Ever the Skeptic

Story by Undefined_Apathy on SoFurry

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#1 of Mind Control

Hello this is my first Hypnosis submission. I'm a rather big fan of mind control stories so you can bet there will be others another time. I hope you all enjoy this one.

Melody, ever the skeptic, finds herself ready to debunk yet another performance. This time by the charming lapin hypnotist though this time she may be getting more than she ever expected. It certainly never pays to make too many enemies in life.


Melody was never one to buy into flashy performances. Be it the magician pulling a rabbit from his hat, the guy on the infomercial praising the miracle hair growth formula, and especially those hypnotists who always claimed to be able to make a person do anything. She was the type who made her skepticism known, and did so proudly. She'd ruined a magician's show or two in her time by pointing out the obvious mechanism of his trick. It was almost something fun for her to do, a hobby perhaps.

On this day the young golden furred vixen had caught word of a hypnotist in town who was going to be doing a show and one of her favorite hang out spots. The ever annoyed fem decided she'd go and pay him a visit, eager to see him try and fail like all the others. It wasn't anything too fancy, and she chose to dress herself modestly. She wore a simple little red dress that flowed gracefully down to her knees. The fabric clinging to her curved figure showing off her hips while keeping her breasts modest. To top it all off a cute little pair of high heels, the vixen was certainly ready for the show.

She made her way into the little club and stepped inside. The place had been dolled up a bit for the show. The tables were spread in a curiously symmetric manner, nice show white table clothes on the left side of the room, and dark black clothes on the right. She found it strange enough to inquire and was informed by one of the hostess that it was a request by the hypnotist, apparently he was a bit obsessive about these things.

It was fairly early and so the tables were relatively cleared up. Seizing the opportunity she claimed a table on the left side which was right up front. Her soft fluffy tail swaying lightly back and forth behind her as she waited for the show to begin. It only took half an hour or so before the room became filled a wide variety of faces all about, and then she heard the voice of the guest of honor introducing himself.

"Welcome one and all!" he called out the crowd. A curious white furred bunny wearing an egotistical little smirk. Melody quickly found herself in distaste of him as he stepped out onto the stage, "Today we're going to take a journey" he spoke as the spotlight came on over him in his place center stage. The lapine was very well dressed. He was wearing a rather expensive tuxedo that must have cost him a pretty penny, even his posture reeked of an elitist personality.

"A journey into the darkest corners of the human mind" he continued, "For years we have explored the minds of man, searching for a way to unlock its secrets" he continued adding a bit of showman ship, "Today I'm here to tell you that I've discovered the secret, but I don't expect you to simply believe me" the lapine continued smirking a bit, "I shall prove my words by demonstration, though I'll need a volunteer. Would anyone care to join me on stage?" he questioned.

"Maybe I can end this quick" The vulpine thought to herself smirking with amusement. Her soft dainty hand flew up into the air as she called out, "Me! Me!" she called out, "I'll volunteer" she added and sure enough his eye turned to meet her own and he smiled before gesturing towards the canine.

"Come on up madam" he spoke in a false sort of modesty as the vixen made her way up center-stage. Suddenly another spotlight came on over herself and she stared out to the audience for a moment, "I should warn you, I'm quite the skeptic of hypnotism" she informed him.

"I know" he responded with a rather smug look on his soft face, "I've heard about you Melody" the bunny spoke, "I was actually hoping that you'd come. After all there is nothing more invigorating than making a believer out of the most stubborn of skeptics" he added. The words only made her even more annoyed with him.

"You aren't very bright bunny" she informed him, "If you knew about me, you shouldn't have brought me on stage." she warned playfully. The bunny seemed only more amused by this as he stared her over a brief moment before letting his eyes find their way to his own. For a brief moment his eyes seemed to pierce right into her own before he turned to face a chair sitting in the middle of the stage.

"Please take a seat" the smug lapine said seeming to only grow more pleased with himself with every word he uttered. Without worry or care Melody made her way over to the chair and seated herself getting comfortable, "Alright now we begin" he said pulling out a single pocket watch, "I suppose it's a little cliche, but it's my preferred method" he explained in a playful manner.

"Now just relax love" the male said in a rather charming tone of voice before he began to sway the pocket watch back and forth. Her eyes watched it flow left then right, then left then right. "You are starting to feel relaxed" the male spoke his voice rather soothing. With every swing of the watch time almost felt like it was slowing down. Her eyes focusing on the gentle swaying of the shimmering metal as he swung it back and forth. His soft words starting to relax her body. "You're getting sleepy now" he spoke, and she could feel her eyelids starting to feel heavy. The pocket watch seemed to almost stay in place now as the world slowed down around her. "Now sleep"

The vixen drifted off to sleep as the words left the performer's lips. The bunny turned to face the audience, "Now we have some fun" he said with a rather amused smirk on his face. "You are a feral dog miss Jenny" he spoke playfully, "When I snap my fingers you will awaken" he informed her, "And when I snap them again you will return to this state. Do you understand?" he questioned and the vixen nodded her head in reply. The lapin snapped his fingers.

Her eyes lifted up and she let out a loud bark which filled the room around her. The bunny smirked a bit, "Here girl!" he called patting his legs and Melody ran to him on all fours, her tail wagging behind her, "Good girl!" he praised placing a hand on her head ruffling her hair a bit before pulling a ball from his pocket, "Fetch" he commanded as he tossed the ball, and the vixen rushed off collecting the ball in her teeth before bringing it back to him. He guided her back to her seat and snapped his fingers once more. The crowd applauding his work with a round of claps that echoed throughout the room.

"Now now what do next?" he mused for a brief moment before smiling to the crowd. His attention turned back to the vixen quickly though, "Melody" he spoke in a soft tone of voice, "You are trapped" he spoke, "You're bound to your chair. You cannot move from it" he informed her, "When I snap my fingers you will wake up, and when I snap them again you will go back to this state." with that he snapped his fingers.

"What the hell?" she muttered in a confused daze as she tried to lift herself from her chair. "What did you do, I'm stuck?" she muttered and wiggled around in the chair, but she couldn't seem to lift herself out of her seat, "Did you glue me?" she asked nervously squirming about as the audience offered another round of applause, and again the lapine snapped his fingers once again.

"Alright my friends, Melody has been a lovely guest." he spoke in a playful manner, "But I think we need to give everyone a chance to have some fun. I'll release her now and we can continue the show." he spoke leaning down though he whispered softly into her ear, "You belong to me dear" his soft voice ever present in her mind, "You will do as I say from now on, and more than that" he continued, "If ever a male makes a request of you, you will never be able to refuse him" the bunny spoke before leaning away from her, "Now when I snap my fingers the trance will be broken and you will awaken" he said and once again he snapped his fingers.

"Please stay here" the lapine spoke, "I could use a pretty woman by my side for the show" the male said playfully. Melody didn't even like hypnotists, but as she awoke this time his request seemed irrefutable. As if compelled she moved from her chair and stood beside him, staring out into the crowd as he went about the show. He'd have one man walking around like a duck, and some woman try to swim across the stage among various other little hilarious bits he'd concocted before finally the show came to an end.

"Come along dear vixen" the male spoke and once more she found herself compelled to follow along behind him. The bunny lead her to his dressing room back stage. It was a modest area, a nice chair, a mirror, and an assortment of makeup for stage effects. He smiled softly and offered his hand to her, "My name is William" he spoke sweetly, "I apologize for the rather silly things I've made you do" he added though his tone still seemed fake.

"Relax, it's nothing" she muttered, "I'm honestly surprised. I never imagined that the hypnotism stuff could actually work." Melody told him her eyes scanning around the room. Her tail idly swaying behind her as the bunny waited for a brief moment. Once he was sure that the crowd had dispersed and the stage hands had left he smirked up to her.

"Now now Melody, you've ruined quite a few of my former colleges" William spoke eying her over, "If I didn't owe a few of them a favor or two I wouldn't so much mind this" he continued, "But they wished to see you humiliated the same way you humiliated them." he went on to explain. The vixen tensed up a bit at his sudden change of tone.

"Now be a good girl and head back on stage, wait for me there. I have some calls to make" the bunny informed her. She wasn't sure why, but she couldn't even speak to oppose him. As if by some sort of magic, her own thought became to waltz herself back center-stage. There she patiently waited on the bunny to meet her.

After a few moments she noticed a handful of men entering the room. Her eyes immediately recognized some as magician's she'd previous debunked. Her heart began to race a bit, and she wished to leave. Some part of her, however, was holding her back. She couldn't explain it, but she was compelled to wait until the hypnotist returned. Though soon enough she heard footsteps coming from behind her.

"Welcome gentlemen!" came the lapine's voice, "Melody, please wave to our guests" and as he spoke the canine raised a hand and waved back to the men seated up front, "I believe you know why you're here. In fact the only one who is probably uncertain would be our guest of honor." his focus turned to her, "Now my dear. I think you deserve an explanation given that it's far too late for you to resist anyways" William added menacingly.

"You see, we're all here to make a show of you" the bunny added, "and I know that you won' refuse us" he added, "You can't refuse us" he continued, "You are after all the star performer, and we all tend to get our use of your particular talent" he added, "But first. Would you be a doll and undress yourself. I'm feeling a bit lazy myself. Not too fast though, a good show requires a good strip tease, take your time." he continued.

With little thought, and no control the vixen stared out into the crowd. Her hand moved to the dress and gently she began to peel it away. Her ears quickly filled with the sounds of a few cat calls from the audience as she slipped the dress past her left shoulder. Her hands continued to move on her own slipping the dress from her right shoulder next. She then began to slide the dress down her form her breasts quickly becoming exposed. The heavy mounds bouncing freely as she revealed herself. Before long the only thing to keep her decent was a pair of cute little black panties which hugged her hips.

"Come on dear, panties too" the lapin spoke with a smirk. As the words left his lips she slid the panties down her form leaving herself completely exposed, "Now I suppose for this to be a proper show, you should lie on your back and part those legs of yours" as he spoke the words she moved onto her back and spread apart her legs showing off her delicate slit and tight rear, "Good girl, now play with yourself for a bit, and be sure to moan and let us know how good it feels. I have a few minor details to sort out with the boys" he informed her.

William slipped off stage and began to speak to the group of men in private. While he talked to them the canine woman moved a hand down between her legs. Gently she touched against her slit drawing a soft little whimper from her lips. Her fingertips teasing along her delicate folds, gliding up to teasingly play with her clit as she pleasured herself center-stage for the audience. As she began to explore her own sex, dipping a finger inside her moans picked up a bit.

The audience and the rabbit allowed her to continue for some time. Her pussy was dripping wet, and her moans were echoing around the room when William spoke once more, "Now dear, that's enough of that. These kind gentleman have have volunteered to be a part of the show. I'm sure you won't mind." he spoke with a smug tone of voice.

The first to step onto the stage was a tiger. His fur a soft shade of yellow with all the accompanying stripes one might expect of his breed. He was fairly large in stature, and quite muscular his cold eyes glaring down to the vixen spread out on the flood. He moved over to the chair still center-stage and spoke, "Come here slut and unzip me. I've got a treat for ya" his voice was rather gruff, and his tone demeaning.

Again with that strange sense of compulsion the vixen moved between the tiger's legs. Without hesitation she unzipped the tiger's pants bringing a smirk to his lips, "Good girl, now how's about you fish out what I've got hiding in there?" he suggested and she did as told. The girl worked away his boxers and pulled out the male's thick uncut length. His scent quickly filling her nose.

"Now now Melody" came the voice of the lapine, "Remember this is a show, do remember to take your time and be a good girl" he informed her in a demeaning tone.

"Get to it slut, show me what you can do with those lips" the tiger spoke. The vixen gently parted her lips wrapping them around the male's length. The room quickly filling with the lewd sounds of the woman sucking on thick tiger meat. Her tongue exploring around the male's head. The tiger offering a pleasured sound of his own as he gripped the vixen's head guiding her faster up and down his length.

"Damn! Should've known that a bitch like you would be still be good for something" the tiger spoke, "Almost makes up for ruining my act" he moaned out as she bobbed her head up and down his size the male's pre dripping onto her tongue. The taste unpleasant to the vixen, but slowly and skillfully she continued with the taste working her lips over his arousal.

"Alright, now for some fun" the tiger spoke and suddenly pushed her head down his thick cock, making her gag a bit as he forced her head to meet his crotch. Her nose filling with his musky scent as he began to roughly thrust his hips working his cock in and out of her hot lips and down her throat. The male seeming to have zero regard for the canine pleasuring him as he continued to face fuck her.

"Damn bitch a..almost there" he growled out in a dominant manner as his thrusting grew more fierce. Suddenly though he pulled completely out of her lips, "Open wide slut" he commanded as her lips parted and he gripped his own shaft stroking it eagerly before suddenly his head tilted back and he cried out in pleasure shooting his hot load over her face. Coating her face in his seed. The white sticky substance covering her cheeks some spilling onto her tongue as he finished.

"I might just have to do this again doll" the tiger praised gripping her head once more to whip off any that'd gotten on his own cock on her face. Without another word he walked off stage and left the building seeming satisfied with himself. The next to step up was a rather gruff looking wolf who stared her over with cold predatory eyes.

"You look good covered in cum" he told her, "It's proper for a bitch, but now I have to step up the performance, it's only appropriate" the wolf continued. He undid his pants and let them fall exposing his already throbbing arousal. The thick red meat, with that hot knot right at eye level with her. "Keep those lips parted, I've got something for you too" he spoke.

Her lips were till parted when the wolf gripped his shaft aiming it at the vixen. He sighed softly as she would suddenly feel his warm yellow stream pouring over her cum stained face. The scent of the wolf burning into her nose as his urine washed into her fur and filled her mouth, some of it dripping down over her breasts. "Good girl, but you look thirsty" he spoke playfully down to her, "Wrap your lips around my cock and have a drink" he commanded.

She was unable to resist as she moved closer. The wolf even forcing himself to stop midstream to ensure there was plenty for her to enjoy. When her lips wrapped around his thick length he released himself again. The warm piss flowed into her lips filling her with the strong taste as she began to drink it up gulping down mouthful after mouthful. The wolf seeming to enjoy ever moment. The audience also seemed rather amused with the performance.

Once his stream tapered off he pushed Melody onto her back and smirked down to her, "Spread them legs bitch" he told her and she parted her legs for him, "I think it's time you had a proper man show you a good time" he said before quickly moving between her legs. A soft moan leaving her lips as he grinded his thick red meat over her delicate slit.

The wolf didn't waste anytime. He lined himself up with her heated sex and with a rough thrust pushed himself past her delicate folds. "Damn your tight slut" he moaned to her as he began to rock his hips in and out of her cunt, savoring the feeling of her tight walls gripping him, "Be a good bitch and moan for me" he told her as he continued pump himself in and out of her. The vixen starting to moan out with every thrust inside of her.

The wolf was panting at this point furiously working himself into her pussy. Savoring the feeling of the girl's sex as he rocked his hips. She was moaning and clinging to the wolf as he abused her sex giving no care for her as he continued to thrust, "Get ready, I'm gonna stuff you full" he moaned out to her as he gave one rough thrust making her whine out as his knot popped into her sex stretching Melody out.

"Damn, I think I can forgive you for ruining my act. So long as you're willing to let me use this cunt of yours whenever I like" the wolf teased his thrust becoming quick and short as he'd buried his bone deep into her. His hips eagerly rocking before suddenly he sank his teeth into her shoulder and growled dominantly his cock erupting inside of her flooding her with his seed.

"Now I think a good bitch should thank her man for letting her have his cum" the wolf teased, "So thank me"

"Thank you" she moaned softly to him, and before long he managed to free his knot walking off leaving her cunt dripping his cum.

"Alright, who's next?" the bunny called out, and a large brutish looking bull took to the stage carrying a fairly large sized toy in his hand.

"Take this" he said and tossed it to the vixen, who caught it. The toy was a pretty big dildo, and the bully smirked down to her, "I want to see you take that all the way into your tight little ass" the bull commanded.

Without thought the feline moved onto her knees, setting the toy between her legs. Gently she lowered herself down feeling it pushing against her tight virgin backdoor. With a light whimper of pain her walls began to give way as the first few inches of the toy pushed into her back entrance.

"Good girl" the bull praised, gently rubbing the bulge in his pants as he watched the girl. The vixen was starting to rock her hips on the toy, panting as she did. Inch after thick inch pushing inside of her. Her walls stretched around the toy as she continued to work it into herself. Before long the bull was undoing his pants as she managed to hilt the plaything into her backdoor.

"Onto all fours, ass facing the audience" the bull commanded. Melody gently moved onto all fours, the toy still wedged firmly inside of her ass. The large brutish male moved behind her and placed his hand on the toy. "Damn slut, you might just be able to take me after all" he said as he began to work the toy in and out of her ass himself. Melody moaning out as he did, the bull making sure to keep a very rapid pace showing off for the audience.

Suddenly he completely withdrew the toy before bringing it down to her cunt lips, "Well just keep this here for now" he spoke as he pushed the toy into her cunt, making her gasp loudly. Once the toy was hilted he moved to stand right behind her gripping her hips, "Now lets see how you handle me" he spoke.

He made quick work of pulling his pants away from himself. The male's own cock much larger than either of the two before him. Very thick, and as it began to rub between her cheeks the vixen shivered lightly eyes looking back to him, "Damn I can already tell you're gonna be a fun one" he spoke as he pressed himself against her backdoor.

Even with the toy to loosen the girl up the bull had to work at it a bit before her tight anal passage was stretching around his large girth. She whimpered in pain as he stretched her out, and before she could get a word in he was pushing inch after thick inch into her tight walls. The bull not seeming to mind her sounds of pain as he worked into that tight backdoor.

"Damn, I don't think you're gonna sit right for awhile" the bull teased as he held her hips firmly. The girl's body starting to adjust to his size letting him work his hips into a steady rhythm inside of her. His hips smacking against her rear with every thrust, the force pushing her forward a bit as he eagerly worked himself into her tight ass. Moaning with content as he continued to abuse the girl's formerly virgin entrance.

Before long though he was reaching his peak. With little thought of her he eagerly began to roughly pound that hot ass of Melody's. Within a few moments he had one of his hands firmly locked into her hair and pulled her head back as he slammed himself deep into her ass and began to pump his thick ropes of cum into her. The cum leaking around his thick meat and dripping down her ass. The bull panted for a moment, but as he caught her breath he pulled out and made his own way out.

"What a show!" William spoke, having remained silent thus far, "Our guest of honor is quite the treat" he spoke looking down to her, "Now be a good girl and smile for me" he spoke and as she smiled he pulled out a camera snapping a few pictures, "Well I suppose there are a few more guests who haven't had a turn, but time is running short" the bunny said and looked out to the three remaining guests, "Gentlemen you'll have to share or we'll run out of time" he informed them.

The three didn't seem to mind in the slightest. The remaining there were: a rather lithe fox boy, a muscular young stallion, and a heavyset bear. The three looked the girl over for a moment before the fox boy moved to press his crotch against her face, "Come on girl, get to sucking" he spoke and he didn't need to say anymore as she fished out his cock and began to suck on his thick canine meat.

The other two decided that meant they had to split her ass and cunt. The stallion moved behind the girl positioning his thick length with her sloppy rear and thrust himself deep into her tight ass, feeling the slick cum of the previous male helping lube his large girth enter her backside. It only too a moment for him to build up rhythm.

The bear smirked and moved between her legs as well. He took the toy and pulled it away from her cunt tossing it carelessly behind him. The heavyset male thrust himself suddenly into her cunt, and began to work himself into a steady rhythm. Keeping it in sync with the stallion's own thrusts, creating maximum sensation for the vixen sandwiched between them.

Melody's body felt on fire. The two large males slamming themselves inside of her drawing moans from her lips which vibrated around the canine meat between her lips. The fox guiding her head along his thick shaft as his own hips eagerly worked into her. The bear and Stallion both seemed content with their wild thrusts slamming themselves into her eagerly.

"Damn slut, you really know how to work a guy" the bear growled out to her as his thrusts became a bit more frantic. It wasn't much longer and he'd prove to be the first to reach his peak. His hips would slam roughly into her cunt as he began to pump a second load into her hot little sex, letting it drip down between her legs as he made his own way out.

The canine was eagerly humping her face. Her lips were like heaven to the boy as he bucked wildly. She was skillfully sucking his thick meat, and the boy found himself quickly reaching his peak. He whimpered out softly as he suddenly slammed his hips into her supple lips and unloaded his seed right down her throat, pulling out to let the last few drops spill over her face. The boy panting a moment before stumbling out himself.

Only the stallion was left now, and he too was finding himself unable to hold back any longer. He reached up and groped the woman's breasts massaging them between his rough hands as he slammed himself into her tight ass. The stud not seeming to mind as his pace quickened suddenly. Before long he was slamming himself to the hilt inside of her and unloaded his seed deep into her hot little ass. The male kept himself buried for a bit before pulling out and making his own way out.

"I guess it's just you and me love" William spoke, eying over the girl. She was laying on the stage panting heavily. Her face covered in cum and piss, and her holes were leaking with male seed. He smirked a bit eying his prize, "Now now, there's no sleeping on the job. This was only the first show. Clean yourself up, we have another set of guests arriving very soon."