A Final Song
#1 of Tears Of A Fox
Hi everyone who reads this story of mine. This is my first attempt at writing a story, so please, only constructive criticism, anything except spelling errors. I would still appreciate knowing about it if one of you sees an error and I didn't. Also, depending on how well it is recieved, it might also be my last... Secondly, i would like to dedicate this story to two of my favourite authours, SPAMZZKRR and Chaos Lord. The song at the end of the story is, in fact, an actual song. It is called "Take Me On The Floor" and it is composed by the Veronicas. If you would like to hear the whole song, as well as the rhythm and all those other things, here is the youtube link: http://au.youtube.com/watch?v=jIlPP\_FGExo .Also, I am going to take this chance to point out the KRR, KRRS and CNR series written by SPAMZZKRR, one of my biggest idols. Other than this, I hope that everyone enjoys my story! d(-_-)b _____________________________________________________________________________ Chloe was a beautiful, 16 year old dusty brown fox with a couple of gold highlights. She had a cute face and an even cuter tail. She owed all her beauty to her mother, who's willowy grace had won her many a competition. One day, she was lying on her bed, listening to her favourite song, at her speaker's max volume. "Chloe! Turn that racket down!" shouted Chloe's mum, from the other end of the house, "I can hear it from here!" "It's not racket!" shouted Chloe indignantly, "It's music!" "Still, can you please turn it down for a minute?" She did, authough reluctantly. "Thank you. Now, I'm going out to the shops for a while, so don't misbehave. And please don't let me catch you with your music at full blast again." "OK..." Chloe sighed There was a brief silence. "Well," Chloe's mum said, "I'm going to head off now. Remember, don't misbehave, don't have your music up to high and I'll always love you." With that, she walked out the door. As soon as Chloe heard her mum leave, she turned her music back up. _____________________________________________________________________________ A little while later, Chloe was still laying on her bed listening to her song at the absolute maximum setting of her speakers. Because of this, she didn't hear the footsteps behind her. Suddenly, she felt a sharp pain in the back of her neck, and she blacked out. A couple of minutes later, she woke up. At first, she thought that nothing had happened, because her music was still going. Then she noticed that her hands and legs were tied to her bedposts. And the ball-gag in her mouth. And she was naked. She started to panic, straining to get free of her bonds, without success. Finally, she dropped back onto her bed with exhaustion, her fur glistening with sweat. "Aww..." a creepy voice from behind her said, "I hope you aren't too tired" Chloe tried to see who was behind her, but the way she was bound prevented that. She suddenly noticed a strange feeling, a sense of fullness, if you will. "Ah, you've noticed it have you?" Asked the strange voice. Suddenly, a figure swept into view. It was a massive grizzly bear, and his 14 inch cock was already fully erect. He then picked up a remote controller from off her bedside table and pressed a button. A loud humming noise filled the room as the dildo started to vibrate in her ass. He then climbed onto the bed and started fucking her. All the way. For close to an hour, Chloe was torn beween sheer agony and complete extacy as he continued to rape her. As she was about to orgasm, however, he suddenly stopped, and turned off the dildo. He shoved his hand up her ass (much to her displeasure) and pulled out the dildo. Next, he rolled her onto her stomach and re-inserted the dildo into her still-wet pussy. Then, he turned back on the dildo and started to rape her again, this time, though, up her ass. This continued for about half an hour untill Chloe felt as if something had snapped inside of her, and suddenly she started to orgasm. And boy, did she orgasm! She started squirting all over her bed and on the bear, and he finally withdrew. "At least," she thought, "It's over now" And she was right, in a way. She heard a sick 'schlick' sound, like a sword being pulled out of it's scabbard, and she felt something cold and sharp being placed against her throat. Then she felt an almost unbearable amount of pain around her neck and she went limp, bleeding horrific amounts of blood onto the bed. And as she laid there, feeling her lifeforce draining out of her, she heard the final notes of her song: "You kill me, you kill me, please don't stop"