My Little Pony: Domination Is Magic: Chapter 1 - The Big Mistake

Story by DragonTalon on SoFurry

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Yes this was an April Fools joke. :)

After posting my 80th chapter I've decided to take my "Fates of the Unicorns" series in a new direction for a while, and write a crossover novel between Fates and MLP:FIM. Don't worry, the stories will not be G rated, but will be full of porn and slavery just like always, just taking place in another setting. All the characters in the current story will be making appearances, but Rahmor will be the focus. I figured posting the first part would be easier than explaining, so here it is. I expect it will be 20-30 chapters in total. Perhaps a few more spinoff series too.

Fates of the Unicorns: My Little Pony: Domination Is Magic: Chapter 1 - The Big Mistake

Twillight stared at the wreckage of Ponyville, working the bit in her mouth with her tongue, still not used to it, even after a year of wearing it. She was even less used to the sight of her former town, and the knowledge that it's destruction was all her fault. Worse, her friends, now all gathered around her in bondage, all because of her. She closed her eyes in pain and shame at the memory. She had been so confident, so full of power and enthusiasm, so full of hubris. Why had she played with those spells? She just wanted to see if they could really show her another world.

They did.

And then those.. things came through. Horrible, twisted creatures.. like giant insects. She shuddered at the memory, how she ran only to see them outside as well. Catching other ponies, doing.. things to them. Terrible things. She had fought then, they all did. But as Princess Celestia had observed later, they were not from their world, and their magic had little effect on them. Especially once they began feeding on the ponies they caught, corrupting them, sucking the very magic from their violated bodies.

Not even the elements of harmony could stop them. That had been their last hope, and it had worked, for a moment... but it killed the pony hostages as well as the insects they targeted, and even before they lost the will to kill friend along with foe, the insects had somehow managed to absorb the energies, twisting and deflecting and consuming it. That had nearly killed her, and her friends. Her precious friends.

They could only watch as the town was consumed by the growing hive, ponies held captive inside, tentacles shoved into their bodies, many having those horrible things on their backs, tendrils sunk into their brains to corrupt their minds as the larvea in their bloated bellies consumed their bodies and their very essence.

Then the dragons came. They had seemed like a godsend at first, using not magic, but sheer brute force and physical fighting to tear through the ranks of the insects. They had come to save them, but at a price. She swallowed, feeling the tight restricting collar around her neck. Remembered how they had killed not just the insects, but the poor ponies held by them. That was when they were told the truth. The ponies were not hostages, but food. Their bodies, their magic, their very souls being consumed and devoured.

She had been such a fool! All the time planning to save them, when death was their only rescue, which came far to late for so many of them. How many were snuffed out, sucked into whatever hellish limbo the insect hive mind had become. All because she was too proud to admit defeat.

The dragons saw the power the elements held, and ways of using it they had never even dreamed of. Her friends didn't understand what was happening at the beginning. By the time they did, it was too late. That blue dragon, the one that had led the first charge. He had claimed the six of them.

Fluttershy was the first to submit. Twillight looked over at her friend, staring not at the town like the rest, but backwards at her Master. DUring the invasion she had seen horrors her mind just couldn't take, and it broke her. She had been trapped in the fist invasion, hiding, watching other ponies being taken, violated. Bodies twisted and forced to breed new insects. When Rahmor pulled her from the wreckage of her home, she clong to him and never left his side since. Following him like a puppy, terrified if he got too far. She had always been submissive, and the dragon easily made her submit, and worship him.

Dash was next. She shook her head at the sight of her, lying on her side wrapped in chains, straining against them. They all thought she would be the one to save them, escaping and getting help. But Rahmor used her own strengths against her. Taunting her, calling her weak, challenging her to feats of strength and endurance. Her blue winged friend fell to the manipulation and humiliation of loosing to the much stronger dragon. Soon forgot everything but trying to prove herself to him, doing.. unspeakable things to show her endurance and skills. Proving she could learn to beat any challenge he gave her, learn any skill. But the only skill she really learned, was how to be a good slave. Even now she only struggled to try and show she could break the chains that held her, even though they never did. They only came off when Master allowed, and the former cloud tamer showed then just how tamed she had become.

She never thought Applejack would submit. She had to be kept gagged and restrained, so angered over the treatment of her friends, so furious at the idea of them all being treated as property. But he found her weakness too. He simply threatened her friends in her presence, waited for her loyalty and selflessness to make her cry out, "Let them go, take me instead" and he did. Twillight shuddered at what that dragon did to her friend, but every beating, every rape, every torture was mixed with the satisfaction that the treatment she endured saved the others. Soon she was begging to be abused, needing to feel the pleasure of sacrificing for others. Serving them. Serving her Master with her suffering. She only glanced at her strong friend, gritting her teeth as she endured the large, dragon-shaped dildo painfully strapped into her.

She looked away, and saw Pinkie. She made a face at the sight of her, covered in leather and kneeling on her forelegs, rump and tail raised to the sky. Everyone knew she was crazy, but nobody understood her hidden perversions and just what a... slut she was. But Rahmor saw. Didn't even hesitate with her, just took her away to show her all the kinky things dragons could do to a pony. All her friends had been horrified at her transformation, made worse when she helped that dragon molest and enslave them. Even now she felt resentment at how she had turned. But it wasn't her fault. That dragon made her drunk with pleasure, and the pink mare just wanted to show all her friends the new pleasures she had discovered. Twillight bit her lip, remembering just what that pink tongue could do.

She looked to the last of her friends, Rarity. Her white face forever hidden in a golden mask adorned with jewels. She had been so brave in the fighting, so very brave... and paid for it when one of those things grabbed her face and horn and began to feed. They had pulled her away, but her muzzle... was... ruined. Twillight winced at the memory of that scared, disfigured face. Rahmor knew just what to do with her, having that mask fashioned, and then adding to her decorations. Piercings, tattoos, turning her pretty friend into an object. Making her beg for more, and putting her on display to strut her stuff and show off. She now did nothing but pose and show her body, all of her body to anyone she could, but especially her Master. Twillight had to look away as Rarity saw her glance and gave her but and tail a wriggle, making the bells tied to it jingle.

She took a deep breath, looking in the distance to the castle. Even the two Princesses couldn't escape. They had developed a powerful bond, a deep love, but nobody had suspected that love went deeper, much deeper. But Rahmor did. Seduced them with each other, and while they had been distracted with exploring their newly exposed lust, and trapped them both in some large plant. Keeping them in a eternal state of lovemaking, bodies pressed and bound together. It helped the war he had said, they now produced things to fight the insects, but neither of them were aware of anything but each other.

The whole town, and slowly, the lands around had fallen to the dragons. They were all slaves now. Even Big Red was no match for the gold and silver dragoness who had taking a liking to him. She didn't know what they did to him, but he was theirs without question. He did whatever he was told without hesitation, showing nothing but total submission to them, except sometimes, a hint of fear and dread. Spike had gone willingly back to the dragons home to be raised as one of them. She hoped he was happy there among his own kind.

But it had all been necessary. Their friendship had not been enough to stop the insects, but once they had all been forced, guided and trained to submit, Rahmor used them and the elements to unleash power she had never suspected was possible. It had destroyed the entire invasion, and the town... searing insect and pony alike from the world, and spilling over into the other. Devastating the hives there too. But not destroying them. Even the power of Domination couldn't do that, but it could beat them back. So once a month they came back here. Performed the ritual, blasted those hellish creatures back again, and again.

Every time she lost a bit more of herself, all of her friends did. The power only worked when they all submitted, completely and totally. Controlled by a single, dominant dragon master. A literal orgy was needed, a simultaneous climax and then... all that power flowing through them. Searing the submission into them even as it blasted away the evil that threatened two worlds. She shuddered again, at how their powers had been so twisted. How she and all her friends had become slaves to that big blue beast. She turned her head to look at him, standing there behind them all with that unicorn mare at his side, his slave and guard.

Rahmor turned his gaze from the city to the purple pony before him, giving her a look of disapproval, and then glancing at the wreckage of the town with a sad shake of his head.

Twillight felt like she had been punched, seeing his disappointment and helplessly following his gaze to her destroyed town. Her fault. All her fault. She had been so stupid, so bad. Such a bad, bad pony. She deserved this she knew. Deserved to be punished. She never wanted to be a leader, never wanted to have to be the one who stepped up, took charge and saved everyone, day after day. It was so much better this way, really.. to let someone else take control. Rescue her. Punish her. She slunk forward, moaning in shame and humiliation at all that she had done, and failed to do. Her tongue licked over a blue claw as she let out a pitiful whinny, "Please Master, punish me..."

Rahmor obliged.

...

One year previously...

Twillight looked excitedly at the book at her hooves. Other worlds? Could she truly see them and the wonders they held? "Spike! I need several blank scrolls and a feather from that phoenix" she said as she bent down happily to her assistant, eyes filled with awe as she started to explain what she had discovered.

Spike put down the latest issue of his favorite graphic novel with a very dragon growl. He grabbed Twillight Sparkle by her horn and slapped her face back and forth until the purple pony was reeling, "How bout you shut your bitch mouth and let me finish my story! I gotta find out what happens to Chakal!"

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Ahhh, hah. Heh. Hee. That was disturbingly more fun than I had thought it would be, but it's out of my system now. April fools, ect, yadda yadda.

I blame searching FurAffninity yesterday for my username and finding these two submissions...

stardarkfox drew my avatar in MLP style. Daww. Thanks. :-) http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12874660/

Then I saw this one...

thps48 posted http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9346605/

_It being a few days before April Fools the idea popped into my head and dammnit, I just had to do it. _

Just to clear things up, no I am not abandoning the main storyline for this. It's a joke. :-)

_I'm already working on the next REAL chapter. _

So... confession time! Anyone fall for this? I wasn't trying very hard to be convincing, but really, weirder things get posted by furries all the time. Heheh.