about half an hour after 10:30 PM, It is 9:45 PM so, I needed to do this fast, how could I, I'm thin tall and I don't exercise mi body, my teacher was tall to, but taller than I, he was kind of with a tummy, but he h actually had a lot of muscle, but not that much, but enough I can say...

"So" I said "Any rules?"

"Take of your shirt..." he said immediately.

"Uh?" I answered rapidly

"I want to see your gut" he said with a diabolical grin in his face

"I'm not doing this" I said, was he crazy?

"You want your shirt to get wet?" he said, I did not understood until, It came to mind, today was going to rain in the night, a big rain.

My stomach is smooth, soft, and unbroken by any sorts of abs. I had (and still have) a pretty big, belly. I'm not really muscular, so it would take a while for me to be able to knock out him, which he fine with. We had almost half an hour, after all, time moves fast as a thunder, but this time, ran like a fast thunder, like a thunder hyena*.

We got our fists up, ready to fight, and got within swinging range of one another. I nodded at him, signaling him to start us off. He nodded and smirked at me. "well then take of your shirt, and I'll take mine" he said

"Okay." I started to take it off, but in that time "OOOOOOFFF!"

I admit, I think even his bones have muscles, his fist had buried itself in my belly, snugly embedded in the area of my stomach below my navel. I bent over, my eyes wide and my cheeks puffed out as I doubled over.

"Ha ha! You're like a pillow! Ha" he just laughed at my stomach, my fur is red so I thought I had a problem, if he reddens my stomach It was going to be hard to see it, so he would think I'm still all right.

"Ha ha! How'd that feel, huh?" I was going to answer him but "OOOOOOOOOMPH!" My own breath got driven out of me as I felt Back's fist plow into my belly, his fist fitting neatly inside my navel. It sank in nearly to the wrist, and I was knocked out to the ground as he shoved me back. I moaned as the fists left my stomach, but I have always being know ledged by being fast, flying and running, I tightened my fist and with a jump from the ground I jumped right out straight to impale him on his navel the same way he'd done to me. He was able to dodge out of the way though, and the next think I knew I was letting out a loud "OOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNGGGGGGG" as his fist buried itself wrist-deep in my belly again, right into my solar plexus.

"?!" That was what I thought as Back's fist got out of my belly. I managed to stagger to a stop hugging my stomach and gasping while drool came like falls as I feel horrible by the punch he left in my belly fills back in as do my air too.

"HOOOOMPH!" I felt my cheek puff up, and a slam from a elbow twice in my belly, deepening the crater that the first elbow left, directly in my navel. "OAAAHHH" "AAHhhhhh..." I was gagging and choking I stumble backwards, hugging my belly as I drool. 5 min. pass and he says "bat, don't be a cat". Then he runs to me and his head slams into my belly, filling the cavity behind it completely and lifting me up to the air by this, to the height he is, I'm glad that I didn't have anything in my stomach I had the feeling to puke.

As I stood there, in the head of my teacher, my stomach without mercy gets less space thanks to the head being there, my belly was completely to its top of how deep it could get, Back knew this, ad made his opportunity. I jerked and convulsed frenziedly as he traced a line of quick punches down my belly, I was completely in air, when I was falling, in seconds a punch lifted me from the air, he only made his attacks to my solar plexus.

"OOOf OOMPH OOOOof oof oomph ou....."

Each hit left a crater in my gut, one that quickly filled in, my eyes wide as I tried to breathe. He pressed the attack, charging at me to deposit more punches to the belly, but then...

WUMP. WUMP. SPLIT. SPLAT.

I felled to the ground, and I was vomiting blood...

I felt, completely mad, crazy, I just got enough, I did my best, and I jumped to him, and bitten him in the neck, he ran away, I did the same I went to the hospital, while vomiting more blood, It left a blood path, and I was getting bathed in it, I had little energy, but I made it in time, everyone was scared, seeing a teen like that or even an adult was just so devastating, I got into surgery, hours happened, I survived, my dads came up, I was still, asleep they wanted to know what happened, after some time I woke up, and I told them, and my teacher was found guilty, of child violence, almost homicide, violent teaching, and pederast, I kind of didn't knew the last one, but that explains why he wanted me like that.

One year passed since that, and I trained myself, I'm now more taller and more muscular than before, not much, I just have some little abs, my stomach is still soft anyway. But I haven't had something like that since that one, happy for me and my fathers.

The end