The Camping Trip
My first story EVER would like some tips on what i could do to make it better
My First Story
You would think that life begins when you are born but for me life didn't start till I was 17. I wasn't a normal teen and I knew it! I mean don't get me wrong I had problem just like all the other kids but mine was more mental. I had Asperger's syndrome. That meant that not only did I feel different but I thought differently too. I could never relate to people my age. So I was that kid that you see at lunchtime sitting all by himself eating. Nobody knew I existed. So when I went camping by myself no one noticed me absent! Though the last camping trip was the best by far that was the day I became a somebody!
I started out my day the same way I always do by waking up at 7:00. But today was a Saturday and the beginning of summer! So I jumped into the shower and took my time after brushing my braise covered teeth I walked down the hall to the kitchen and took my 5 pills I have to take each morning 2 red pills, 2 white capsules with green stripes and a single green pill (for my Aspersers). I then remembered what today was and rushed out the front door with my already packed bags to the car. I wasn't rich so I had a black Nissan armada with the typical comfort package, which consisted of a Nav system and a rear DVD player. I had just recently bought it so it was still shiny. The night before I had loaded it with all the supplies and gear for my trip. I pulled out onto the street and was off to a park in upper Texas. I got to the campsite and found the whole park deserted. I thought nothing of it and set all my stuff up starting with the tent.
I had arrived at the park at about 6 o'clock so I was in a rush to get my tent up. Having finished the tent I started to unpack the rest of the gear when a meteor shot over my head and into the forest. Being a curious person I dropped everything, forgetting to even close the trunk, and ran over to where I saw it land. When I got close enough to the crash spot I started to hear noises the sounded like hissing, but it was weak and sounded like it was forced. I mad my way towards the hole and saw what looked to be a rock in a perfect sphere shape. I climbed down into the crater and discovered that it only looked perfect but was cracked open with the contents lying there looking like it was dead! As I got closer I was amazed to find a snake-lizard thing. The creature looked like it was the size of a large rat. It had golden eyes and jet-black skin, no not skin it was too shiny! The head and tail was that of a cobra but when you looked at the middle it had hands and a penis that was fully erect.
"Do you like what you see?" a soft but seductive voice said.
"Who is there!?" I asked scared and a little confused
"Look down you fool!!" it replied a little louder.
The creature at my feet looked at me with its golden eyes. At that moment I was trapped staring into those eyes. Unable to look away I noticed that I was reaching down to pick up the creature. As my fingers touched the body of the creature I realized that it was indeed not skin but some sort of liquid but that felt solid. I had so many questions but could not speak for some odd reason.
"My body was not listening to me!" I screamed into my head
"Do not worry human I will make you whole" the creature in my hand replied
"How can you hear my thoughts?" I questioned
"My kind are gifted with the ability to read minds." it bragged
The next thing I knew I was being held prisoner in my own head my body not responding to my commands. I was directed back to my campsite and into my tent. I then set the creature down and was given back control over my body. By now the creature looked healthy and unhurt.
"Human I have answered your questions. So I will ask again, do you like what you see?" It questioned.
In my head I was screaming "hell ya" but I responded with "What?"
"Why do you lie and hide your true desires human? Have you forgotten that I can hear your thoughts? Let me fulfill those desires and make you whole." the snake said.
"What do you mean whole?" I asked
"Humans are flawed with soft flesh out sides and dulled senses. I can transform you and make you in my image. " It enticed
"Would it be pain full?" I was a bit concerned but was too curious to really think straight
"I have never converted a human before, many species find it rather pleasurable, while others have experienced extreme pain. But none have died as result. But judging from your anatomy it should not even hurt but be stimulating to you."
Being a single guy and gay I was all for "stimulation" even if it was from an alien and besides the self-pleasuring was getting really old.
"Well what are you waiting for? Lets get started." I asked
With my answer given the serpent grew larger in size enough to where to it looked at me eye to eye. After which it slithered behind me and started to claw at my clothes. The next second I felt it rock hard cock inching its way into me. I was shocked. The next feeling was a stabbing pain emanating from my shoulder and as I turned my head I saw it had bitten me! After that I lost all feeling in my body and fell backwards onto the creature that held me up with its tail. The pleasure built as the serpent dove deeper and deeper into me. I heard a moan escape my mouth. When all of the sudden at the exact same moment we both cum the snake cum being alien felt warm inside my body and started my rebirth. After that I blacked out. The next thing I know I am a mirror image of the creature. I have been reborn a new flawless and perfect creature that is known to the world as a naga.