Loki and Jackie's story (Commision) (Straight

Story by Evil Evilness on SoFurry

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Commision story that was given away if everyone likes it I am willing to take commisions my guidlines were featured above and will be posted here soon.


This story was given away as a prize back in the journal linked here: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/5036337/

Commisioned by zarus195 zarus195

Characters belong to: Loki belongs to zarus195 zarus195 and Jackie belongs to jackiejackal jackiejackal

Hope everyone enjoys and feel free to look into commissioning me. And please fave/comment if you like both here and on Loki's page.

Story for people who don't download.


The lithe jackal stretched and yawned softly before she stood, stretching out her arms and trying to relieve some of the stiffness in her back and shoulders that had been building for the last few hours. Her eyes did a quick sweep over her desk out of habit, making note of all her supplies there along with the piece she was currently working on noting in her head things she wanted to change so she'd be satisfied with the result.

Another soft yawn escapes her making as she realize that it must be later then she believed. She shakes her head to chase off the sleep for a bit and leans in doing a quick organizing of her desk when a knock at her door steals her attention away. With a sigh and a quick look at the clock she walks to the door muttering to herself, "Who in the world would be here at this hour?"

She opens the door slowly to reveal her handsome wolf brother, his muzzle flashing a large grin and a rose clenched tightly between his teeth, "Madam Jackie, so wonderful to see you again." he says as he smirks.

She growls playfully and punches him lightly in the arm, "Loki you jerk,do you not know how to use a phone? What if I had already gone to bed?"

He smiles and hugs her tight nipping her ear playfully after tossing the rose aside, "A risk well worth taking sissy just to see the look on your face there."

Jackie sighs and kisses his cheek before she shuts the door behind him, "So what have you been up to lately bubba? I haven't seen you in ages, have you been okay?"

Loki smiles slightly, "Eh, same things happening as ever you'd be bored, trust me."

She sighs, "Still playing Mr. mysterious huh? Well at least you're wearing your suit and tie, that always speaks to things at least being somewhat normal for you." Her eyes glancing down her green crop top and jean shorts, feeling more casually dressed then usual, when compared to her bubba who always sought to be dressed to the nines.

Loki smirks, "Well the most important thing is that I'm here right, how have you been how is your new place?" He says as he looks around her home.

She sighs as she looks around, "I dunno, it's nice enough but.... it feels so empty like I'm missing a lot of things." She looks up at him, "I've been missing you a lot."

The wolf smiles sadly and nods, "I've been missing you too sissy."

Loki wraps his arms around Jackie and holds her close just enjoying having each other like this again. He strokes over her back tenderly before leaning in and kissing her softly. Their muzzles press together as they kiss, their bodies feeling heated as their arousal quickly grows. He pulls back and smiles, "May I sissy?"

She blushes and smiles coyly, "You really like that bubba? Then lets go back to the bedroom then."

She takes his paw in hers and leads him back to her room a very elegant spread before them silken sheets on a comfortable mattress before them as she releases his paw giving him a sultry wink as she slides her fingertips free from his as she lays back on the bed smiling, "Well bubba, what are you waiting for?"

He smirks and loosens his tie as he walks closer slowly sliding down kissing on her footpads gently, "Mmm...I love your paws sissy," he licks slowly between her toes, "they taste so good."

She giggles slightly and taps his nose with her big toe, "Silly wolf that's embarrassing..."

He kisses all over her soft black pads, "What is? The fact that you have the softest most feminine footpaws ever and that your brother loves them? Or is it the fact that I think they taste good sissy?" He drags his tongue over the soft pads a rumbling in his chest as he enjoys teasing her with his tongue her pads glistening softly from his licking."

"Bubba...please...s-stop" She blushes as her toes curl a bit trying to hold off the laughter as he tickles her with his tongue her cheeks flushed.

His eyes light up with a touch of lust and a bit more of mischief as he recognizes the signs of her being close to laughing, "Ooh...and what if I don't want to?" He rubs his fingertips of the sole of her right footpad rapidly bracing his arm for when she kicks out instinctively, howling in laughter.

"Bubba! No! HAHHA AHAHAHAAH! Oh god stop! It...it AH HAHAHA! Ssss-toop!" He body shakes and spasms as he unrelentingly tickles over her soft pads, he laughter only making her a more tempting target for the playful wolf.

"Sorry sissy but Loki wants to play!" His fingers move all over her pad, trapping it under one of his arms so he can work over it with no restraint her body arching and squirming as he teases her footpaw eagerly"

Her breath comes in heavy pants as she tries to catch her breath from the unending assault, her body shaking and arching from the jolts of ticklish torture her brother is putting her though. He smirks and nibbles on her largest toe, "If you want me to stop sis, say please."

She trembles and gasps as she tries to find the words, not to mention the air to say them as her 'torture' continues, biting her lip before calling out desperately, "B-bubba HAHAAH! OH Please Stop! Ahahaha! Oh oh please I need you t-to HAHAHAHHA! STOP!"

He smiles as he stops, releasing her foot and watching her curl up a bit still giggling as she tries to regain her composure, her breathing slowly returning to normal as her eyes catch his a few tears caught in hers from her non-stop laughter. He can only smirk when he sees joy and lust reflected in them.

Jackie smiles up to her wolf brother and slides down a bit, her footpaws rubbing over his chest and down his stomach getting to his crotch, rubbing over the bulge in his pants, feeling how hard he is for her, "Seems like bubba is feeling excited for me, huh? Why don't you strip for me?"

He leans back smirking slightly as he undoes his tie blushing a bit as he feels his sister's footpaws still working over his hidden length. He drops the tie as he unbuttons his jacket and shirt sliding them off his shoulders. The tip of his tented crotch darkening as his length starts to ooze precum making him hasten to remove his belt and pants before the expensive fabric is ruined. Letting them drop onto the floor. The jackal's rubbing accidentally making his needy blue length slip though the fly of his black boxers the fabric already having been darkened with his precum, his length now starting to be coated with his own precum giving it a lubricated sheen along with his sister's footpaws making them glisten with his liquid lust, "Oh sis...you're too good to me..."

She smiles as she works over her brother's cock, hooking her toes over the waistband of his underwear and pulling it down fully exposing his length, his sheath and his full, hanging orbs so full of seed, her footpaw turning cupping his tender orbs with her soft sole feeling them churn his whole package unable to even remotely hide his overwhelming arousal for her.

The jackal smiles up at her brother one of her paws slowly stroking up over his length as the other gently bounces his orbs with her soft pads. She curls her toes over his tip feeling how hot and hard his length is in the care of her soft footpaws.

He shivers his balls churning as she works him his length and crotchfur soaked with his precum dripping copiously, drops falling to the floor under him.

"Sis, don't stop I need it bad, bubba hasn't cum in over a week." He pants out his cock throbbing hard his knot just barely starting to swell and show itself, his balls churning so very full for her as she works over him, going faster and giving him more pressure.

He bites his lip as his hips buck, his climax coming already the days without release making his sister's expert footwork impossible to resist, the wolf leans his head back and howls as his length throbs and starts to spurt rope after rope of thick creamy cum, "Oh sissy! Oh yes! Oh fuck!"

She blushes at his intense reaction as he sprays his thick load over her soft footpaws, several ropes making it as far as the bedspread his balls bouncing slightly on their own as he cums hard for his sexy sister his mouth open as he pants and moans with his release.

As he comes down from his climax his gaze lands back on the jackal he so dearly cares for, his length on the other hand showing how much he lusts for her by remaining just as hard as before his length throbbing and pulsing as he looks over her form barely able to find his voice, "Fuck...Sissy I want you so badly right now."

She smiles looking up at her handsome wolf brother before a devious and lustful thought enters her head, leaning forward and patting the bed, "Bubba, come here, we're gonna have some fun."

He straddles her grinning lustfully his aching cock throbbing and dripping precum, small droplets of precum landing on her fur, "Mmm...like this sissy?"

She smiles up at the wolf and rubs his sides gently, "Mmm...perfect bubba, now don't move."

She slides out from under him and winks, as she opens her nightstand pulling out a moderately sized canine shaped length, a bottle of simple lubricant, and a harness. She grins as she walks slowly behind him, his cheeks flushed, visible even though his fur as he shyly lifts his tail for her exposing his tender little hole hidden between his slightly muscular cheeks. Her fingertips teasingly touch and trace over his tight hole making him shiver ever so slightly before the sensation leaves.

She slides the harness on the front having a set of clasps allowing for any sort of toy to be used for any sort of situation, though at the moment the only toys on her mind were the canid shaped silicone length in her paw and her brother's trembling bottom in front of her. She calmly slide the length though the harness shivering slightly as the base pressed against her clit in a firm yet not uncomfortable way, before she locked it into the harness.

Her paw gripping the end of the length and pulling it forward to generously apply lubricant to the base before working her paws over the rest of the length giving her toy a handjob as the base rubbed ever so pleasantly against her wet lips and clit. Her paws then moved to the wolf's bottom, spreading it and pouring lubricant over his tight, clenched hole, making him shiver. Her fingers gently prodded his hole working the slick liquid over the surface before gently pushing in, making him blush deeply for her as he let free a soft moan his maleness never having lost even a tiny bit of it's raging erection.

Her face takes on a tiny smirk as she determines that he is ready for her pressing the firm tip of her toy to his hole, "I love you Loki."

He smiles and blushes, "I love you too, Jackieee!" He moans out at the end as she takes the chance to push her toy in several inches spreading his tight hole around her, turning his head to give her a playful glare as she sticks her tongue out at him half of the seven inch toy buried into his bottom.

She leans over him her soft breasts pressed against his back, her hard nipples sliding though his fur and pressing against his skin. Her hips rocking forward slowly making the artificial knot kiss on his hole over and over again listening to the soft, padded slaps of her hips hitting his bottom and his length hitting against his own body because of his arousal, wrapping her arms around him and kissing on his neck. She shivers slightly as the movement from the base of the toy makes her leak her own natural lubricant.

He gasps and blushes as he feels his sister's 'length' pushing deep inside him, the knot rubbing teasingly over his hole. His cock slaps wetly against himself leaving his precum on his fur, his heavy orbs churning with seed for his sister as she fucks him steadily.

"Oh god Jackie, that feels so good you're so skilled with that toy!" His head hangs slightly, panting as she thrusts into him, the toy rubbing over his hidden button as she thrusts, feeling her hot breath on his neck as she takes him.

She bites playfully on his neck as she thrusts faster the feeling of the toy rubbing against her lower lips and her clit getting more and more powerful her body starting to shake slightly as she gets closer and closer to climax. Wrapping her arms around her brother as she thrusts harder the faux knot ramming against his hole wanting to tie with her brother so badly to give him what he has given her so many times before.

They scream out almost in unison as she pushes the knot into her brother her pussy spasming violently trying to clench without anything to clench on as she shakes with her orgasm, her brother faring no better as his cock slaps repeatedly against his own stomach as he releases spurt after spurt of his seed onto himself and the bedspread his body shaking as he keeps releasing his seed before his arms give out collapsing on the bed the two of them falling asleep together.

Later that night her eyes open her arms still around her brother and the toy buried in him nuzzling against his fur as she undoes the harness leaving the toy tied inside his, in her opinion, cute bottom, and licks on his neck. A soft sigh escapes her lips as she enjoys the feeling of her brother's warmth in her arms. Frustratingly though for her sleep seemed unwilling to return to her, but her lust seemed more the willing to flare up leaving her netherlips already wet and eager for pleasure again. She catches herself gently rubbing across them with her fingertips and sighing with pleasure. Suddenly she freezes up when she hears her brother let free a lustful growls and shift beside her her eyes flicking up to his to see if he's awake and if she woke him.

Her body relaxes, seeing his eyes still closed but, a more devious part of her also noticed that he had shifted and that his large, blue, precum-glistening length, had fully released from it's sheath, only making her lust grow hotter. A slight smile crosses her muzzle as she thinks of a great way to welcome her brother home, leaning in and carefully taking his precum-slick length into her mouth as he fingers continue to gently work to care for her own need.

Loki sighs happily as his dreams turn even more lustful as his sister bobs her head slowly on his length. The slight slurping and murring on his aching length as her head slowly slides up and down over his shaft making it throb all the harder.

The jackal murrs happily the taste of precum and the throbbing of his length only assuring her that she is in fact giving him the blowjob of his life, her body shivering slightly as her slightly overeager paw brushes against her clit roughly, sending a spike of almost painful pleasure up her spine making her moan with lust on her brother's length. Her rapidly increasing lust spurring her to only bob faster on his length working him with a greedy insatiable lust.

The unconscious wolf bucks his hips slightly as his lust grows his sister only able to wonder at what his dream is about as she watches his balls draw tighter to his body and his knot swell out rapidly. His murrs pick up in volume and in frequency as her own fingertip work even more eagerly as her own lust grows though from her actions on herself or on her brother she isn't sure nor did she truly care, feeling so close to the edge before finally, a thick jet of cream hits her tongue as her brother let out a soft dominant snarl his tailhole clenching on the buried toy as his fat cock spasmed starting to fill her mouth with his seed, although rapidly overflowing it only proving more so that he was as pent up as he claimed. Though some would say the taste was salty or even bitter to her there were few tastes she would claim to like more then the taste of her brother's release though little time could be afforded to such thoughts as the taste of his climax brought hers on like a freight train making her shake as she drank down his seed. Her sweet slit dripping her fluids over her hand and onto the bedspread as they enjoyed their simultaneous release, though the wolf remained blissfully unaware.

A soft yawn escaped her muzzle as she released his still hard length as she snuggled close to him feeling it's warmth between their bodies as she joined him again in sleep. His arms instinctively wrapping around her and holding her close. Her muzzle nuzzling against his chest smearing some of his split seed there from her messy muzzle

The jackal jerks awake with a gasp and a violent spasm, hearing a metallic clink as her arms refused to move more then an inch, her legs pulling back away from the foot of her bed. Her eyes foggy with sleep but rapidly clearing to see her brother there still standing as naked as last night with a small downy feather in hand, his chestfur slightly matted with the seed she left there and his length throbbing proudly showing a new sheen of precum. He smirks at her bewildered look, "Morning little jackal your big brother has a treat for you but you have to be awake first."

The wolf grips her left leg tight and drags the feather between her tender toes watching her spasm and attempt to kick her foot her eyes jerking back to spot the handcuffs he put on her while she enjoyed her rest. She squirms and screams out, "B-but HAHAHA but Bubba I am awake!"

He smiles as he drags the soft feather down her pads, which are still showing clues of their lewd activity the night before, "Hmmm...I don't think so sis, after all you woke up to drain me a little more after all you must still be very tired I think."

She kicks at the sheets removing any chance of hiding her body from him as he tickles her, her eyes closing tight as he body jerks without any true control, "B-bu-bubba Please! HAHAHAHA! OH OH GOD PLEASE!"

He grins evilly, "Oh keep going? I'm go glad you asked me to Sissy. I love tickling your cute paws" He slides the feather between her toes the unbearable texture of the downy feather making her arch up off the bed slightly.

"OH GOD BUBBA PLEASE I CAN'T STAND IT PLEASE STOP! AHHAHAHAHAHAHA!"Her body jerks and squirms violently the handcuffs rattling almost taunting her at her inability to escape her 'mean' brother.

He sighs softly looking down at her with love, "Hmmm....well only because you asked so nicely Sissy." He tosses the feather aside and kisses her pad in almost a romantic fashion, smirking up at her.

She sighs and shakes her head as she recovers, "Cheeky bastard, I hope you made breakfast to make up for surprising me with that you big jerk."

His grin grows as he smiles up at her reaching down out of her sight, "Kinda, the same sort of breakfast for me as the the midnight snack you helped yourself to last night, Sissy." he says watching her blush and squirm softly as she takes his meaning, "With a slight twist." he waggles a small bottle in the shape of a bear, the amber liquid inside seeming to just perfectly catch the light of the morning sun as he joins her on the bed, sitting above her and opening the bottle.

She gasps softly as her brother starts to drizzle the honey onto her nipple both already having hardened when she realized his devious intent with the sweet liquid. The coolness of it making her shiver and, if anything, make her nipples even harder. The wolf keeps the playful smile on his face as he pours the liquid into her fur making it flow down over her breasts even so that is starts to drip on the bedding, down her stomach, pouring a pool of it into her navel, down her waist, teasingly zig zagging it just above her groin before using his fingers and spreading her lower lips and pouring it straight into her, her body shaking and squirming as the cool liquid fights the burning heat of her greedy slit. He leans in almost like he is going to lick her right then before blowing cool air against her heated hole. And then drizzling the honey down her left leg focusing particularly on her her tender footpaw of course letting the honey completely coat it before moving to do the same to her other leg.

Her face is now feels like it's a raging inferno from how hot her blush is feeling like a dessert tray for her brother, the feeling isn't lessened by the predatory look on his face as he admires his handiwork. He sets the half-empty bear on the nightstand before moving in eagerly, oddly enough his first target being her bare neck which makes her sigh softly before speaking, "Bubba...there's no honey there..."

He looks up at her when he pulls away with mock surprise, "Really, sorry Sissy it's so hard to tell, you already taste so sweet." A playful smirk on his face as he speaks.

She sighs and shakes her head, "Bubba you're lucky I'm still handcuffed or I'd bob you for something that sappy."

She looks like she's about to say more but her words evaporate to a sigh of pleasure as his tongue drags over her soft breast the tip just barely catching her nipple as he 'cleans' her left breast. The thick honey making his tongue work for it's reward as the jackal just enjoys his 'work'.

The wolf murrs happily as he licks taking her nipple into his mouth and suckling the honey off as he listens to his sister enjoy. He drags his teeth gently over her sensitive nub as he works her left breast as clean as his tongue can get it her fur matted with his saliva and traces of the honey as he moves over to her other breast making sure to licks between the two lovely mounds of soft flesh before he gets back to 'work' on the other, he shudders as his length seems to pulse with each drag of his tongue across her flesh, starting to add to the fluids on her fur in small drops.

The trapped jackal squirms her handcuffs rattling against the headboard as she instinctively squirms from the sensations, the wolf finishing off her breasts allowing her a slight reprieve as he works over her stomach slowly. Suddenly her body jerks and spasms as his tongue slides into her navel making her squirm and giggle, the sensation not as powerful as the feather on her footpaws but still quite ticklish as the wolf smirks up at you dipping his tongue over and over again into her belly-button.

Only too soon for the tickle loving wolf however he looses his excuse to tickle her stomach with his tongue and continues lower licking her waist clean and starting to lick over her slit, giving her slow tender licks inside her honey filled 'honeypot' tasting her arousal mixed easily with the honey, the combination tasting even sweeter to her brother as he happily laps inside of her, enjoying one of his favorite activities as she moans and sighs.

The handcuffs tugging almost harder now then when she was tickled as he brother works her so pleasantly her hands curling into fists and relaxing as his tongue seems to work her perfectly removing every bit of honey it can reach inside her tight hole, each gentle lick driving her closer and closer to a climax that she could do little to prevent even if she wanted to. The wolf murring loudly as he feels his sister's slit dampening further and her legs squirming as her climax rapidly approaches before, she lets out a soft moan of pleasure the slow licking allows her a soft, shuddering climax with the wolf 'cleaning her up'.

He smirks before moving to her legs as he licks slowly down over her right leg, cleaning her fur of the honey as he goes down to her footpaws so recently teased by the feather, now completely coated in honey that the wolf starts to gleefully clean with slow, teasing, licks enough to make her blush and squirm but not quite enough to make her laugh. His tongue sliding over her toes, and on her pads, occasionally slipping between them as he enjoys his 'task', the playful situation rapidly climbing up his list of fun things to do with footpaws. The jackal blushes as she watches her brother enjoy her soft footpaws, his tongue making her face heat and color as he works his tongue over them, cleaning her of the honey. As her paws become clean he gently kisses each of them before licking back up her other leg, to clean it and finish the 'job'.

He smiles up at her from her crotch as he speaks with his playful tone, "Mmm...best breakfast I've had in a very long time sis, wouldn't you agree?"

She giggles at the bad joke, "I would but, you're the only one who ate, so why don't you undo these handcuffs so I can use the honey to 'eat' too but then we should shower, I still kinda feel a little 'sticky' inside Bubba."

He walks up past her head and leans over to undo the handcuffs, his tail wagging softly as he unlocks them, letting her see the toy still locked inside his bottom. He catches her line of sight and leans down whispering against her lips before kissing her, "I love you Sissy..."