Orion’s beatdown

Story by Galaxyclouds on SoFurry

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I actually wasnt planing on doing this one, but thanks to someone I ended up doing it

This is my hyena character Orion he got a bad night


It was cold and dark in the night; Orion was in his favorite spot, he went there with his regular shorts and a sweater to look at the constellations, they were no one in his spot, by sometime of viewing the sky Orion fell asleep, it was getting into dawn when...

*smirk smirk*

-a sound waked up Orion, when he waked up he could move his hands someone was moving him in the ground dust was flying by every second Orion then tried to electrocute his puller, nothing happened, Orion was really scared, what just happened? He could always electrocute, he tried to saw his paws and there were some metal boots on his paws, which was some surprise to him, but the thing that he could understand was that he was shirtless now...

Orion: ....[what in hell? Why am I shirtless, I like It, but not when I'm like this!]

???: hey shit, you up?

Orion:[hey I know this voice!]

???: time no seen, Orion...

Orion: Cloud?

Cloud: what?

Orion: why are you taking me shirtless to somewhere?

Cloud: I want to beat you up

Orion:.....[well at least he is honest, but I don't like him honest to think of it] ehhh, why me? I don't even know you very well

Cloud: you called me ugly, and I'm not ugly so I don't like to people to call me ugly, so you will never call me ugly again

Orion: You're just being dramatic

Cloud: and YOU CONTINUE TO INSULT ME!!!

Orion: [god damn] ...

Cloud: where here

-It was a little place, 3 big trees like a little room perfect to be inside one alone, It would be a good place to relax, for Orion's "luck" this wasn't the time to relax, cloud made his way to the trees, he stand there and put Orion there so he couldn't move a lot-

Orion: I still don't get why you're doing this...

Cloud: I just want to see how deep my hand gets inside of your stomach....

Orion: that's crep...... UUUUUUUUUUGHHHH!

-Orion got no time to even end a single sentence, there was already a fist inside him the surprise taked him bad making Cloud's hand to go deep enough to hide his wrist

Cloud was not there for fun, the time has started so he taked his hand out of Orion's stomach, Orion could only gasp and try to get his air back to him-

Cloud: I'm not going easy even If you're a child

-*SLAM* a another punch went into Orion's belly, now getting in his solar plexus, there where little air in him so the only thing that went out of him was some saliva

*BAM* with his hand open he slams in, not making a lot of damage, so he can get air again and continue to get punched conscious-

Orion: ughhhhh....

Cloud: don't tell me you're done, we just started!

-*PUM* a punch to Orion's chest, It actually did a lot of damage and once again taked his air away with a big "AAAUNNNGHH" scream coming from Orion that scream was suddenly replaced with a hard *PUUM* more saliva came from him, Orion put his hands in Cloud's arm, so he couldn't bend into his arm-

Cloud: Oh I get it, thanks by the idea.

-Orion was confused by this what was him talking about? Cloud grabs both of Orion's hands, takes his punch out of his stomach and grabbed him with both hands and lifted him from the ground leaving hopeless to Orion to make any kind of defense from this assault, made his power go up and kicked him right in his navel air, saliva and a long "OOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUFFFFFFFHNGHGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH" his eyes derped, his ears got down, his legs tried to do something and his hands stretched all his body was trying to move from the knee inside of his stomach exactly in his belly mutton, nothing helped Cloud leaved his leg there for a minute, Orion all could do was be mouth open while saliva came out every second, efter the derp of 2 seconds he just watched the rest of the minute how happy Cloud was to see him be painfully unable to do something.

After some fore 15 seconds Cloud Let go of Orion, Orion fell on the ground and started moaning touching his stomach.

Cloud left the scene with the shirtless tortured hyena...

The end.