the storm of mind's
#6 of poem fate
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The storm throws me down. In side of my mind. For the chaous wont let me alone. My emotion are spikeing all over the place. Were am i cant stand this. Confusion at every trun. Im so lost inside. My soul fell so change . This storm wont let up. Fire brun's my mind truning it to dust of memorys. The chaous is breaking me down. My past seem so clearly now. No the pain is to great the sorrow to real. I cant stand this my mind is being driven to insanity. This storm is destroying me with all it chaous. The past to brutle the futor to dull. I hate my being. But the dust of this storm shall rebuild me. But leave me lost in a new life.