Blackfish

Story by ShingetsuMoon on SoFurry

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#12 of National Poetry Writing Month

Any ideas about what this poem is about? Anyone who has seen or heard of the documentary Blackfish will know right away. Yes, this poem is indeed about orca's or Killer Whales. I haven't been to Seaworld or any marine park in years and I honestly don't plan on going back. They made me far too uncomfortable even before the documentary came out.

Obviously this poem contains a lot of anthropomorphism. At the very least maybe it will make you think.



Black as night and white as snow.

You thought you could tame a

creature big enough to dwarf

your puny boats?

Even humans would not be

so foolish, so you stole me

away when I was young.

Did you enjoy it?

The thrill of the hunt as my

family swam for their lives?

Half of them swimming off

to try distract you while the

mothers and their calves ran

desperately with nets at

their backs.

Were you proud of what you

did when you finally captured

one of the calves and dragged

the net in front of their mother?

Were you boast about how

skilled you were when you

hauled us into the air? Dragging

us out of our home and leaving

us at your mercy?

Did you shed any tears as

you watched my mother chasing

after your boat with her screams

piercing the air?

STOP. COME BACK.

STOP. COME BACK.

Did you hear the pain in her voice

or did you only see a dumb

animal whose loss would soon

be forgotten?

Did your tiny ears hear the change

in pitch as her cries turned from

pleas for you to stop into goodbyes

as she fell back and let the boat

pull away for good?

GOODBYE. SAD.

GOODBYE. SAD.

Trapped in a cage with walls that

bounced back my booming echos

like sharks teeth ripping into the

back of my skull.

Fed fish that were froze and lifeless.

Imprisoned with strangers whose

teeth tore me to pieces each and every

night. Tiny pools barely big enough

for us to turn around in.

No escape from the anger they vented

on me. Anger at the ones who held them

there. Who tore them away from their

families. Who forced them to jump and

play for the amusement of others.

You sent me away to another home.

You thought it would be better for me.

But a cage is still a cage.

And a prison is still a prison.

More strangers. More hate.

More anger. More packed stands.

More jumping. More fancy tricks

day after day.

You drag me from my mother.

Separate me from my family.

Throw me in with violent strangers.

Force me to perform for dead fish

and a rub on the head.

Then you turn around and ask

me for my love?

Only humans could be so arrogant

and so foolish.

How can a prisoner ever come

to love their jailer?

I tolerate your affections because

there is no one else.

I perform your tricks because I

have nothing else to occupy

my time.

I eat your dead fish that taste

like rot in my mouth because

I would starve otherwise.

But love?

Forgiveness?

You may have forgotten what

your kind did to me, but I

never will.

You strip me of my pride

and then expect me not to

get angry. Frustrated.

Psychotic.

How can you expect

someone to be normal

after leaving them trapped

in a cage for their entire lives?