Their First Time
This is just a (very) short story I got the idea for from a friend a while back, but decided to take my own spin on it. Only took me an hour or so to write, quadruple check and so on, but I'm happy with it =)
The actual story series I've decided to start has been planned out for the first 4 chapters completely. Now I just need to find the time to write it, and I'll get that going, no 'maybe's!
Enjoy ^w^
*Update* apparently, where I tried to be subtle with the ending, I was a bit TOO subtle! So, hopefully the new ending clears the actual intentions of this up!
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Their First Time ** By Fluffy the Fox**
I gave her a gentle kiss.
"Don't be nervous, you'll enjoy it." I assured her with a smile, stroking her arm soothingly.
"I know I will," she sighed, "it's just... it's my first ever time. I mean, I'm excited to be sharing it with you, I'm just nervous, you know... but I trust you. I'm ready to go." I took a deep breath and looked her in the eyes,
"I love you." I said. But as she tried to reply, she gasped as it all started. I took her paw and felt her grip down, unsurprisingly, but I knew she'd enjoy it even if it was a bit painful to start off with. Slowly, as we got going, she started to relax and I felt the tension drain out of her. By this point, I was already feeling the excitement, the rush of adrenaline. I couldn't think of one other fur I could enjoy this with more. Needless to say, I loved her completely; from the little patch of white on her chest, to her glorious fiery-orange fur, to her petite frame and beautiful sky blue eyes. They were what drew me to her in the first place. They're so strange for a fox... but so alluring. I felt like the luckiest fox alive.
Things started to speed up, and I felt her paw clamping down on mine at every movement. She was loving the experience and so was I.
"You don't have to be quiet, you know," I said with a smirk, "you won't be the only one that likes to shout out." This earned me a playful slap on the side. She let out a loud howl, making me jump and causing a satisfied smile to creep onto her face.
"Like that?" she beamed.
"Very funny..." I replied, embarrassed but still smiling. We sped up, earning a shocked but pleasurable mix between a moan and a shout from her, which in turn causes me to let out a howl of my own. She pulls me in for a hug, and I eagerly accepted as we kept going. The excitement was getting to me and I knew that it had only been a couple of minutes, but I could feel everything coming to an end. With one last howl from the both of us, everything slowed to a stop and after a moment I got up, legs shaking, taking my place at her side. I got a lick on the cheek and a fluffy tail stroking its way up my leg.
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"That was absolutely amazing!" she tells me, "I'll admit it didn't last very long, but do you think we could go again soon?" I laugh and pull her in closely, enjoying the tickling sensation of that soft tail dancing around my legs. Soon enough, I raise mine to intertwine with hers.
"Of course, anything for you... it'll probably take half an hour though before we can go again." I smile weakly, exhausted from the experience, where she seems to be metaphorically bouncing.
After half an hour of idle chat, cuddles and more nuzzling than I'd intended, I finally manage to bring back the will to take my position again. This time, I can tell, she's ready for it and there is no way she's going to take it easy on me. But, in anticipation, we continue in the same way we did previously, only this time she starts screaming right from the get-go before we've even had a chance to speed up.
"Calm down, you!" I say between laughs, giving her a gentle nip on the ear and a trail of saliva up the side of her face. I get a very badly held glare from her as she wipes her paw along her cheek, and then down my chest. If I was ever bad at mocking anger before, now is certainly no exception as my attempt causes her to burst into a massive fit of laughter. A sudden jolt causes her to gasp and squeeze me, though, and I know exactly what's happening. I can't help but chuckle at her suddenly being taken by surprise, and that too earns me a slap on my side. I squeeze her paw gently as we speed up, and again I feel disappointed that the end is approaching far too quickly. But, it's out of both of our control, as once again a pair of howling foxes leads to a slow and gentle stop.
As I get up, this time, my shaking legs have all but turned into jelly, and as I take my place by her side, she looks deep into my eyes and plants a firm and loving kiss on my muzzle.
"Thank you so, so much. I'm so glad I let us do this, thank you for being patient with me too. But it really has been a... special experience to share with you." She says through her soft smile. I can't resist her anymore, and I pull her into a kiss that earns moans from both of us.
"I enjoyed it too," I say sheepishly, looking down at my shaking legs "but we shouldn't go on it again..." Almost hurt, she looks me in the eyes. As quickly as it appeared, her look of hurt turns into a mocking laugh and she slaps me firmly on the arm as the realisation dawns on her.
"You big liar!" she says, badly failing at holding in any laughter, "This was your first time too, wasn't it!" I look down, embarrassed. She was correct, it was my first time. I hadn't told her it wasn't, but when she made mention to it, I'd never corrected her. "Well, thank you for being brave and letting us both enjoy ourselves, I really appreciate it." She picks my muzzle up and leans in for another kiss.
I thank her, as she smiles at me. "Don't thank me too soon," she grins, "I'm not done making jokes just yet, wimp! But this ride clearly isn't for you, at least not for the rest of the day and I want you to enjoy our trip too, so I promise that the next roller-coaster can be a smaller one." With that, she takes my paw and we wander away from the attraction, whose queue has almost doubled since we were in it. It was fun, but I definitely look forwards to taking things a bit lighter for the rest of the day, promising myself some cotton candy and a go on the Bumper Karts to calm down with.